Lets Learn Korean! With ELF-fishy - ELF-fishy (Reviewer: jokerkkhe22)

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Story: Lets Learn Korean! With ELF-fishy

Author: ELF-fishy

 

 

 

Since your fanfiction is a tutorial, I will use my rubric for tutorial fanfiction.

Title 3/5

Well, not very special.

Lets -> Let’s

Appearance 5/5

Your poster is cute. The background made the whole studying more relaxed.

Description and Foreword 5/5

You guaranteed that the tutorial will be very easy and readers will eventually know how to speak Korean. It persuades readers to read and built up their self confidence.

Helpfulness 30/30

It really helped me a lot and you explained well. I could actually understand the first Korean transcript test you gave.

English 28/30

You have no grammar mistake as I see and I perfectly understand the Korean you translated. But you have some spelling typo mistakes.

Arrangement and neatness 18/20

Some chapters have deleted videos and it cause uneasiness. But overall, your tutorial is very neat and I love how you put a picture as main image at every chapter.

Comment 4/5

Fairly good. I see you didn’t reply back but you’re asking for comments.

Overall: 93/100

A very high score that I ever given. Great tutorial!

 

 

 


 

 

 

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grldrgn
#1
Chapter 5: Is the story about cl and onew wgm removed? Omg so sad :'(
Pabolicious #2
applied as a reviewer :)))
glowbug #3
applied as a reviewer!
salvatore
#4
applied as a reviewer :)
littlelu
#5
Chapter 101: My review?
pandaeyesxxi
#6
Chapter 109: Thanks for the review!!~
Eyagibba
#7
Chapter 3: thanks for review
h3d1ez
#8
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Fake_D
#9
Chapter 104: Thank you so much for the review. Actually 'As Blood Runs Black' is actually a short fic for a contest I joined. I had to rush things up because they set a limit to the chapters in the rules and unfortunately it had to be under 7 chapters(if im not mistaken). So I had no chance to explain what not and what happened to JongUp. I admit it that it was too rushy towards the end because I didn't realize I made the first few chapters too slow. I was thinking of a spin-off for this short story so that I could explain on what happened to JongUp back then that had turned him that way. Anyhow, thank you for the review, I appreciate it. ^^
littlelu
#10
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