The Lux of Love - CrystalxDoLL (Reviewer: cyberchasefan200)
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Title: The Lux of Love
Author: CrystalxDoLL
Title: 5/5
I'm a babo. I don't understand the meaning behind the title lol. Like WTF is wrong with me? But it has a mystery with a hint of romance feel and I like it(:
Poster/Trailer: 4/5
It's a well made poster. But the kind of pictures used for some of the characters don't work. Like Yoseob has a charismic picture when in the story he's not very charismic but very cute. I think Taemin should have showed his face instead of wearing a hoodie and sunglasses. He doesn't seem like that character in the story. It is a well made poster though.
Flow: 10/10
I had to read a few parts over but only because I read way too fast >.<
Description: 10/10
You introduced the very beginning and left a mysterious ending. I really liked it. It gave just enough to get the reader interested.
Plot: 20/20
I have never heard a story like that before. Wow writers are so creative these days!
Grammar/Spelling: 8/10
There were a few spelling errors. "Aryt" is supposed to be "Art". You did that a few times. There were a few punctuation mistakes. Also when you write a sound effect put the in the little star things " *THUD* " I thought Taemin said THUD when she fainted
Writing Style: 20/20
It was clear. Between POV's you put a few enters. (Which is a good thing) You used good descriptive words also. I was able to understand the story very clearly.
Ending: 19/20
The last chapter (chapter 26) was AMAZING. I feel bad for Kwangmin :( Taemin like do you love her or not ?! Left me questioning a million things(: Good last chapter. BUT you MUST update soon! I really wanna know what happens(:
Overall: 96/100
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