The Lucky Kind of Reckless| Written by: hopelessly_hopeful| Review Written by Donghaeloverime

I would like to say that this is one of the best Eunhae fics I ever read, I'm not lying. It is so beautifully-written which surprised me when you wanted me to give you harsh criticism. Ok, I'll tell you what I love and some errors and opinions that I found when I was reading.
"....worth of homework because there is nohing better to do."
I suppose that 'nothing' was spelled incorrectly because you didn't notice it so change it.

Sorry for asking this but I'm thinking about this for a long time. Since you depicted Hyukjae as a 'nerd', a nerd would use words like ' ' and the using of the middle finger. Sorrry but I don't think it is very realistic since my class has a lot of nerds. They just piss me off because they are the gentle types and will never use these vulgar words like us. They use their knowledge and their 'good words' (words which we don't even know) to win the argument so I hate them.

Sorry to drag the story to my class but I just don't find a nerd like Hyukjae thinking of vulgar words, they have only have a sophisticated mind. Tell me your thoughts about this too, I suppose a review should not be just a reviewer writing his/her thoughts in the review but I would like to also see the writer's thoughts. Maybe you know of nerds that are similar to the Hyukjae that you depicted in your story? Well, we never know since the world is so big and unpredictable.

But there is this sentence which is structured awkwardly. Here this is the sentence:

"Get that mother ing thing off of me."
I don't think that "off and of" could be used together here. I would prefer you removing an "of (f)" preferably the "of".
So it should be:
" Get that mother ing thing off me."
This sounded better in my opinion. I suppose this would just be a "mis-look" when checking (is there even a word like that?).

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