Ornaments of Prosperity
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Title (4/5)
I love the title. It is as elegant as the rest of your story features but I cannot fully grasp the plot to determine if it is an appropriate/perfect title for the story.
Foreward/Description (7/10)
A classy feel but once again doesnt give me an insight onto what to expect.
Appearance (4/5)
Using the same words again this matches the whole elegant and classy touch but all the girls here look to be of equal status standing which from the opening chapters prove to be not so especially current state of Krystal and Taeyeon.
Plot (10/15)
I am giving you a lower score here simply because the story is only at the beginning stage.
I would like to first compliment you on your outstanding story-writing skills and the level of sophistication brought into the whole layout. The effort put into even designing a signature/logo for your story is nice. The art used for each chapter is also a notable effort.
The level of maturity and sophistication you have brought into AFF is fresh but it may not appeal to the general audience.
Plot wise I like how you're slowly bringing in each character through events and relationships but I am still clueless as to the direction of the story.
Originality (15/15)
Full marks here based on reasons as per mentioned above.
Grammer & Spelling (20/20)
Nothing to penalize here. You are great with words and language.
Flow (9/10)
As I mentioned above, well done in bringing in the characters into the story. Slow start but smooth transition nonetheless.
Characterization (10/10)
As mentioned above, seamless integration and weaving of each character into each other's lives. First 3 main female characters (+1 Chanyeol) has been nicely brought into the story. Well done.
Overall Enjoyment (9/10)
A breath of fresh air, good read.
Reviewed by: eunhyuksgal
88/100!
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