Make A Wish Upon SHINee - hyo_jinki (Reviewer: cyberchasefan200)
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Title: Make A Wish Upon SHINee
Author: hyo_jinki
Title: 5/5
It’s perfect. It’s similar to what the story is about and it isn’t like too long nor too short.
Poster/Trailer: 0/5
It’s not a bad poster but it really doesn’t suit the story at all. I know it’s supposed to be a fun story but the colors just don’t go with each other and it just doesn’t work.
Flow: 9/10
I was confused a little somewhere in the middle but I think it was just because I read a bit too fast. The flow is very straightforward and doesn’t drag on too much.
Description: 10/10
It’s very fun and colorful and it explains just enough information without giving too much. The look of it also matches because the story is fun, cute, and humorous.
Plot: 18/20
That’s a very interesting plot actually. I remember some idol group did it though as like a small segment. I think it was B2ST. It's not the most original but it's a very good plot.
Grammer/Spelling: 9/10
Writing Style: 19/20
You give a lot of nice detail and I am able to understand everything well.
Ending: 19/20
No ending yet but the latest chapter was....awesome:D Onew ... ugh xP
Total: 89
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