I Fell In Love With A Bad Boy - TiaraL (Reviewer: cyberchasefan200)

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Author: TiaraL
 
 
 
Title: 5/5
Perfect<3 It describes the story perfectly!
 
Poster/Trailer: 4/5 
It seems a tiny bit too girly for me. Maybe without Taemin in the picture frame and like his whole body showing next to a nerdy girl. With like more blues and yellows and greens. It's well made though. 
 
Flow: 10/10 
The story was like a book. It went from one event to the next with just enough detail.
 
Description: 9/10
It was good. Well written and gave just enough information without giving away too much but not too little.
 
Plot: 15/20 
It reminds me of that anime Maid-Sama except she's a nerd and not a leader, controlling girl. Maybe not the most original idea but it was still a good plot. I love these kinds of plots. LOVE EM'. Arrogant/mean/y guys falling in love with the nerd are the BEST stories to read!
 
Grammar/Spelling: 10/10 
Clean! I didn't find and spelling mistakes. Or nothing that I saw at least.
 
Writing Style: 19/20
I know so many writer who write their stories exactly like you! Kinda strange isn't it? It's clean and easy to follow.
 
Ending: 20/20
 
CLIFFHANGER ARGGGG!! Seriously. I hate cliffhangers. It was so good I didn't actually think you would leave off there! What's gonna happen?! Wah...~ Better update soon cause I am DYING to know!
 
Overall: 92/100
 

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grldrgn
#1
Chapter 5: Is the story about cl and onew wgm removed? Omg so sad :'(
Pabolicious #2
applied as a reviewer :)))
glowbug #3
applied as a reviewer!
salvatore
#4
applied as a reviewer :)
littlelu
#5
Chapter 101: My review?
pandaeyesxxi
#6
Chapter 109: Thanks for the review!!~
Eyagibba
#7
Chapter 3: thanks for review
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#8
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Fake_D
#9
Chapter 104: Thank you so much for the review. Actually 'As Blood Runs Black' is actually a short fic for a contest I joined. I had to rush things up because they set a limit to the chapters in the rules and unfortunately it had to be under 7 chapters(if im not mistaken). So I had no chance to explain what not and what happened to JongUp. I admit it that it was too rushy towards the end because I didn't realize I made the first few chapters too slow. I was thinking of a spin-off for this short story so that I could explain on what happened to JongUp back then that had turned him that way. Anyhow, thank you for the review, I appreciate it. ^^
littlelu
#10
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