Title: 5/5
I found the title very fitting of your story.  

Description/Foreword: 8/10
Since this is a oneshot collection, there isn’t really much to comment on specifically.  First, I’d suggest looking through all of the pictures you’ve posted in the description again.  Some links have expired, so you should either replace them or just delete them.  Also, while it is nice to see all of the pairings listed, it isn’t really necessary.  If it is all mentioned in the table of contents, you don’t need a listing of pairings.

Poster/Background: —/10
There isn’t a set poster for this oneshot, so it will not be counted.

Characterization: 15/15
For a twoshot, you do a pretty good job with characterization.  All of the characters seemed real--people I could imagine passing by in the street.  The characterization makes this very enjoyable to read.

Spelling/Grammar: 19/20
Minus a few minor errors that rereading could fix, your grammar is impressive.  There isn’t much to point out here.

Flow: 9/10
The flashbacks were a bit confusing at first, but once I got used to your writing style, the flow was smooth.  

Originality/Plot: 23/25
While the general idea of this twoshot is cliche, you turn it into something of your own through plot twists and details.  You were able to interpret and use the theme of the song to write a fanfiction.  You did base some of the writing off of a song with the same title, though.

Enjoyment: 5/5
Very enjoyable read.

Total: 84/90 → 93/100

General Comments:
There wasn’t much to say about this twoshot because of the fact that it was well-written in the first place.  Congratulations on making the recommended fanfics section!  Anyway, I’m sorry that this review took so long, but thank you so much for requesting a review.