Just Great

From ... With Love

~Yumi~

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I can't say that I'm not jealous cause I was. I was looking at him, with the streetlamp as the only light and even though it was dark, I could somehow see him in front of me, lovingly talking about her like she's the entire world to him..

I was jealous..

He was with no doubt in love with this girl, not to mention the way he talks about her. He's trying to describe with the most expressful words that exists but I could hear that it wasn't easy, he wanted to use stronger and more powerful words to describe it..

I was jealous..

Jealous of that girl..

I did like the way he was making me feel nervous, the way he was talking and opening himself up to me.. and not to mention the way he was looking and smiling at me, somehow relying on me and talking to me like we've known each other for a long time..

I was actually happy that I had gotten this chance to talk to him, and it was also good that I was in the same class..
I loved spending time with him, and I really can lie here on this swing the entire night to listen to him..
To just hear him talking..
Even though it was about another girl, he was still talking to me..

"It's beautiful.." I mumbled

He looked at me, waiting for me to continue

"It's.. so beautiful.." I whispered

"What is?"

"Your feelings.."

I broke the eyecontact and faced the dark night sky where the stars where shining brightly at the moment..

"Your feelings.. In a way, you're trying your best to express your feelings, trying to find the right words, yet powerful ones in order to make me understand your feelings .. It's.. beautiful" I said and looked at him

he was watching me and soon a smile appeared on his face

"What is it?" I asked while blushing

I immediately sat up and was trying to avoid to look at him. I didn't want him to see me blush..

He chuckled

"It's.. getting cold.. do you want a ride home?"

He stood up and waited for me to answer. I looked at him. He smiled

"Kah ja.. It's really cold and I don't want to be a bad guy, letting a girl walk home alone.."

I didn't want to say no cause I didn't want to part from him, not yet. I wasn't ready for that..
I sighed disappointed since I wanted to spend more time with him, talk to him.. but I didn't want to keep him there cause that would probably make him suspicious..

He opened the car for me and I got in and he closed it, went over to the other side and soon we were on our way. I really wanted to stay in the car and talk to him, get to know him more but it's weird.. He would think that I was weird..

I sighed

"Tired?" He asked

"a bit perhaps.." I shrugged

"Is it here?"

I looked up and nodded. I told him to drive down the road, turn left and then right and soon he stopped outside my house. I didn't want to get out..
He turned off the engine and looked at me. I was nervous, but even though I was, I couldn't help but to look at his face, which was making me even more nervous

He smiled at me

"We're here..."

Both of us stayed quiet for awhile, not saying a word but then I felt the phone vibrating inside my pocket, interrupting this moment with him..
He faced the front and waited for me to get out

"Jjal ja yo.." He smiled

A bit shaky, I got out of the car and forced myself to close the door. He soon disappeared around the corner and I put my hand where my heart was beating..

Unconditionally fast, happy and just.. warm..

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~JaeJoong~

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As I was flipping with my keys, whistling my way to the schoolgate, I soon spotted a familiar girl walking a few feet in front of me..
I soon recognized that it was Yumi and I instantly smiled as I remembered our small talk yesterday

"Yumi!!"

She stopped and spun around and when she faced me, I saw her smile at me widely

"Hey !" She greeted

"How is it going?"

She shrugged

"usual.. and you? Did you sleep well?"

I nodded. We started to walk as we were heading towards school and soon we came into the subject about food which was hilarious.. she told me about her childhood, when she used to 'cook' with toys and how she always watched her mother, taking the time on how long the cooking process was and then when she was playing she put the timer on and copied her mother.. I couldn't help but laugh..

So cute..

"So what did you have for breakfast then? Sandwhich ?"

"Hmm.. I don't really like.. sandwhiches.. I like healthy food more.." She smiled

"Ahh~~ A rabbit in other words" I smiled

"Rabbit?" She gasped

I shrugged

"rabbit,, eating lots and lots of healthy stuff.. salads and such.. Aigoo~~"

"YAH!!"

She hit me on my arm as both of us laughed

"JAEJOONG!!"

I froze as soon as I heard the voice and I looked up to see Tiffany waving happily at me with the other girls..

I also saw Changmin standing with them..

"You're not going to wave back?" Yumi asked as she looked at me and the others..

"Oh .. right"

I waved back slowly and all of them smiled

"Hey.. gwenchana?"

I swallowed hard

"Nae~~.. I'm fine.. just fine" I mumbled a bit.. dazed

In fact, I wasn't fine. Wasn't she suppose to be back on Friday?
She came back earlier than expected ?

Great.. Just great..

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Vampirexy192
#1
Chapter 70: It was beautifully written. This story tugged my heart heavily. I actually stop reading this story halfway because the emotions were too much for me to handle but now I finally finished reading it. The drama was soo epic. The flow of the story was captivating me and managed to take in my emotions into it. T_T At first, it started with a lighthearted chapters and then it began to become heavier as it goes. It felt like I was there and attached with the characters. Feeling connected of what they felt in that situation. It was unbearable for me to read it. There were always the times I shed a tear every time they fell into tragedy and difficulty. Anyway, it was an incredible story. I'm happy to read this and it's also help to open my mind what does blind people experience and thoughts of their state. Love your story! ♥
db2620 #2
This story is one of the most perfect fics i've read in my whole life. The story is unpredictable and it gives me uncountable emotions :'D i cried a lot! ;(( this fic should be a drama plot omgggg 10 thumbs up for you author-nim! ♡♡
Angelz0715 #3
Chapter 70: OMG I'm crying a river T^T this is so sad but so sweet. I love it!!!
-cojjee
#4
Chapter 70: This is the second time I read this, and I still crying a river while reading it.
anneanne #5
Chapter 70: huuuuuu i just found this fic. huuuu the struggle makes me cry a river TT.TT the ending makes me cry a river too.... it's just that im so touched with the letters.. huhu im not sure that i read all part.. cause it's just too much to take ?
but in the end i read it all i guess.
anywaaaaay thanks for such a great story !!
playmirth
#6
This is the second time I finished reading this story, the first time was two years ago. And this never fails to make me cry over and over again ;A; you're a great writer I mean it.
seoleeya #7
im crying TT TT
Nainah #8
That was...absolutely the most amazing thing I have ever read in my life it was so exceptionally beautiful that I couldn't stop reading it's 3am right now I have been up all night reading this and I finally finished! This is the first time I have ever cried over anything fiction be it a movie, song or book. Thank you for writing such a amazing story this is definantly something I'm coming back to read again and again! But for now I'm going to sleep I have school tomorrow DARN IT!
x3LKimmyH #9
this is getting so good! you have good writing skills :D <br />
keep writing your awesome stories :D