The Idiot's Guide To Defrosting Her Heart - xXxKakusa-na-BaraxXx (Reviewer: cyberchasefan200)
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Story Title: The Idiot's Guide To Defrosting Her Heart
Author: xXxKakusa-na-BaraxXx
Title: 4/5
It's a good title. It works with the story but the guide part? The Idiot's Guide .. when I see that I think more like it's teaching you something. I guess there will be some sort of moral or whatever (most stories have an indirect moral that nobody really knows or cares about). It's okay though because I can't think of a different title(:
Poster/Trailer: 5/5
The colors are legit PERFECT. I don't know why but because the story gives that real life type of feel, the colors also give a similar vibe. I like that fact a character chart was used as the poster. I mean to me it's a character chart at lease because it shows the characters at the bottom. A lot of people don't do that.
Flow: 10/10
The story was like a book. It went from one event to the next with just enough detail.
Description: 9/10
Haha. Cleverly written. It gave a clear explanation with a small background about the story.
Plot: 16/20
Keke. CA-PRICE. That's quite an interesting name! General plot is helping the main character want to fall in love again. I've seen it before. But yours has a twist because it has a pairing helping plus a love interest helping her.
Grammar/Spelling: 10/10
Clean! I didn't find and spelling mistakes. Or nothing that I saw at least.
Writing Style: 19/20
CLEAN. Your writing style was clear. I knew who was talking, thinking, etc.
Ending: 15/20
AWW. The latest chapter, (chapter 8) was so cute! I found it adorable. I just loved it<3(: But I'm not getting the kind of feeling that I want to keep reading. Okay let me explain. I didn't hate the story. I actually really like it! It's just I got kinda bored a little bit. That chapter didn't give me that feeling of wanting more.
Overall: 88/100
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