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''I hate you for that Sul Sul!'' Taemin told as he rubbed his injured hand.

''What?! I just poked you with it!'' Sulli laughed. ''Want me to do it again?!''

''NO!'' Taemin stepped back from Sulli. ''Don't you dare!''

''Why not?'' Sulli smiled.

''Want me to take the dog out of my room?'' Taemin questioned.

''Okay you win!'' Sulli threw her hands in the air as a sign of surrender.

''Are you okay now?'' Luna asked Jonghyun.

''Me?'' Jonghyun looked at Luna.

''Of course you,you idiot!'' Luna rolled her eyes. ''You're okay right?''

''Yeah!'' Jonghyun nodded his head.

''You looked like you were about to die back there.'' Luna commented.

''Yeah I just can't stand narrow spaces like that...it makes me fell like I'm going to get killed by being squashed in there.'' Jonghyun replied.

''Oh it's okay now.'' Luna said.

''What time is it?'' Victoria asked.

''It's 11pm!'' Onew replied.

''That quick?!'' Everyone was shocked.

''I know! I didn't even realise how long that fear task took.'' Onew agreed.

''So..what should we do now?'' Victoria asked.

''Sleep obviously.'' Onew replied.

''Okay let's just---WHAT?!'' Everyone was shocked when the lights in the house all went off.

''ONEW! ONEW!'' Victoria yelled at the top of her lungs.

''WHAT?!'' Onew yelled back.

''Check what's wrong!'' Victoria bossed.

''Eh?! Why me?'' Onew asked.

''Because you're the oldest so check it!'' Victoria said as she grabbed someone's shirt.

''YA WHO IS GRABBING ME?!'' Minho shouted.

''Oh sorry!'' Victoria let go of Minho's shirt and grabbed someone else's.

''Now who is grabbing me?!'' Key asked.

''Sorry! YA ONEW WHERE ARE YOU?!'' Victoria yelled.

''I can't even see where I am so how would I be able to tell you?'' Onew asked as he,too couldn't see anything in the darkness.

''Is this Onew?!'' Victoria asked as she held someone's hair.

''Hey it's me,Sulli!'' Sulli pouted. ''Please let go of my hair!''

''Sorry Sulli!'' Victoria grabbed someone else's arm. ''Is this Onew?!''

''It's Taemin actually.'' Taemin replied.

''Oh...and I thought how did Onew get so skinny out of nowhere!'' Victoria chuckled.

''HEY!?'' Onew shouted.

''Sorry Sorry and is this Onew?!'' Victoria grabbed someone's shirt.

''Finally you found me!'' Onew sarcastically cheered. ''OW?! Did you just pinch me?!''

''Serves you right for the sarcasm!'' Victoria replied. ''OW?! Did you just pinch me now?!''

''Serves you right for pinching me first!'' Onew told.

''Okay what should we do?!'' Amber asked.

''Everyone found your partner and stick to them while me and Victoria will try to find a way to get rid of the darkness.'' Onew instructed.

''YA Minho where are you when I need you?!'' Krystal loudly said.

''Where are YOU?!'' Minho asked back.

''Okay come to the area that is around my room!'' Krystal said as she stood near her room.

''Okay I'm here.'' Minho grabbed Krystal's shirt in the darkness.

''Okay okay we're together now.'' Krystal was assured.

''Okay now let's see what is wrong!'' Onew said as he walked with Victoria.

''I don't even know where we are!'' Victoria whined.

''I can't see anything!'' Onew complained. ''DOES ANYONE HAVE A CANDLE?!''

''NO!'' Everyone replied.

''Aish!'' Onew sighed.

 

''O-Okay where are we?!'' Amber asked Key.

''How would I know?'' Key asked back. ''I don't even know what or where I am.''

''OH MY GOD?!'' Amber was scared.

''What?! What?!'' Key asked.

''I swear I saw something move.'' Amber replied.

''What?! How?!'' Key asked. ''I can't even see anything in this darkness.''

''I saw something move Key! I mean it!'' Amber was serious.

''No you're just trying to scare me!'' Key disagreed.

''I'm freakin' serious!'' Amber angrily told.

''What lies! You're just al--Oh my god?!'' Key was shocked. ''I-I-I saw it too!''

''Now you believe me!'' Amber told.

''Yeah I was just joking and being sarcastic!'' Key rolled his eyes.

''You idiot!'' Amber punched Key.

''Did you just hit me?!'' Key was surprised.

''Maybe I did!'' Amber told.

''Well I--What was that?!'' Key asked.

''What was what?'' Amber asked back.

''Something moved..it just dashed in front of me out of nowhere.'' Key told.

''See now you believe me but--wait?! Are you joking again?'' Amber asked.

''I swear I saw something dash near you.'' Key said.

 

''Okay everyone let's all just go to sleep!'' Onew suggested.

''HOW?!'' Everyone asked.

''Me and Key just saw something move!'' Amber told.

''Eh?! You did?'' Everyone asked again.

''Y-Yeah something was moving.'' Key said.

''We couldn't see since it was too dark.'' Amber replied.

''Okay let's all just try to find the switch alright.'' Victoria said.

 

''A-Alright I guess the switch is here around somewhere I think.'' Luna slowly moved with Jonghyun to find the switch.

''Luna where are you?'' Jonghyun asked as he moved his hands around.

''Where are you?!'' Luna asked back as she,too moved her hands around.

''LUNA?!'' Jonghyun shouted.

''There I got you!'' Luna sighed as she grabbed Jonghyun.

''O-okay I feel you!'' Jonghyun nodded his head. ''Hey don't you think this is exciting through?''

''E-Exciting?'' Luna questioned.

''You,Me in the dark all alone.'' Jonghyun giggled.

''Shut up!'' Luna smacked Jonghyun's head.

''You sure do have a good aim even in the dark.'' Jonghyun pouted.

''Of course!'' Luna replied. ''I am the great Luna!''

''Hey I might lose you so wait!'' Jonghyun grabbed Luna and held her hand.

''Eh?!'' Luna was surprised. *This damn idiot wouldn't even spare the chance to do skinship in the dark!*

''By holding hands we can be sure that we aren't going to lose each other in the dark!'' Jonghyun smiled. ''I'm so smart for thinking this idea isn't it?''

''Smart enough to always have a chance to do skinship with me!'' Luna commented.

''What? What did you say?'' Jonghyun asked.

''Nothing!'' Luna said.

 

''O-Okay I think we're near the switch!'' Sulli commented. ''Eh?! What was that?''

''What was what?'' Taemin asked.

''Something just touched me!'' Sulli said.

''Oh really?'' Taemin tried to control his laughter.

''Is that you?!'' Sulli asked.

''No!'' Taemin replied then secretly touched Sulli again.

''See something touched me again!'' Sulli said.

''How can I see?'' Taemin questioned then touched Sulli again.

''Taemin is that you?!'' Sulli was annoyed.

''No it isn't!'' Taemin was smiling but Sulli couldn't see it since it was dark.

 

''Okay if we can just move slowly without--Ouch?!'' Krystal commented when she bumped into the wall.

''What?! What?!'' Minho asked.

''I just bumped into the wall!'' Krystal whined,making Minho to laugh out loud. ''Are you freakin' serious?! How dare you laugh at me!?''

''So?! It's funny!'' Minho was laughing when Krystal pushed him into the wall. ''Ouch?!''

''Whose laughing now?'' Krystal laughed but then Minho pushed Krystal into the wall. ''Ouch?!''

''Not so funny now is it?'' Minho laughed as he pushed Krystal into the wall.

''Why you?!'' Krystal pushed Minho into the wall.

''I hate you!'' Minho pushed Krystal back.

''I hate you too!'' Krystal pushed Minho again,making MinStal to have a push war.

 

''How useless are you?!'' Victoria frowned.

''What?! How am I useless?'' Onew asked in anger.

''Because you can't even find the switch.'' Victoria told. ''And you call yourself the leader of this group?!''

''I call myself the leader because I am the oldest and most mature person from this group and you call yourself the leader out of the girls?!'' Onew asked back. ''You are not even smart like Sulli,sensible like Luna,mature like Amber and understandable like Krystal so how are you a leader?''

''Oh yeah?!'' Victoria placed her hands on her hips. ''And you are the leader because? You are not fun like Taemin,social like Jonghyun,you don't give good advice like Key nor do you have courage like Minho so how on earth are you the leader?!''

''Because I'm a better leader than you!'' Onew argued.

''How dare you?!'' Victoria angrily said. ''I'll have you know th--Is that light?!''

''Where?'' Onew asked as he looked back. ''W-We have light but why is it in that room?''

''Let's go in there!'' Victoria dragged Onew into the room.

''Hey how did a candle light itself?! There isn't anyone in the room as well?!'' Onew asked then....

*BAAM*

The door automatically closed itself,startling OnToria.

''What?!'' OnToria both ran to the room and banged their fists. ''HELLO?! IS ANYONE THERE?!''

 

''K-K-Key!'' Amber pulled Key's shirt.

''What?'' Key asked.

''W-W-What is that?'' Amber pointed to something.

''What is what?'' Key asked. ''I can't see anything.''

''Look to your left!'' Amber told.

Key looked over to his left and was shocked.He saw a pair of green eyes glaring at both him and Amber.

''A-A-Amber?!'' Key was scared.

''What?!'' Amber asked.

''RUN!'' Key pulled Amber and ran away then the thing ran after them.

''I'M SCARED!'' Amber yelled as she ran.

 

''What was that?!'' Krystal was looking around.

''Did I just hear Amber?'' Minho questioned.

''I think I heard her too!'' Krystal agreed. ''Eh?! Did you j-just hear something?''

''I hear people howling?!'' Minho asked.

''W-What's that?'' Krystal grabbed Minho and tightly held him.

''Krystal what are you doing?!'' Minho asked.

''LOOK AT YOUR RIGHT HAND SIDE!'' Krystal screamed.

''OH MY GOD?!'' Minho saw a ghost-like figure.

''RUN YOU IDIOT!'' Krystal held Minho as tight as she could,as both of them ran.

 

''Jonghyun you stupid idiot!'' Luna said as she almost tripped.

''What?'' Jonghyun asked.

''You are walking so fast that I almost tripped!'' Luna complained.

''Sorry but I--Oh?! Did I just hear Krystal screaming?'' Jonghyun asked.

''Now I hear Minho screaming!'' Luna said.

''Why is everyone screaming?'' Jonghyun asked.

''This is getting scary now.Screaming and it's so dark in here!'' Luna whined.

''What was that?!'' Jonghyun heard a noise.

''Oh my god?! I hear it too!'' Luna tightly held Jonghyun's hand.

''L-L-L-L-LUNA!'' Jonghyun yelled.

''What?'' Luna asked.

''Look behind you!'' Jonghyun shivered.

Luna looked back to see a zombie-like creature walking towards JongNa.Luna immediately dragged Jonghyun as she ran away.

 

''Why are you singing?'' Sulli asked.

''Why not?'' Taemin smiled.

''This is not a good time to sing.It's dark and people are screaming!'' Sulli was scared.

''Maybe they are just being silly and trying to scare us!'' Taemin assured.

''Now who would try to scare us?! That's mean.'' Sulli disagreed.

''AAAAAAA!!!!!'' Taemin ran as he saw something.

''TAEMIN-AH WAIT FOR ME!'' Sulli was so scared that she didn't even bother to look at what it was.

 

''We're locked in here!'' Onew sighed as he gave up.

''I told you!'' Victoria smirked.

''MR.KIM! MR.KIM!'' Onew yelled.

''It's no use! We are experiencing a power cut right now so all we have to just wait and see.'' Victoria replied.

''Hey what's that?'' Onew pointed to something.

''I don't know but let me open it.'' Victoria smiled as she grabbed the box and opened it. ''Wow!''

''A teddy bear?'' Onew raised his eyebrow.

''Well it's so cute!'' Victoria was about to grab it when....

''WHAT?!'' OnToria both stepped away when they saw the teddy bear move.

OnToria both were scared and shocked when they saw the teddy bear move and it had a knife in his hand,slowly walking towards OnToria with a wide evil grin in his face.

''AAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!'' OnToria both ran around the room as the scary teddy bear tried to chase them.

 

''I-I-Is i-it gone?'' Krystal shivered as she grabbed Minho and tightly held him.

''I don't know?!'' Minho was scared as well.

''BOOO!'' The ghost appeared in front of them and they both ran into the living room.

''Why are you pulling me?!'' Minho angrily asked.

''Please just protect me!'' Krystal pleaded as she pushed Minho in front of her and closely stood behind Minho.

''What? You protect me!'' Minho ordered.

''No you should!'' Krystal disagreed as she pulled Minho in front of her.

''And why is that?!'' Minho asked.

''YA What kind of man are you?!'' Krystal angrily taunted. ''You don't even want to protect a girl like me! I'm such a sweet,cute and lovely girl that needs protecting so are you just going to sit and not protect me?!''

''Why don't you protect me?!'' Minho asked.

''You're the guy! The guy's job is to protect the girl so do your job properly!'' Krystal told.

''What if I---AAAAA RUN!!!!!!!!'' MinStal both ran into a room when the ghost appeared before them again.

 

''Please don't kill me!'' Key begged as he felt the cold wall of the bathroom against his back.

''Don't kill me as well!'' Amber pleaded as she,too,felt the cold wall of the bathroom against her back.

The wolf glared at KeyBer with his green terrifying eyes as it came closer.

''You don't want to eat me!'' Key uneasily giggled. ''I'm too yucky so eat Amber! She's very delicious to eat!''

''WHAT?! NO!'' Amber disagreed. ''I taste like socks so you should eat Key! He smells so good and he tastes even better!''

''No no no!'' Key sit down at the corner. ''Amber is very delicious! Her white skin will please you! It not only looks delicious,it tastes delicious too!''

''No no no!'' Amber,too sit down at the corner. ''E-E-Eat him please! He is the good to eat!''

''Please just don't eat me!'' Key whined as he was so scared.

''Please just don't eat me as well!'' Amber whined along as she too was so scared.

 

''I-I-Is it gone now?!'' Taemin asked as he slowly peeked his head from Sulli's back.

''Yes it is gone!'' Sulli rolled her eyes. ''What is it that you are so scared of?!''

''Pffttt Nothing!'' Taemin acted like he wasn't scared and stood away from Sulli.

''But you were scared?'' Sulli questioned.

''No I wasn't!'' Taemin confidently replied as he wasn't.

''You were hiding behind me?'' Sulli asked.

''What rubbish! Besides I can protect you.'' Taemin said.

''Protect me?'' Sulli questioned.

''Yeah! I'm the strongest and bravest guy so count on me to protect you!'' Taemin wrapped his arm around Sulli's waist.

''E-Eh?'' Sulli blushed. ''Taemin what's that?''

''What's what sweety?'' Taemin asked as he turned around and saw a skeleton-like creature. ''AAA SULLI SAVE ME!''

''What?'' Taemin dragged Sulli and hid behind her.

''IT'S COMING AFTER US!'' Taemin left the poor Sulli and ran without her but the skeleton-like creature ran after Taemin rather than Sulli.

''TAEMIN-AH!'' Sulli ran behind the two into a room.

 

''J-J-Jonghyun-ah!!!!'' Luna tightly hugged Jonghyun as she was scared.

''Luna-ah!'' Jonghyun too hugged Luna as tightly as he could as he was scared.

''Why wouldn't it stop chasing us?!'' Luna asked as she was literally about to cry.

''Where are the others?!'' Jonghyun asked.

''It's not leaving!'' Luna ran to the living room with Jonghyun.

The Zombie-like creature still walked towards Jonghyun and Luna then.....

''JONGHYUN-AH!?'' Luna screamed when the zombie-like creature snatched Jonghyun and then disappeared,leaving Luna all alone.

Luna felt like she was about to die when she realised that she was all alone now.Everyone was somewhere else while her only ray of safety Jonghyun was taken away.She stayed near the wall to be safe but then was shocked and scared when she realised 9 people that were dressed up as the Grim Reaper walking towards her.

''D-D-Death?!'' Luna was scared because...well if you see the Grim Reaper that means you are going to die but she was seeing 9 of them.

Luna tried to escape but 9 of them all went around her and trapped her in a circle.Luna closed her eyes and shivered to death as she was so scared and curiosu as to what will happen to her but then.....

''1...2...3!!!!!!!!'' The 9 shouted. ''HAPPY BIRTHDAY LUNA!''

''EH?!'' Luna opened her eyes as she saw the lights had came back on and the 9 happy faces smiling at her.

''Did you like the birthday surprise?'' Everyone asked.

''Surprise? Birthday?!'' Luna was shocked.

''Happy Birthday Luna dear!'' Mr.Kim's voice voiced. ''It is now 12 am so it's your birthday dear!''

''But zombie? It took Jonghyun? Grim Reaper?!'' Luna was confused.

''We were playing a prank on you Luna!'' Krystal laughed

''We wanted to surpise you in a unique way!'' Onew laughed along.

''Did you like it?'' Amber questioned as she laughed.

''But power cut?'' Luna questioned.

''We asked Mr.Kim to do that!'' Victoria chuckled.

''I want to do this again!'' Minho laughed.

''I hope you enjoyed it!'' Sulli giggled.

''Enjoy it?!'' Luna was shocked.

''Yeah we were all scared too but it was fun!'' Taemin laughed.

''Besides it was all Jonghyun's idea! He planned it all!'' Key roared in laughter.

''Jonghyun?!'' Luna looked at Jonghyun.

''You guys should have been there! She was so scared that she almost cried!'' Jonghyun fell on the floor,laughing to death.

''YOU JERK!'' Luna ran to Jonghyun and angrily punched his arm,scractched his arm,pulled his hair,slapped his back and wrapped her hands around Jonghyun's neck. ''I'M GOING TO KILL YOU FOR THIS!''

''LUNA-AH?!'' Jonghyun whined. ''IT HURTS SO BAD!''

''I'M GOING TO KILL YOU!'' Luna angrily shouted.

''Happy 18th Birthday!'' Everyone yelled as they placed a cake on the table.

Luna stood in front of the cake and everyone smiled at her as they sang the birthday song.

''Thank you everyone!'' Luna happily eye-smiled as she cut the cake.

She fed the cake to everyone but then frowned when she saw the last person,smiling at her.

''Come on! I'm waiting!'' Jonghyun said.

''You jerk!'' Luna frowned but then fed Jonghyun some cake. ''Happy now?''

''Very happy!'' Jonghyun said but then splatted some cake on Luna's face.

''YA WHAT THE..?!'' Luna yelled then splatted some cake back on Jonghyun's face.

Everyone laughed as they saw the childish and cute JongNa splatting cake at each other.


Author-Nim=Thank you all very much for reading chapter 26! Thank you very much for all the people who commented and I hope you have all enjoyed this chapter! 

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yuuki_18 #1
Chapter 60: can you kindly pls.. continue the story
Kyoko99
#2
Chapter 59: Author-nim plz write more jongna stories.
when I first heard of him passing away I thought I'll quit kpop,cuz ring ding dong starts with him..but then I thought it is the wrong way so I decided to be a loyal shawol forever.
...right now I believe he never left us and this way we can keep him closer to our hearts .
I really liked your story btw^_^
Kyoko99
#3
Chapter 20: Omg this is the best chapter until now...when I read about 8 kids I was laughing like a crazy fool XD XD XD
Minstal9194
#4
Chapter 60: As always, the content is amazing. As I was reading it, teaes was coming out.
Thank you as always author-nim.
I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
nickhuntoria
#5
Chapter 60: I'm crying while reading this. And thank you for listening at my reasons. Love you author-nim ♡♡♡♡♡...
Let's be happy for Jonghyun and let us always remind him that he did well. Okay?
me2078 #6
Chapter 59: I still can't believe the news until now. Felt so empty knowing that he won't be with us anymore. I will accept any decision you make. Stay strong and take care.
minstalLuvers_94 #7
Chapter 59: I will accept your decision
nickhuntoria
#8
Chapter 59: I feel sorry too. As a Shawol, I still can't accept the reality that he is now away from our existence.even though I don't wanna believe it, it still happened.
Don't worry what ever your decision we are going to accept it as a respect for you and jonghyun
Minstal9194
#9
Chapter 59: As a reader of the book, I will support what decision u come up with. I also think it will be hard for u to keep on writing so if u want to stop then I will support ur decision.
Minstal9194
#10
Chapter 58: Sorry for not commenting earrlier. I was on holiday so I didn't have time to read.
The chapter is really great Moments of Tarlli and Minstal are the best.
Looking forward to the next chapter.