Incompletion by anastasiaeka
Review by inspiriterz

Title:

In my opinion, the title 'Incompletion' is a little vague and cliche as it is also a title that many often used. When i first read through the title,some questions popped up in my head like why do you use the title 'incompletion'? Will it be a sad story? this questions just randomly popped in my head as it gives me the sad romance kind of feeling telling me that YoonYul had a bad relationship or they do not get along well with each other. Only until reading the contents of your story i feel that your title is indeed suitable for your YoonYul story. To this point, you did a fantastic job in choosing the title. 

Foreword/Description:

For your foreword and description part, i do not have much to say. The one sentence on your foreword is 'incompletion:the state of lacking something or of having failed to complete something.' I really liked the way that your wrote the meaning of your main title. It gives the reader including me a vivid image of what the story is going to be about and i must say that it is a really great way to start your foreword/description. Not many authors will put the meaning on their foreword and description page but i feel that you should add a little more information so that readers will have a more clear image on how the story goes. Adding on, i must say that the trailer is well done! This trailer really feels like your summing up the whole story and its a great hint for viewers/readers. Good Job! 

Plot/storyline:

Well the plot is awesome as i can fully tell how the YoonYul relationship is going. Thinking of making Donghae is also a good way on writing a part of the story but when i read it, i a