Truth or Dare?

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''WE'RE HERE!'' The captain announced and everyone rushed to the window to look outside.

''HERE?!'' Everyoen was confused when they saw an isolated island.

''Yep this is your destination!'' The captain informed. ''Everyone out with your stuff now please!''

''Why here?!'' Everyone asked.

''You will get your answers later.'' The captain said. ''Everyone out with your stuff now please!''

Everyone groaned as they got their luggages out and got out of the ship.

''MR.KIM?!'' Everyone shouted at the top of their lungs in anger as this isolated island was not the vacation or reward they were hoping for.

''Yes?'' Mr.Kim's voice echoed and everyone was shocked.

''Eh?! Where did that voice come from?!'' Everyone looked at each other.

''I can hear you all so tell me what is the problem?'' Mr.Kim's voice voiced.

''Why are we here?!'' Onew asked as he was outraged.

''You said we were going on holiday!'' Victoria angrily informed.

''This is your reward holiday! This island is only for the ten of you all.'' Mr.Kim smiled.

''What will we do in an island?!'' Taemin raised his eyebrow.

''We really can't do anything here can we?'' Sulli questioned.

''Sure you can!'' Mr.Kim smiled. ''You can play with the sand,swim and I'll even put some interesting challenges for you all!''

''Challenges? What challenges?'' Key asked.

''Yeah like what?'' Amber asked.

''After you all have rested for a while,I'll tell you!'' Mr.Kim replied. ''Just rest for now!''

''Rest where?'' Luna placed her hands on her hips.

''We have no where to even live.'' Jonghyun agreed.

''We have placed 5 tents for you 10!'' Mr.Kim told. ''A tent for a pair!''

''WE'RE GOING TO SLEEP NEXT TO OUR PARTNERS?!'' MinStal both were shocked.

''Yes indeed!'' Mr.Kim said.

''WHAT?! NO!!!!!!!!!'' Everyone disagreed.

''Well either sleep next to your partner or sleep out in the cold sand! Your choice!'' Mr.Kim turned his mic off.

''Mr.Kim!?'' Everyone called out but they got no reply. ''HE TURNED HIS MIC OFF AGAIN!''

''Well...w-we gotta get used to it then.'' Onew sighed.

''There is no way I'm sleeping near you!'' Victoria shook her head.

''Neither are we!'' The girls all agreed.

''We don't want to either!'' Key stuck his tongue out.

''You said it Key!'' The rest of the boys agreed.

''Can we all just,at least,make the tents please?'' Onew asked. ''Then we can decide which pair sleeps with which person!''

''Alright! Everyone just make the tents with your partners first!'' Victoria announced.

 

''Okay so how do we do this?'' Taemin asked as he got the tent's equipment.

''I don't know!'' Sulli shrugged her shoulders as she looked at the tent's equipment.

''You should know!'' Taemin replied. ''You're smart!''

''Well I've never really went camping or anything like that to build a tent.'' Sulli told.

''Want me to help?'' Minho asked as he stood next to Sulli.

''You can?!'' Sulli happily smiled.

''Tsk!'' Taemin glared at Minho and Sulli. ''No need!''

''Eh?! We need Minho's help!'' Sulli argued. ''Can you help us Minho?''

''Of course! I've made a lot of tents!'' Minho smiled. ''I'll help you right away!''

''Oi! I said we don't need your help.'' Taemin told.

''Don't worry! I can make good tents...Look at mine if you don't believe me.'' Minho pointed to his tent.

TaeLli both looked at the tent MinStal were making and saw that they were already done.Krystal was sitting next to the tent as she looked at everyone,making their tent.

''Thank you Minho-ah!'' Sulli thanked.

''No problem!'' Minho smiled.

''Whatever!'' Taemin rolled his eyes as he walked over to Krystal. ''Hey!''

''Hey!'' Krystal greeted back and Taemin sat next to her.

''Did you make the tent?'' Taemin asked.

''No,Mr.Perfect over there didn't even let me touch the tent.Not even once!'' Krystal complained.

''More like Mr.Show off.'' Taemin pointed to Minho,who was making TaeLli's tent while Sulli was smiling and talking to him.

''Why does he always go to Sulli?'' Krystal questioned.

''Yeah why does he always do that?'' Taemin agreed.

''Maybe he wants to impress her or something.'' Krystal rolled her eyes.

''And you should stop him from coming to our space.'' Taemin told.

''Me? Why should I?'' Krystal raised her eyebrow.

''Don't you care that Minho is always coming over to our space and disturbing us?'' Taemin asked.

''Pffttt No! He can do whatever he wants...I don't care.'' Krystal scoffed.

''Well you should!'' Taemin told. ''You should stop him from coming over to our space.''

''And why should I do that?'' Krystal raised her eyebrow.

''Well...because..well...well...You should! He's your partner!'' Taemin didn't know what to reply back.

 

''All done!'' Minho flashed his smile as he was finished.

''Thank you!'' Sulli thanked. ''Wow it looks really good!''

''Thanks!'' Minho smiled. ''Where's Taemin?''

''Eh? He was just here?'' Sulli asked and looked around to find Taemin. ''Oh he's with Krystal.''

''Krystal?!'' Minho turned around to find Taemin and Krystal together. ''What is he doing with her again?''

''I don't know!'' Sulli shrugged her shoulders.

''He really seems to like going over to Krystal a lot.'' Minho pointed out.

''Oh...yeah.'' Sulli nodded her head.

''What do you think is going on between them?'' Minho asked.

''I don't know.'' Sulli replied. ''They maybe like each other?''

''Impossible!'' Minho told. ''Taemin likes you isn't it?''

''I don't know!'' Sulli shrugged her shoulders. ''Maybe he changed his mind.''

''I don't think so!'' Minho shook his head.

 

''DO IT PROPERLY!'' Victoria yelled.

''YA Don't shout!'' Onew glared at Victoria.

''You aren't doing it properly!'' Victoria argued.

''At least I am trying to fix the tent! You aren't even helping me.'' Onew argued back.

''How dare you talk like that with me!'' Victoria slapped Onew's head.

''Ow?!'' Onew exclaimed. ''How would you like this then!''

''Ow?!'' Victoria exclaimed when Onew hit her back. ''You dare hit me?!''

''You hit me first!'' Onew argued.

''Stop arguing!'' Everyone stopped the leaders.

''Oh my god everyone is already finished and you didn't even start!'' Victoria complained.

''Well if you would have helped then I believe we would have finished as well.'' Onew told.

''You should let Minho help! He knows how to fix the tent.'' Sulli told.

''Minho help please!'' Victoria smiled.

''Sure!'' Minho helped OnToria to fix their tent.

''Show off!'' Krystal and Taemin both scoffed.

''You said it!'' Onew agreed to the two maknaes' point.

 

''I see everyone has finished making their tents!'' Mr.Kim spoke. ''Now for the challenge! You all will simply have to swim to the sea and get the team colour flag! Simple!''

''Team colour?'' Everyone asked.

''Red team is Onew and Victoria!'' Mr.Kim informed.

''Alright!'' Victoria smiled. ''I like the colour red!''

''It's just a colour.'' Onew said.

''Blue is Minho and Krystal!'' Mr.Kim informed.

''Blue is a nice colour.'' Minho smiled. ''My favourite colour!''

''It suits you.'' Krystal replied.

''Thanks!'' Minho thanked.

''Yellow is Jonghyun and Luna!'' Mr.Kim informed.

''My favourite colour!'' Jonghyun smiled.

''It's okay!'' Luna shrugged her shoulders.

''Green is Taemin and Sulli!'' Mr.Kim informed.

''Green is yucky!'' Taemin commented.

''I like it!'' Sulli replied.

''Finally Orange is Key and Amber!'' Mr.Kim told.

''My favourite colour!'' Amber smiled.

''Mine too!'' Key replied.

''Copy cat!'' Amber glared at Key.

''You copied me!'' Key stuck his tongue out.

''Okay now as I said the task involves first the boys to swim to the coloured flags of their teams,just pick them up and swim back then as soon as one person is back their partner can then swim back to get the other flag!'' Mr.Kim informed. ''The winning team can have a gift of their choice!''

''You better win this Krystal!'' Minho demanded.

''YA I can swim!'' Krystal argued. ''Besides you don't need to be competitive! It's just a task.''

''I want to win!'' Minho argued back.

''Jeez calm down!'' Krystal rolled her eyes. *Maybe I should be mean....Maybe I should swim extremely slowly! Ha ha I'll do that!''

''Do you know how to swim?'' Jonghyun asked.

''I think so!'' Luna replied.

''You think?'' Jonghyun was confused with the reply. ''What do you mean you think?''

''I haven't went swimming in ages.'' Luna confessed.

''You better win this!'' Key pointed his finger.

''I just hope you can win this!'' Amber pointed her finger back.

''I'll sure be fast but I hope you will be.'' Key said. ''You are so fat you know.''

''You're fat!'' Amber glared at Key.

''We better win this Onew.'' Victoria said.

''I'll try.'' Onew replied.

''Trying isn't good enough!'' Victoria scoffed.

''Complaining isn't either.'' Onew talked back.

''Sul Sul you confident in this?'' Taemin questioned.

''A bit.'' Sulli uneasily smiled.

''Just think of me when you reach out for that flag!'' Taemin winked.

''Huh?!'' Sulli was confused.

''When you reach out for that flag,think of the flag as my heart and you're reaching out for it!'' Taemin flashed his smile while Sulli rolled her eyes.

''Okay let's all start with the boys!'' Mr.Kim smiled.

''No fair! Minho will win!'' Victoria shouted.

''Don't shout!'' Onew glared at Victoria.

''GO!'' Mr.Kim shouted and all the guys ran into the water.

As expected,Minho swam as fast as he could as he was the fastest and was pretty sharp in his movement.Jonghyun was the second fastest,which was surprise since he had pretty short legs so everyone expected him to have a slow speed.Taemin was the third fastest as his long arms had helped him.Key wasn't really swimming to be honest infact he was more like jumping in the water to speed his speed and the slowest was poor Onew,who was walking rather than swimming.

''YA ONEW! HURRY UP!!!!!'' Victoria yelled.

''I'M TRYING!'' Onew shouted.

''TRY HARDER!'' Victoria screamed.

''KEY WHAT ARE YOU DOING?!'' Amber groaned. ''SWIM FASTER!''

''SHUT UP!'' Key demanded.

''Quick Taemin!'' Sulli cheered.

''Hey I'm not last!'' Taemin replied.

''Good job Jonghyun!'' Luna clapped her hands.

''Thanks!'' Jonghyun smiled as he grabbed the yellow flag.

''Done!'' Minho was already on the land when the rest of the boys were grabbing their flags. ''Krystal go!''

''I don't want to get wet!'' Krystal stepped back.

''SWIM!'' Minho ordered as he pointed to the water.

''I rather not do that!'' Krystal shook her head.

''Swim or else....'' Minho threatened.

''Or else what?'' Krystal raised her eyebrow.

''Swim now woman!'' Minho groaned.

''No!'' Krystal didn't wanted to swim.

''I'll go next!'' Luna swam into the water when Jonghyun came back.

''Look Luna is going to beat us so just go!'' Minho was angry.

''No means No!'' Krystal was stubborn.

''Fine you leave me no choice!'' Minho angrily carried Krystal into his arms.

''HEY LET GO OF ME!'' Krystal screamed at the top of her lungs.

''Swim!'' Minho threw Krystal into the water.

''I'll go swim now!'' Sulli swam into the water when Taemin was on land.

''COME ON LUNA! YOU CAN DO IT!'' Jonghyun cheered as he saw Luna grabbing the yellow flag.

''ONEW YOU'RE STILL IN THE WATER?! HURRY UP!'' Victoria angrily shouted.

''KEY SWIM ALREADY!'' Amber was angry as well.

''What's wrong with Krystal?'' Taemin questioned.

''What?'' Minho turned around and saw Krystal's eyes were closed. ''Oh my god?!''

Minho quickly swam into the water and carried Krystal before she was completely into the water.Minho placed Krystal's body on the sand and shook her body.

''KRYSTAL?! KRYSTAL?!'' Minho shook Krystal's body vigorously.

Minho was so scared that he opened his mouth and then he did the unexpected.He gave Krystal CPR or in other words the kiss of life.He hoped that Krystal would recover but he was pushed back then.......

*SLAP*

Minho placed his hand on his red cheek as he angrily looked back at Krystal,who was angrily looking back at him.

''WHAT THE HELL?!'' Minho shouted as he was outraged. ''Why did you do that?!''

''WHY DID YOU KISS ME?! HOW DARE YOU!'' Krystal yelled at the top of her lungs.

''Kiss you?! I was freakin' saving you!'' Minho informed.

''How dare you try to take advantage of me!'' Krystal was extremely angry. ''You have crossed your limits!''

''I was saving you! I thought you were drowning.'' Minho replied.

''I wasn't drowning!'' Krystal scoffed.

''Then why werent you moving?! Your eyes were closed too.'' Minho angrily told.

''I was sleeping!'' Krystal said.

''WHAT?!'' Minho raised his eyebrow.

''I was so tired that I couldn't be bother with this contest so I just slept!'' Krystal rolled her eyes.

''You're ridiculous!'' Minho sniggered.

''WE WON!'' JongNa both jumped as they were first to reach land but then they kept quiet when they saw everyone angrily glaring at them. ''Okay.''

 

''Order up!'' Onew,who was barbequing chicken wings,shouted.

''Thank you!'' Sulli thanked when Onew placed the cooked chicken wings into her plate.

''Anyone else wants any food?'' Onew questioned.

''No we're okay.'' Everyone shook their head.

''It's night time! I think we better sleep.'' Victoria suggested.

''No no! I have a better idea!'' Taemin smirked. ''Let's play truth and dare!''

''Ooooooooo!'' Everyone got interested.

''No no I think it's time to sleep!'' Onew disagreed.

''Stop being so boring and let's play!'' Victoria pulled Onew down on the floor,next to her.

Taemin chuckled as he spinned the bottle,which landed on Luna.

''Truth or Dare?'' Taemin asked.

''These girls are wusses!'' Jonghyun laughed.

''Yeah just give them truth!'' Key agreed.

''YA!'' The girls all shouted.

''I'm not a wuss!'' Luna informed. ''I choose dare!''

''You sure about that?'' Both Taemin and Jonghyun smiled.

''Give me your best shot!'' Luna angrily spoke.

''Fine!'' Taemin was impressed. ''I dare you to stand as long as you can while Jonghyun,here will try to get as close as he can.''

''W-What?!'' Luna was surprised.

''Come on I thought you said you weren't a wuss?'' Jonghyun raised his eyebrow.

''Fine!'' Luna clenched her fist and stood up.

Luna stood still as she saw Jonghyun smiling as he walked up to her.Luna took a deep breath as she saw Jonghyun standing in front of her.Jonghyun smirked as he leaned closer to her blushing face.He was only a few inches away from her face and all Luna could do was stare at his deep brown orbs.She couldn't help but admire his handsome face as her heartbeat pounded extremely fast.Jonghyun stopped leaning closer when his nose touched Luna's.

''Luna?'' Jonghyun's breath was breathing on his skin.

''Y-Yes?'' Luna was extremely red.

''You're...'' Jonghyun stopped talking.

''I'm what?'' Luna was deeply looking at Jonghyun.

''Stupid!'' Jonghyun stuck his tongue at Luna as he stepped back from her and laughed as loud as he could.

''E-Eh?!'' Luna was confused as she couldn't believe what had just happened. ''YA WHAT?!''

''OW?!'' Jonghyun exclaimed when Luna angrily grabbed him and punched him continously.

''Okay I think we're finished now Luna spin the bottle.'' Taemin gave Luna the bottle.

''Oh No!'' Victoria sighed as she saw it was her turn.

''Truth or Dare!'' Luna asked.

''Give her truth!'' All the boys replied. ''Girls are scared anyway.''

''Oh yeah?! Fine I choose Dare!'' Victoria glared at all the boys.

''Give Onew a y dance!'' Luna laughed.

''LUNA?!'' OnToria both glared at Luna.

''Good one!'' Everyone else agreed.

''Fine!'' Victoria grabbed Onew and placed him on a chair.

Victoria smirked as she walked closer to Onew then caressed his face with her index finger,making Onew sweat and be nervous.Victoria then did a cartwheel and smoothly danced around Onew while the others all cheered.Onew looked at all the guys,who were all interestingly only staring at her so he got up and tried to make Victoria stop but once you get Victoria to dance there was no stopping her.

''Okay stop.'' Onew requested but Victoria ignored him. ''Victoria stop!''

''No!'' Victoria danced.

''Stop!'' Onew grabbed Victoria and placed her down to sit.

''Truth or Dare?'' Victoria asked Onew when the bottle landed on him.

''Truth!'' Onew smiled.

''Tsk that's easy.'' Everyone replied.

''If you had the chance to kiss one girl,who would it be?'' Victoria asked.

''Ooooooooo!'' Everyone clapped their hands.

''What?! No one!'' Onew told.

''You have to pick on!'' Everyone replied.

''Okay okay fine! If I had to pick one then....'' Onew gulped his saliva.

''Then?'' Everyone leaned closer.

''Victoria!'' Onew replied which made Victoria to look at Onew.

''Ooooooo!'' Everyone else teased.

''Only because she is the leader! I mean we do get stuck with each other a lot so I just choose her for that reason!'' Onew clarified.

''Yeah sure!'' Everyone sarcastically replied.

''Truth or Dare?'' Onew asked when the bottle landed on Amber.

''Dare!'' Amber replied.

''Since you and Key are such enemies,I would like to see a loving scene between you two.'' Onew said. ''Give Key a hug for 10 seconds.''

''WHAT?!'' KeyBer both raised their eyebrow.

''DO IT! DO IT!'' Everyone else cheered.

''God sake!'' Amber groaned as she gulped her saliva and tightly hugged Key.

''Argh?!'' Key rolled his eyes as he stayed still.

''Are we done yet?'' Amber asked.

''It's only been 5 seconds.'' Everyone laughed.

''Done now?'' Key asked.

''Get this over and done with.'' Amber said.

''Finished!'' Onew told and Amber let go.

''Truth or Dare?'' Amber asked Taemin.

''I'll play it safe for now so Truth!'' Taemin smiled.

''Who is your favourite amongst us girls?'' Amber asked.

''Favourite eh?'' Taemin smirked as he secretly looked at Sulli,who was looking pretty confident as the answer would be her. *Maybe I can have fun with Sul Sul!*

''Who is it?'' Everyone asked.

''Krystal!'' Taemin answered.

''Eh?'' Sulli was surprised as she looked at Taemin.

''Seriously Krystal?!'' Minho raised his eyebrow.

''Thank you Taemin!'' Krystal smiled.

''Why do you look so shocked?'' Taemin looked over at Sulli. ''Were you expecting me to say your name?''

''N-No!'' Sulli looked away.

''Truth or Dare?'' Taemin asked Sulli as the bottle landed on her. ''So what will Miss.Sulli choose? Truth of course right?''

''Dare!'' Sulli replied.

''Wow pretty good!'' Taemin was impressed. ''I don't think you can handle it!''

''I can!'' Sulli disagreed.

''Fine Kiss me!'' Taemin told. ''On the lips!''

''WHAT?! ARE YOU CRAZY?!'' Everyone was shocked especially Sulli,whose eyes went wide.

''What's the matter? Can't Sulli handle it?'' Taemin teased,which angered Sulli.

''S-Seriously?'' Sulli was just speechless.

''You heard me didn't you?'' Taemin spoke back.

''Sulli you don't have to do that!'' Victoria told.

''Yeah!'' Everyone agreed. ''Give Sulli another dare!''

''Fine I told her that she couldn't handle it!'' Taemin scoffed.

''I can!'' Sulli angrily replied then grabbed Taemin's collar and slammed her lips against Taemin's,surprising everyone especially Taemin with this bold act.

Taemin's eyes went wide open as Sulli did the dare while Sulli had her eyes closed.Taemin's face had went red while Sulli's face was much worse.There was a different reaction from each pair.

''Woah!!!!!!!'' Key was shocked.

''I can't believe it!'' Amber blinked her eyes to check if she was seeing right.

''She did it! She did it!'' Luna clapped her hands.

''I know!'' Jonghyun joined along.

''GO SULLI!'' Krystal cheered.

''I don't know what to even say.'' Minho was speechless.

''How dare Taemin gives Sulli this dare!'' Onew was angry.

''He must be punished.'' Victoria agreed.

''There!'' Sulli pushed Taemin away. ''I did your stupid dare!''

''O-Okay.'' Taemin looked away as he was still red.

''How was the kiss?'' Jonghyun taesed.

''Tsk playboy Taemin would say it's average right?'' Key laughed. ''He has had more girlfriends than anyone of us could ever have.''

Sulli clenched her fists as she tried to control her tears.For Taemin this could have been a kiss,could have meant nothing but this meant so much more for her.This was her first kiss and she gave it to a player,who doesn't even care if this was her first kiss.

''Tsk yeah! This isn't my first kiss.'' Taemin lied when in fact this was his first kiss as well.

''Truth or Dare?'' Sulli angrily asked as she spinned the bottle,which landed on Minho.

''Oh..uhm..truth.'' Minho,well in fact everyone,could sense Sulli was angry.

''Have you ever had a crush on Krystal?'' Sulli angrily asked.

''No!'' Minho replied.

Minho grabbed the bottle and spinned it around then.......THE BOTTLE LANDED ON KRYSTAL!!!! Krystal's eyes went wide open as she knew Minho will never give her an easy dare.She looked at Minho,who was smirking evily as he happily clapped his hands.Whatever it was,it would be the hardest dare she had ever received.

''YES!!!!!!!'' Minho was so happy that he did a dance of happiness.

''It's pointing at the sea!'' Krystal tried to escape. ''It's not me!''

''Sorry Krystal it's you!'' Everyone sighed.

''That's what I am talking about!'' Minho did a victory dance. ''Now we shall see how it goes Krystal Jung!''

''Calm down Minho!'' Everyone forced him to sit down.

''So Krystal Soojung Jung what will it be?'' Minho questioned. ''Truth or Dare?''


Author-Nim=Thank you all very much for reading chapter 28! Thank you very much for all the people who commented and I hope you have all enjoyed this chapter! 

I'm back!!!! So much has happened in this chapter! Onew protecting Victoria when he saw the other boys all staring at her when she was dancing while Victoria yelling at Onew since he was too slow,Key calling Amber fat while Amber is forced to hug Key as a dare,Luna feel her heart beating as Jonghyun gets closer to her while Jonghyun is teasing her at the end of the dare,TaeLli both have their first kiss while Taemin lies at the end saying this isn't his first kiss while Sulli tries to control her tears,MinStal both share the kiss of life but poor Minho gets slapped but then let's see what Minho's dare is ;)

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yuuki_18 #1
Chapter 60: can you kindly pls.. continue the story
Kyoko99
#2
Chapter 59: Author-nim plz write more jongna stories.
when I first heard of him passing away I thought I'll quit kpop,cuz ring ding dong starts with him..but then I thought it is the wrong way so I decided to be a loyal shawol forever.
...right now I believe he never left us and this way we can keep him closer to our hearts .
I really liked your story btw^_^
Kyoko99
#3
Chapter 20: Omg this is the best chapter until now...when I read about 8 kids I was laughing like a crazy fool XD XD XD
Minstal9194
#4
Chapter 60: As always, the content is amazing. As I was reading it, teaes was coming out.
Thank you as always author-nim.
I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
nickhuntoria
#5
Chapter 60: I'm crying while reading this. And thank you for listening at my reasons. Love you author-nim ♡♡♡♡♡...
Let's be happy for Jonghyun and let us always remind him that he did well. Okay?
me2078 #6
Chapter 59: I still can't believe the news until now. Felt so empty knowing that he won't be with us anymore. I will accept any decision you make. Stay strong and take care.
minstalLuvers_94 #7
Chapter 59: I will accept your decision
nickhuntoria
#8
Chapter 59: I feel sorry too. As a Shawol, I still can't accept the reality that he is now away from our existence.even though I don't wanna believe it, it still happened.
Don't worry what ever your decision we are going to accept it as a respect for you and jonghyun
Minstal9194
#9
Chapter 59: As a reader of the book, I will support what decision u come up with. I also think it will be hard for u to keep on writing so if u want to stop then I will support ur decision.
Minstal9194
#10
Chapter 58: Sorry for not commenting earrlier. I was on holiday so I didn't have time to read.
The chapter is really great Moments of Tarlli and Minstal are the best.
Looking forward to the next chapter.