Four seasons - wynterleejiyul (Reviewer: cyberchasefan20)
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Title: Four seasons
Author: wynterleejiyul
Title: 5/5
Clever! You included each chapter (except the Final because it was just a repeat, Spring) a different season and each one represents a different point in time.
Poster/Trailer: 1/5
It’s a really well made poster but it doesn’t really portray the seasons. If I had to choose it would probably shows spring the most. Since the story is called Four Seasons and the setting is based around the Four Seasons then the poster should show it as well.
Flow: 10/10
Flowed well together. The story was straight forward.
Description: 7/10
It’s an attention grabber. I was instantly hooked into the story after reading it. There are just grammar issues such as capitalization for each line.
Plot: 19/20
Loved the plot! I wasn’t expecting the ending at all! I’ve read of the general idea of different things happening to someone during the four seasons.
Grammar/Spelling: 10/10
I didn’t find any mistakes and all the sentences made sense.
Writing Style: 20/20
Your writing style is so beautiful. It’s so clear and descriptive. I love it! I wish more authors had your kind of writing style.
Ending: 19/20
Aww it was so sad! It was so good though.
Overall: 91/100
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