I'm Yours - MissTangerine (Reviewer: Bluapple)

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Title: I'm Yours
Author: MissTangerine
 
 
 
Story Title: 4/5
 Comment:
 Not that catchy though, but unique on its own way. :D
 
Poster/Banner: 4/5
 Comment:
 Really points out the characters but use hd pics next time! :D
  
Description/Foreword: 9/10
 Comment:
Just nonsense on the description, but your foreword is jjang, and I shall say that you have a wide vocabulary. No mistakes seen on the foreword. :D
 
Chapter Titles: 0/5
 Comment:
No chappie titles, Sorry but I really want to have these!   
 
 Storyline: 18/20
 Comment:
Your plot is actually interesting because its making us guess who’ll end up with Dara. And it’s thrilling for me! It’s not that common and it’s really hard to make a storyline like this, so yeah!
  
Grammar/Spelling: 17/20
 Comment:
Just noticed some errors on your tenses, you keep on changing it, but as I’ve said you have a wide vocabulary, so it takes out on the story well. Watch out your capitalizations.
 
 Originality: 7/10
 Comment:
Having all those three guys crushing on her, it makes the story good coz it makes the readers guess and find out soon what will happen next. Although I’ve seen some stories with the same scenes, it’s fine.
 
Flow: 10/10
 Comment:
No interruptions, just going with the flow. That’s jjang! :D
 
Characters: 9/10
 Comment:
Although all of the guys like Dara, they do have differences on their attitudes! Nice, well written. And Dara stays as she is! :D
 
Style of Writing: 4/5
 Comment:
Clean and NEAT with not so many errors.
 
BONUS: 5/5
It’s interesting and I felt like your readers loves you too. Just look up on your tenses and capitalizations,
 
*Just finished reviewing your fic MISSTANGERINE! Sorry if it takes time but it’s all settled now. And I do love your fic, I just hope that DARA WILL END UP WITH JIYONG! Because I really do love them too as much as i love my requesters! Nyahahaha! :D ANDDD this is my first reviewed fic that reached over 80% congratulations! :D
 
p.s
If there is any problems, Pm me.
Sincerely yours,
Bluapple ♥
 
Total: 87/105
 
 
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grldrgn #1
Chapter 5: Is the story about cl and onew wgm removed? Omg so sad :'(
Pabolicious #2
applied as a reviewer :)))
glowbug #3
applied as a reviewer!
salvatore #4
applied as a reviewer :)
littlelu #5
Chapter 101: My review?
pandaeyesxxi #6
Chapter 109: Thanks for the review!!~
Eyagibba #7
Chapter 3: thanks for review
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Fake_D #9
Chapter 104: Thank you so much for the review. Actually 'As Blood Runs Black' is actually a short fic for a contest I joined. I had to rush things up because they set a limit to the chapters in the rules and unfortunately it had to be under 7 chapters(if im not mistaken). So I had no chance to explain what not and what happened to JongUp. I admit it that it was too rushy towards the end because I didn't realize I made the first few chapters too slow. I was thinking of a spin-off for this short story so that I could explain on what happened to JongUp back then that had turned him that way. Anyhow, thank you for the review, I appreciate it. ^^
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