Who's my Boyfriend? - AnnPark (Reviewer: cyberchasefan200)
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Title: Who's my Boyfriend?
Author: AnnPark
Title: 5/5
It’s simple yet to the point.
Poster/Trailer: 4/5
It’s very cute. The colors match the theme of the story and its pretty well made.
Flow: 10/10
Flowed well together. The story was straight forward.
Description: 7/10
It’s a very simple description. It doesn’t grab my attention though. It’s very ... plain? Maybe something like
LIGHTS ... CAMERA ... ROMANCE! Starship Entertainment just debuted a fresh, brand new girl group called Elements. The company forces them to be guests on a variety show with their label mates, Boyfriend, romance starts to spark between both groups. Is this romance all an act for the camera? Or are the members actually starting to have feelings more than friendship for one another?
Yeah mine’s not all that amazing either but I feel it would grab more of the attention to the reader.
Plot: 19/20
It’s a very good plot. It reminds me of the spin – off variety show (of We Got Married) that Girl’s Day and U-Kiss did together. Mixed with Running Man and We Got Married x)
Grammar/Spelling: 8/10
There were a few. First off, its COLORS not COLOURS. Maybe it’s spelled differently where you are but that was just really bothering me.
Also you put ‘ instead of “ in some of your dialogue.
Writing Style: 20/20
Ending: 19/20
It was cute:) Your chapters should be a bit longer though. Maybe for the shopping parts but in the future it should be longer.
Overall: 92/100
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