"The tragic Murder of a Saesang Fan" by joongdook.
Reviewed by Nicolaaahearts.

Title.
The title does exactly what it says on the tin, so to speak! It's clear from it what the plot is going to revolve around and it's short and interestingly unique enough to catch the readers attention. 

Foreword and Description.
Both were absolutely perfect! The description is short and sweet enough to leave you wanting more and you've written it so that the reader will easily want to delve into chapter one and beyond. The font and spacing is clear and precise making it an even easier read. 

I absolutely love the fact you've added the chracters and their pictures. I'm a big fan of foreword's including their characters and people that they're writing about because it gives you clear ideas about who is who. It's obvious who the people are because obviously all your characters aside from the main one are idols, but their jobs are obviously not idols in this one aside from Jonghyun.

The music playlist was a surprise addition, but also a fantastic one. It's always nice to know what writers were listining to when they started to write their stories or just even when their ideas were forming. Although I don't like to listen to music and read at the same time, I did so with this one and I found that the songs just matched the story to a tee. It saves readers picking their own music to listen to when it might not end up matching the flow and plit of what they're reading.

Writing style and language.
Your style of writing is one I absolutely loved to read through. Everything is clear and I waltzed through the first ten chapters very quickly, as the way you laid out the story made it easier for me to swallow up each and every chapter.

The only thing I would advise is that everytime there's a post on her blog, or something she's written, or texts between the characters, that you style that bit of the story different, for example:

You: [23:52:16] JH confirmed, gtg. (TrueTreasure?)
Me: [23:52:16] JH confirmed, gtg. (TrueTreasure?)

I think that just helps clear up that it's something other than just pure dialogue, and helps to add