Title (4/5)

Fitting but a tad bit boring
 
Foreward/Description (8/10)
 
Simple and straight-forward
 
Appearance (5/5)
 
Poster suits the story perfectly. No penalization here.
 
Plot (10/15)
 
Rather hard to rate the story as it is not complete; I think the focus might be when he finds the strength and proves himself as Chen.

But I have a couple of feedback for the story so far:

• I believe your focus is on Chen's emotional development and there is quite a bit of angst involved; so it might be good to have a couple of chapters in Chen's POV 
• Also in terms of emotional development; so far most of your story have been very descriptive, more insights on their feelings might help to make this story better
• The relationship development between characters can be made much more significant as well. Baek Hyun is obviously a very crucial character here and so far I've seen a few cute and gay moments but I think there relationship goes way deeper and you should focus on that
• Bonds between all the EXO members one by one should be made more impactful as well

Giving you a lower score here so there is much room for improvement and development for the following chapters ;-)

 
Originality (12/15)
 
Might be a bit on the plain side but definitely something fresh to the fanfic world; focus more on character development.
 
Grammer & Spelling (17/20)
 
Nothing major but you can improve on your phrasing, and overall standard of words.
 
Flow (8/10)
 
Chapter length and story development in each chapter is well spaced-out at a good pace. 
 
Characterization (5/10)
 
The main guy here in Chen. More in-depth character development would be good.
 
Overall Enjoyment (8/10)
 
Not a bad read definitely; looking forward to the next chapters.

Reviewed by: eunhyuksgal

77/100!