Do you Believe in Ghosts? | Written by Tinkle_Star| Review Written By Donghaeloverisme

I would like to ask you about the title. Why are some of the words capitalized and some not capitalized? I believed that you thought that "Ghost" should be like names. It's fine many people have the same thinking as you but why must you capitalize the "B" in believe.  This would give the impression to readers that you are inconsistent in punctuation; or you forgot the punctuation rules.

So I would prefer you either put all capital letters for the first letter of each word for the title, or you don't put any capital letters unless the 'D' from do as it is the first letter in the first word, for the title. It's your choice.

The poster is cool, it's a great choice that you made for choosing that graphic shop. Sorry but I would like to point out something in the poster, shouldn't it be 'ghosts' in the poster? It should be plural as you introduce more than one ghost in the story and your title also states "ghosts". I presume it is just a minor mistake made by either parties.

I found some mistakes in your description but I had to compliment the interesting description you wrote despite some errors. So, let's look at the mistakes. "Like all the others who eventually die..." Those people dying are already 'dead' so it's past tense, thus you cannot use 'die'. 'Die' is present tense. So you should change it to this. "Like all the others who eventually died."   "However, on one Halloween an unexpected situation occurs. One that never happened in the history of Halloween." This sentence's structure is a little awkward and it has tenses error too. 'On one Halloween' in this scenario sounds funny. I'll write this if I were you. "However, on a certain Halloween day. An unexpected situation occurred; one that never happened in the history of Halloweens." I changed it and elaborate on that Halloween, it would be better to say that Halloween is an occasion. A day to be specific. 'In the history of Halloween', the Halloween should be in plural form as in history there are a lot of Halloween occasions alrea