Lets Learn Korean! With ELF-fishy - ELF-fishy (Reviewer: jokerkkhe22)
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Story: Lets Learn Korean! With ELF-fishy
Author: ELF-fishy
Since your fanfiction is a tutorial, I will use my rubric for tutorial fanfiction.
Title 3/5
Well, not very special.
Lets -> Let’s
Appearance 5/5
Your poster is cute. The background made the whole studying more relaxed.
Description and Foreword 5/5
You guaranteed that the tutorial will be very easy and readers will eventually know how to speak Korean. It persuades readers to read and built up their self confidence.
Helpfulness 30/30
It really helped me a lot and you explained well. I could actually understand the first Korean transcript test you gave.
English 28/30
You have no grammar mistake as I see and I perfectly understand the Korean you translated. But you have some spelling typo mistakes.
Arrangement and neatness 18/20
Some chapters have deleted videos and it cause uneasiness. But overall, your tutorial is very neat and I love how you put a picture as main image at every chapter.
Comment 4/5
Fairly good. I see you didn’t reply back but you’re asking for comments.
Overall: 93/100
A very high score that I ever given. Great tutorial!
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