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The 10 students all boarded the white ship to go back to the mansion since their holiday was over.They were all found by the captain who knew the way around the forest well enough.The trip back to the mansion was different as the atomsphere was peaceful and quiet rather than before where they were all noisy and loud.Some were okay with the experience in the forest while others had experienced something that had changed everything about them and their new situation with their partner.The 10 arrived at the mansion and all went to their seperate bedrooms to rest for a while.

 

Amber groaned as she shut her bedroom's door and lied down on her bed.She was just tired and did not properly sleep at all.She closed her eyes to remember her little moment with Key.

''Argh!'' Key groaned. ''I'm stuck with you again!''

''Why?! Why?!'' Amber whined.

''Admit it Amber.'' Key said. ''You like me don't you?''

''Pfftttt me and like you?! HA!'' Amber laughed. ''You wish loser!''

''Oh yeah?! That wasn't what I thought I heard when you looked at me when I was with Krystal!'' Key smirked. ''I could see the heat coming out of your head! It was pretty interesting to watch your jealous face.''

''What?!'' Amber looked away. ''What rubbish! I don't like you! I hate you!''

''What am I even thinking?!'' Amber opened her eyes and shook her head.

Amber closed her eyes again to remember how she had to hug him for 10 seconds.

''Since you and Key are such enemies,I would like to see a loving scene between you two.'' Onew said. ''Give Key a hug for 10 seconds.''

''WHAT?!'' KeyBer both raised their eyebrow.

''DO IT! DO IT!'' Everyone else cheered.

''God sake!'' Amber groaned as she gulped her saliva and tightly hugged Key.

She sat up as she cursed herself for even thinking such a foolish memory.

''Amber Liu are you crazy?!'' Amber angrily asked herself as she slapped her head.

 

Luna slammed the door shut as she ran to her bed and threw her whole body to the bed.Luna smiled as she was relaxed and she felt the warm soft bed on her skin.She closed her eyes to remember the moment she had with Jonghyun where he leaned in closer to her face as their noses touched.

Luna stood still as she saw Jonghyun smiling as he walked up to her.Luna took a deep breath as she saw Jonghyun standing in front of her.Jonghyun smirked as he leaned closer to her blushing face.He was only a few inches away from her face and all Luna could do was stare at his deep brown orbs.She couldn't help but admire his handsome face as her heartbeat pounded extremely fast.Jonghyun stopped leaning closer when his nose touched Luna's.

''Eh?!'' Luna immediately opened her eyes as she touched her nose but then shook her head. ''YA Luna have you gone mad?!''

Luna closed her eyes again to remember another memory of her and Jonghyun.A small smile appeared on her face as she remembered the emotions she experienced during that moment.

Jonghyun carried Luna inside the hut while Luna couldn't help but stare at Jonghyun's face.The way he cared for her safety made her feel special as she looked at him and was touched by Jonghyun.Her parents were too busy in their lives to even know if Luna was hurt or not but somehow Jonghyun made her feel alright and made her forget the fact that her parents were neglecting her.

''Okay we need to take care of that wound now!'' Jonghyun said as he placed Luna down on the ground.

''No no! Please leave me..I'm fine!'' Luna shook her head but Jonghyun grabbed her wrist.

''GOD DAMN IT!'' Jonghyun angrily shouted,which made Luna shocked as this was the first time she had seen the happy-go-lucky Jonghyun angry. ''I need to take care of that wound and I'm going to do so whether you like it or not!''

''N-No there's no need.'' Luna looked down as she didn't wanted to face the angry Jonghyun.

''I'm not asking you to show me..I'm telling you to show me!'' Jonghyun replied and Luna sighed as she gave up.

Luna turned around and Jonghyun brushed her hair away from her back,which made the atmosphere turn uncomfortable.Jonghyun saw a sharp small branch that was on Luna's back so he pulls it.

''Luna half of the branch is still inside your back so we need to tear your shirt.'' Jonghyun uneasily told her.

JongNa both swallowed their saliva as the situation was getting more uncomfortable.Luna was embarrassed by this but it was about her health so she had no other option but to let Jonghyun do that.She unwanting nodded her head as a signal to let Jonghyun tear her shirt.Jonghyun looked the other way as he teared the shirt in one go,revealing Luna's back.Jonghyun saw the small branch and took it out of her back.

''Ow!'' Luna flinched in pain.

She happily smiled as she touched Jonghyun's shirt,which she was still wearing but then she realised what she was doing and shook her head.

''Stupid Luna! What are you even thinking?!'' Luna cursed herself as she took off the shirt and wore one of her shirt. ''He's just a thoughtless skinship loving idiot!''

 

Sulli entered her bedroom and sat down on her bed as a memory occured inside her mind.

''Nice place!'' Sulli entered the hut.

''This is totally like one of those typical movies isn't it? A guy and a girl is stuck together...maybe there is something that is bound to happen between us!'' Taemin winked at Sulli as he chuckled.

''I can't stay here with you!'' Sulli stood up as she looked away.

''What?! You actually think I am going to do something to you?!'' Taemin was shocked while Sulli looked away. ''Hello excuse me but who do you think you are?! I am not a ert or alright! Tsk Sulli just stay here and I promise to stay away from you!''

''I told you that I don't want to stay here with you!'' Sulli argued.

''I thought he was nothing but a ert and a guy with a bad heart.'' Sulli commented. ''But then.....''

''Taemin-ah.'' Sulli felt guilty as she walked closer to the angry Taemin,who was sitting at the corner. ''I think I said too much to you.''

''You think?!'' Taemin was surprised as he face Sulli. ''You said a lot to me!''

''Please forgive me!'' Sulli pleaded.

''Why do you always think wrongly of me?!'' Taemin asked.

''No no it's not that.'' Sulli replied.

''I mean how could you even think like that of me? Am I really that bad to you?'' Taemin angrily questioned.

''It's my mistake.I never spent the night alone with a guy before.I've never had boyfriends before and I've never kissed anyone as well before.'' Sulli confessed. ''Please forgive me!''

''Maybe he's not that bad as everyone says he is.'' Sulli titled her head as she was confused with what to think about Taemin.

 

Krystal lazily lied down on the bed but for some reason she couldn't sleep at all.Her eyes were closed but she couldn't manage to make herself to even have a small nap.

''I bet when I die,you wouldn't even care!'' Krystal complained as she crossed her arms.

''Of course I wouldn't! I would party hard!'' Minho smiled and Krystal glared at him. ''Okay okay I was only joking! I think it's going to rain soon so let's just go in!''

''NO!'' Krystal shook her head.

''Krystal stop being such a brat! I'm not going to ask you a lot so just tell me do you want to go in or not?!'' Minho sighed as he was tired of Krystal being a brat.

Minho groaned at Krystal's bratty trait then carried Krystal into a bridal style way as he took her inside.

''HEY LET GO OF ME!'' Krystal banged her two fists onto Minho's chest.

Minho then places Krystal onto the floor.

''Sit down!'' Minho ordered like a father would order his daughter. ''Krystal Jung I order you to sit down!''

''Fine!'' Krystal sat down on the floor.

''Stupid jerk!'' Krystal spoke out as she remembered that moment. ''But he did that for me to come inside so maybe he was right?''

''Sometimes it is good for you to laugh rather than being Miss.Angry Young Woman all the time!'' Minho replied.

''It's okay! I don't want your stupid jacket.'' Krystal told.

''Well too bad brat girl.If you don't take this jacket then you will get pneumonia and if you get pneumonia then you will die and if you die then in this whole night I have to spend it with a dead body then your dad will say to me ''Because of your stupid jacket fight,my daughter has died then the successful Mr.Jung will sue me and I will have to go to jail!'' Minho smiled as he gave Krystal his jacket and Krystal smiled back at him,which made it THE FIRST TIME EVER THAT MINSTAL SMILED AT EACH OTHER! ''You know when you smile..you don't look that bad! You look alright.''

''You don't look that bad either.'' Krystal praised back.

Krystal smiled as she remembered Minho's sweet gesture. ''I guess he isn't that much of a jerk as I thought he was to be.''

Krystal looked at Minho's jacket,which was still with her.She grabbed it and held it close to her as she continued to think about her time in the forest with Minho.

 

Victoria sighed as she leaned against the wall and thought about her time in the forest with Onew.

Onew sighed as he had no other option.He quickly grabbed Victoria's head and slammed her pink lips onto his.The two were both shocked with this sudden action and finally stopped after kissing for like 2 minutes.

''Look I'm sorry! I had to do that since you wouldn't keep quiet and you can slap me if you want!'' Onew explained.

''T-Thank you.'' Victoria looked away.

''W-What? Huh?!'' Onew was shocked with this reaction.

''Thanks for the kiss.'' Victoria was embrassed.

''O-Okay.'' Onew was surprised that Victoria wasn't angry. ''Uhm why do you hate that game so much?''

''I lost someone special because of that game.'' Victoria's tears fell out of her eyes.

''Victoria?'' Onew lifted Victoria's chin up and wiped her tears. ''Victoria I'm sorry.I didn't mean to hurt you!''

''It's okay Jinki!'' Victoria replied.

''YA!'' Onew said.

''I know you hate it when people call you Jinki but I don't care.'' Victoria smiled and stuck her tongue out.

''You should smile more.You look pretty when smiling.'' Onew praised.

''Thank you!'' Victoria thanked.

''Victoria?'' Onew called out.

''Yes?'' Victoria looked at Onew.

''If you ever get lost or need help with anything then..just call me for help and I'll be there!'' Onew promised.

''Really? You willl?'' Victoria questioned.

''I will!'' Onew smiled.

Victoria touched her lips as she thought about the kiss she shared with Onew.She did agree with the fact that he wasn't wrong at all..in fact she would have done the same if she was in her position.

''He said he'll always be there for me!'' Victoria smiled.

Another memory came flying to her as she continued to think further on.

''If you had the chance to kiss one girl,who would it be?'' Victoria asked.

''Ooooooooo!'' Everyone clapped their hands.

''What?! No one!'' Onew told.

''You have to pick on!'' Everyone replied.

''Okay okay fine! If I had to pick one then....'' Onew gulped his saliva.

''Then?'' Everyone leaned closer.

''Victoria!'' Onew replied which made Victoria to look at Onew.

''Ooooooo!'' Everyone else teased.

''Only because she is the leader! I mean we do get stuck with each other a lot so I just choose her for that reason!'' Onew clarified.

''Is that the only reason?'' Victoria questioned herself but then shook her head. ''What are you even saying Victoria?''

 

Key drank his water bottle but then a thought occured about his bottle water as he was drinking.

''YA I am thirsty!'' Amber complained when Key snatched the water bottle away from her.

''Well it's my water bottle!'' Key told.

''You are just disgusting! You are arguing with me for water?'' Amber was shocked.

''So? I don't care if you are thirsty!" Key replied.

''I want to drink water.'' Amber demanded.

''Forget about it then.'' Key told.

''I am thirsty!'' Amber snatched the water bottle.

''Sorry I don't share my water!'' Key snatched his water bottle but then.... ''YA?!?''

The water bottle almost fell down on the ground but then Amber quickly grabbed it and drank the water.

''YA ARE YOU DRINKING MY WATER?!'' Key asked but Amber ignored him as she drank more.

Key threw the water bottle on the ground as he covered his mouth.

''Indirect kiss?!'' Key's eyes went wide open. ''No no no!''

As Key was shaking his head,another memory of him and Amber occured inside his head.

''KEY?! KEY?!'' Amber shouted as she walked outside since Key angrily stormed away. ''YA KEY WHERE ARE YOU?!''

Amber looked around as she tried to find Key.

''Oh no! Did he get lost now?!'' Amber asked herself. ''YA KIBUM! WHERE ARE YOU?!''

Thoughts of Key getting hurt and falling came into Amber's mind,scaring her.

''KIBUM KIM I DEMAND YOU COME HERE RIGHT NOW!'' Amber shouted as she was scared.

Thoughts of Key dying with blood all around him suddenly entered Amber's mind,terrifying her more.

''KEY?! KEY?!'' Amber yelled at the top of her lungs.

''BOOOOOO!'' Key jumped in front of Amber out of nowhere that made Amber fall down.

''WHAT?!'' Amber looked at Key,who was laughing. ''YOU MORON?!''

''I fooled you good didn't I?!'' Key laughed.

''And I thought something happened to you!'' Amber growled as she entered the hut while Key was roaring into laughter.

Key cleared his throat as he tried to think what that moment could have meant.

''Did she care about me?'' Key questioned as he thought hard but then he slapped his head. ''Tsk why do you care about that tomboy so much?!''

 

Jonghyun laughed as he remembered a moment of him and Luna.

Luna stood still as she saw Jonghyun smiling as he walked up to her.Luna took a deep breath as she saw Jonghyun standing in front of her.Jonghyun smirked as he leaned closer to her blushing face.He was only a few inches away from her face and all Luna could do was stare at his deep brown orbs.She couldn't help but admire his handsome face as her heartbeat pounded extremely fast.Jonghyun stopped leaning closer when his nose touched Luna's.

''Luna?'' Jonghyun's breath was breathing on his skin.

''Y-Yes?'' Luna was extremely red.

''You're...'' Jonghyun stopped talking.

''I'm what?'' Luna was deeply looking at Jonghyun.

''Stupid!'' Jonghyun stuck his tongue at Luna as he stepped back from her and laughed as loud as he could.

''I fooled her good!'' Jonghyun laughed as he tried to stand up.

Jonghyun then stopped laughing as he remembered another incident.

''Please! You and Handsome?! Have you even seen your face?'' Luna scoffed.

''It's very good looking I know!'' Jonghyun smiled.

''You look like a dinosaur!'' Luna stuck her tongue out.

''ME?! I do not look like a dinosaur.'' Jonghyun replied.

''You do! You do!'' Luna told.

''Oh yeah? Then you look like Ponyo! That red character!'' Jonghyun retorded.

''I do not!'' Luna exclaimed. ''Dinosaur!''

''Ponyo!'' Jonghyun spoke back. ''Anyway I think we are going the wrong way so just follow me and do not speak a word!''

''What?'' Luna asked as she started to walk.

''Don't speak!'' Jonghyun ordered.

''Eh?!'' Luna spoke again.

''No! I said not even a word!'' Jonghyun ordered again but then he bumped into a huge tree since he wasn't looking where he was going.

''HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!'' Luna roared into laughter.

''HEY?! Couldn't you have told me that I was about to bump into that tree?!'' Jonghyun raised his eyebrow.

''What? You said not even a word right?'' Luna acted innocent.

''She is so mean!'' Jonghyun complained. ''I don't even look like a dinosaur!''

 

Taemin ruffled his hair as he was annoyed that he could only think of one memory from the holiday they all just had.

''Truth or Dare?'' Taemin asked Sulli as the bottle landed on her. ''So what will Miss.Sulli choose? Truth of course right?''

''Dare!'' Sulli replied.

''Wow pretty good!'' Taemin was impressed. ''I don't think you can handle it!''

''I can!'' Sulli disagreed.

''Fine Kiss me!'' Taemin told. ''On the lips!''

''WHAT?! ARE YOU CRAZY?!'' Everyone was shocked especially Sulli,whose eyes went wide.

''What's the matter? Can't Sulli handle it?'' Taemin teased,which angered Sulli.

''S-Seriously?'' Sulli was just speechless.

''You heard me didn't you?'' Taemin spoke back.

''Sulli you don't have to do that!'' Victoria told.

''Yeah!'' Everyone agreed. ''Give Sulli another dare!''

''Fine I told her that she couldn't handle it!'' Taemin scoffed.

''I can!'' Sulli angrily replied then grabbed Taemin's collar and slammed her lips against Taemin's,surprising everyone especially Taemin with this bold act.

Taemin's eyes went wide open as Sulli did the dare while Sulli had her eyes closed.Taemin's face had went red while Sulli's face was much worse.

Taemin's eyes blinked as he touched his lips. ''I can't believe she actually did it!''

Another memory replaced that incident,which made Taemin think.

Sulli stood up as she saw ants and bugs all near her.She got scared when she saw a shadow like-creature running past her and she hyperventilated when she heard noises.She ran towards Taemin,who was walking back to her with two coconuts,then she tightly wrapped her arms around Taemin as she shievered.Taemin looked at Sulli's terrifed face and then reached out for her hair strand.He brushed the hair strand off her face with his index finger as he stared into her eyes.

Taemin groaned as he shook his head. ''Tsk who cares about that nerd?! I'm just playing with her that's all.''

 

Minho bounced his basketball but his mind was somewhere else.He stared at the floor as he continued to think about that brat girl.

''What?'' Minho turned around and saw Krystal's eyes were closed. ''Oh my god?!''

Minho quickly swam into the water and carried Krystal before she was completely into the water.Minho placed Krystal's body on the sand and shook her body.

''KRYSTAL?! KRYSTAL?!'' Minho shook Krystal's body vigorously.

Minho was so scared that he opened his mouth and then he did the unexpected.He gave Krystal CPR or in other words the kiss of life.He hoped that Krystal would recover but he was pushed back then.......

*SLAP*

Minho placed his hand on his red cheek as he angrily looked back at Krystal,who was angrily looking back at him.

''WHAT THE HELL?!'' Minho shouted as he was outraged. ''Why did you do that?!''

''WHY DID YOU KISS ME?! HOW DARE YOU!'' Krystal yelled at the top of her lungs.

''Kiss you?! I was freakin' saving you!'' Minho informed.

Minho touched his cheek and rubbed it up and down. ''That brat sure can slap!''

Minho held his ball against his chest as he continued to think about Krystal.

''Do you know this is my favourite jacket?'' Minho questioned. ''If I give this to you then it will be broken but I think to spend a whole night with you alone this is a very small price to pay!''

''Jerk!'' Krystal glared at Minho.

''Sometimes it is good for you to laugh rather than being Miss.Angry Young Woman all the time!'' Minho replied.

''It's okay! I don't want your stupid jacket.'' Krystal told.

''Well too bad brat girl.If you don't take this jacket then you will get pneumonia and if you get pneumonia then you will die and if you die then in this whole night I have to spend it with a dead body then your dad will say to me ''Because of your stupid jacket fight,my daughter has died then the successful Mr.Jung will sue me and I will have to go to jail!'' Minho smiled as he gave Krystal his jacket and Krystal smiled back at him,which made it THE FIRST TIME EVER THAT MINSTAL SMILED AT EACH OTHER! ''You know when you smile..you don't look that bad! You look alright.''

''You don't look that bad either.'' Krystal praised back.

''She doesn't look that bad when smiling....she kinda looks pretty.'' Minho spoke to himself but then he shook his head. ''But I look extremely handsome when I smile so who cares about her stupid smile!''

 

Onew was reading his books but his concentration was somewhere else.He sighed as he remembered the moment he had with Victoria.

''Give Onew a y dance!'' Luna laughed.

''LUNA?!'' OnToria both glared at Luna.

''Good one!'' Everyone else agreed.

''Fine!'' Victoria grabbed Onew and placed him on a chair.

Victoria smirked as she walked closer to Onew then caressed his face with her index finger,making Onew sweat and be nervous.Victoria then did a cartwheel and smoothly danced around Onew while the others all cheered.Onew looked at all the guys,who were all interestingly only staring at her so he got up and tried to make Victoria stop but once you get Victoria to dance there was no stopping her.

''Okay stop.'' Onew requested but Victoria ignored him. ''Victoria stop!''

''No!'' Victoria danced.

''Stop!'' Onew grabbed Victoria and placed her down to sit.

''I should give all of the 4 boys a slap for looking at her like that!'' Onew grumbled as he frowned.

Onew shook his head but another memory entered his mind.

Onew quickly hid behind a big tree and stayed quiet.Victoria turned around when she realised that it had been quiet and saw that Onew wasn't there.She was extremely scared and looked around.

''ONEW?!'' Victoria screamed a she hyperventilated. ''ONEW?!''

Onew tried to control his laughter when he realised Victoria was so scared and literally yelling with fear.

''ONEW?!'' Victoria screamed as her tears got out of her face.

''Lesson isn't over yet.'' Onew whispered as he quietly chuckled.

''Onew?!'' Victoria sat near the tree as she hugged her knees and buried her face.

''Maybe this lesson is a bit too much now since she's really scared.'' Onew spoke to himself and got out of his hiding place. ''Victoria?''

Onew looked at Victoria,whose eyes were swollen and bloodshot red,which shocked Onew.

''Are you--'' Onew was interrupted.

''YOU BLOODY IDIOT!'' Victoria ran towards Onew.

Victoria embraced Onew as tight as she could while crying heavily on his shirt,making it all wet with her tears.

''YA What's up with you?'' Onew questioned.

''WHY DID YOU LEAVE ME?! WHY?! I THOUGHT YOU REALLY DID LEAVE ME!'' Victoria turned her two hands into fists and continously banged her fists on Onew's heavy chest as she continued to cry.

''Victoria I was just---'' Onew was interrupted.

''DON'T YOU EVER LEAVE ME LIKE THAT! YOU HEAR ME!'' Victoria yelled at the top of her lungs.

''Shhh Victoria please calm down! I'm sorry!'' Onew hugged Victoria tightly as he patted her head to calm her down. ''I'm sorry!''

''Please just don't...'' Victoria cried. ''Don't do that ever again please.''

After that intense incident,OnToria were both walking in the jungle as silence occured and the two didn't dare say a word.

''I....'' Victoria spoke as her tears fell out again.

''Why are you crying again?!'' Onew questioned as he was surprised.

''Because I don't want it to happen again.'' Victoria cried.

''Victoria I was just playing with you! A little game of hide and seek that's all.'' Onew explained.

''I JUST HATE THAT DAMN GAME ALRIGHT?! DON'T DO THAT AGAIN!'' Victoria outbrusted.

''CALM DOWN VICTORIA!'' Onew yelled.

''NO FIRST YOU PLAY GAMES WITH ME AND YOU EXPECT ME TO CALM DOWN?!'' Victoria was extremely angry.

''Victoria!'' Onew sighed.

''NO I DON'T WANT TO CALM DOWN AND DON'T VICTORIA ME!'' Victoria cried.

''Please stop.'' Onew advised.

''NO I CAN'T TAKE IT! FIRST YOU-- Victoria was interrupted.

Onew sighed as he had no other option.He quickly grabbed Victoria's head and slammed her pink lips onto his.The two were both shocked with this sudden action and finally stopped after kissing for like 2 minutes.

''That was my first kiss.'' Onew touched his lips. ''But I guess...it wasn't a waste since I did calm her down but I wonder what happened to her in the past?''


Author-Nim=Thank you all very much for reading chapter 31! Thank you very much for all the people who commented and I hope you have all enjoyed this chapter! 

I just added a random chapter where the main characters all take a rest from being noisy and loud to reflect about their time they spent with their partner in the holiday.Now whether they are in love or like or just thinking about their partners...I'll leave that up to you guys to make a judgement!

Anyone has any request then please do tell me as I will fulfill your request! Request to me as many as moments as you would like and I promise to add them in the chapters :D


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yuuki_18 #1
Chapter 60: can you kindly pls.. continue the story
Kyoko99
#2
Chapter 59: Author-nim plz write more jongna stories.
when I first heard of him passing away I thought I'll quit kpop,cuz ring ding dong starts with him..but then I thought it is the wrong way so I decided to be a loyal shawol forever.
...right now I believe he never left us and this way we can keep him closer to our hearts .
I really liked your story btw^_^
Kyoko99
#3
Chapter 20: Omg this is the best chapter until now...when I read about 8 kids I was laughing like a crazy fool XD XD XD
Minstal9194
#4
Chapter 60: As always, the content is amazing. As I was reading it, teaes was coming out.
Thank you as always author-nim.
I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
nickhuntoria
#5
Chapter 60: I'm crying while reading this. And thank you for listening at my reasons. Love you author-nim ♡♡♡♡♡...
Let's be happy for Jonghyun and let us always remind him that he did well. Okay?
me2078 #6
Chapter 59: I still can't believe the news until now. Felt so empty knowing that he won't be with us anymore. I will accept any decision you make. Stay strong and take care.
minstalLuvers_94 #7
Chapter 59: I will accept your decision
nickhuntoria
#8
Chapter 59: I feel sorry too. As a Shawol, I still can't accept the reality that he is now away from our existence.even though I don't wanna believe it, it still happened.
Don't worry what ever your decision we are going to accept it as a respect for you and jonghyun
Minstal9194
#9
Chapter 59: As a reader of the book, I will support what decision u come up with. I also think it will be hard for u to keep on writing so if u want to stop then I will support ur decision.
Minstal9194
#10
Chapter 58: Sorry for not commenting earrlier. I was on holiday so I didn't have time to read.
The chapter is really great Moments of Tarlli and Minstal are the best.
Looking forward to the next chapter.