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** Lady_Mitsuki
Birthday: June 10
Requests can be taken by week: 1-3 (I'm on exams, that's why)
Review: Rated and Non Rated Fanfics
Any type of fanfics you prefer? I review everything. I personally don't like sad/angst fanfics but I think that if a fanfic makes me cry then it's because it's good. I review everything, it's not because I don't usually read it or is my favorite type that I won't give an impartial review. So don't worry that much!
Personal Message: Hi, how are you? Don't be afraid of me, everything I say is to help you improving... I don't bite :P
Rubric:
Title [_/10]:
Is your title eye catching or too common? Is it related with the story?
Sometimes I feel people want to give original titles but they forget to relate it with the story itself.
Description/Foreword [_/10]:
Is your description interesting? Does it give you an idea of what the story is about or it changes a lot from the main plot? How appealing is it?
Originality [_/10]
I care a lot about this part. I’m kinda tired of reading the same kind of fanfics all over again, always the same plot, just different characters.
However, even if the story itself is not that original if your writing is good and the plot interesting I’ll consider it too. If it has some twists, it’s also ok.
Plot/Writing [_/22]:
Did you develop the story well? Is it confusing? Your way of writing, is it appealing? Boring? What did I feel reading it?
I review all types but I don’t really like sad stories (>.<). It’s really frustrating to read a great fanfic, a great romance, and then know the main guy/girl died. I’m also like that with dramas, it ruins the story for me kkk
Anyway, even if it’s sad stories you can ask me to review. I’ll still be fair even thought I don’t really like it, coz I think a good angst fanfic shows the quality of the ficwriter as well.
Characters [_/10]:
Were your characters interesting? Confusing? Too contradictory?
Grammar/Vocabulary [_/23]
Here I’ll evaluate your grammar/vocabulary.
Even though your native language is not English, if you want to write a fanfic you need to know the basics right? And a bad grammar doesn’t let the readers understand the story, right?
And not only that, a good ficwriter is the one who not only is original or knows how to captivate his readers but also who is able to get away from the basic “X replied; G asked”, gives more descriptions and has more vocabulary.
How much I enjoyed your story / Overall Excitement [_/10]
Was I willing to keep reading your story? Was it boring?
I’ll give you my true opinion about your story in general and also give you some bonus points if I feel you deserve it.
Extra [_/5]:
Poster/Background/Chapter Titles/Chapters Length
Don't worry if you have no poster. I'll make sure to count other things.
If your fanfic’s qualification is not that positive, I can give you some points if I feel you deserved it from your effort/dedication to it.
Bonus [_/10]:
If your fanfic is amazing you can surpass 100, but I'm kinda strict so.... It has to be really good! ^^
[Points: 0-100] - Max: 115
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** iamsobizarre/mafalda
Birthday: April 12
Requests can be taken by week: 1-3
Review: Non rated fanfics. As for rated, rated /Yuri fanfics only
Any type of fanfics you prefer? None.
Personal Message: I will be pretty strict on this! Of course, I'm nice :) But I hope to do a good work as a reviewer!
Rubric:
Title [/10]
(If it's catchy or not)
Foreword [/10]
(if it's appealing to the readers - in this case, me)
Creativity/Originality [/10]
Plot/Writing [/20]
Usually, what I like while reading is being able to imagine the whole scenario, so I will count a lot if it's well described
Characters [/20]
How they are described. I like strong and "deep" characters, I love to understand the way they think.
Grammar/Spelling [/20];
(verbes, especially!)
My opinion [/10]
(meaning, if I like the story or not)
Cover [/2]
(optional, only if you have.)
TOTAL: [100+2]
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** TiaraL
[HIATUS]
Nickname: Tia
Birthday: September 18
Requests can be taken by week: 1-3
Review: Non Rated Fanfics
Any type of fanfics you prefer? Any type is alright as long as there is no .
Personal Message: Hai there!~ ^_^ I'm new at reviewing, but I will try my best to be helpful and give good advice!~ I love writing and reading, so please don't hesitate to request and I will get to work on your review as soon as possible! <3 Neomu neomu kamsahamnida!~
Rubric:
Title: 0/5
Description/Foreword: 0/5
Plot: 0/40
(Originality)
(Character)
(Flow)
(Ending if applicable)
Writing style: 0/20
(Grammar)
(Vocabulary)
Organization: 0/10
Overall enjoyment: 0/20
Total: 100
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** cyberchasefan200
Nickname: Bells
Birthday: May 17
Requests can be taken by week: 1-3
Review: Rated and Non rated Fanfics
Any type of fanfics you prefer? Cute, Romance, Arranged Marriage, Fluff, School-life, When the y popular guy falls for the nerd/enemy
Personal Message: I'm not mean but I'll be honest with you. If something is wrong with the story, I will tell you. I'm available often and don't hesitate to message me with any concerns or questions you may have(:
Rubric:
Title: ~/5
(Say whether the title matches story)
Poster/Trailer: ~/5
(Say whether the poster/trailer makes people want to read the story. Also how it fits with the story line and how well made it is)
Flow: ~/10
(Say whethere everything is going smooth. Nothing really confusing and the details fit well with each other)
Description: ~/10
(Say whether it gives the reader enough info without revealing too much. A basic overview)
Plot: ~/20
(Say how creative it is,how it's written, and if it matches the story)
Grammer/Spelling: ~/10
(Say what is mis-spelled, punctuation errors, etc.)
Writing Style: ~/20
(Say how well the story is written. If dialogue is separated enough so the reader knows who is speaking and when.
Also it is written in a way readers can understand)
Ending: ~/20
(Say how well the story ended. If the ending fit well with the story as a whole. If there is no ending then from the latest chapter)
Overall: ~/100
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** ShineBFIsland501
[Hiatus]
Nickname: Ari
Birthday: February 14
Requests can be taken by week: 1-3
Review: Non Rated Fanfics
Any type of fanfics you prefer? I love to read stories that are romantic, funny, mysterious and about school life. I often read stories about SHINee, Boyfriend and EXO.
Personal Message: Anyonghaeseyo~ Ari-imnida. I am here because I want to help you improve your writing. I will try my best to complete reviews as fast as I can and I will be honest. I can be lenient or strict so it's your choice.
Rubric:
Title: /5 (Is it to common? Is it eye-catching? Is it relevant to the story?) Poster/Background/Trailer:/10 (Is it interesting? Does it fit your story?) Description/Foreword:/15 (Did I find it interesting? Did it give away too much from the story?) Plot:/25 (Was it original? Was it interesting?) Grammar:/15 (Did I find any spelling mistakes?) Flow:/5 (Did the story flow too fast or to slow?) Readers' Comments: /5 (Did you leave them wanting more? Did they ask you to update soon?) Characters: /15 (Were the characters that you added important to the story?) Overall Enjoyment:/5 (Did I like your story? Would I subscribe to your story?) Bonus:/5 (This could be because of your writing style!Or it could be because you've created great cliffhangers.) Total: _ /100
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ily4everbang
Nickname: Nara
Birthday: January 13
Requests can be taken by week: 1-3
Review: Rated and Non Rated Fanfics
Any type of fanfics you prefer? Anything is fine
Personal Message: I'm not harsh when it comes to English because there are a lot people who speak English as a second language. I do for instant. So I'm really nice when it comes to that. I give a honest review I swear.
Rubric:
Title (--/5)
Poster (--/5)
Description/Foreword (--/15)
Plot (--/25)
Characters (--/15)
Spelling/Grammar (--/20)
Flow (--/5)
Overall Enjoyment: (--/10)
Total: --/100
********************************* jaeholly
[Hiatus]
Nickname: Sherry
Birthday: August 2
Requests can be taken by week: 1-3
Review: Rated and Non Rated Fanfics
Any type of fanfics you prefer? I review all genre
Personal Message: I give really honest and non-biased review. I do not sugar coat or anything. Although I am a strict review, I will make sure your review is of quality and something you can make reference to for improvement.
Rubric:
Title: [-/5]
Poster:[-/5]
Foreword & Description:[-/5]
Characterization:[-/10]
Originality:[-/5]
Plot:[-/15]
Spelling/Grammar/Punctuation:[-/25]
Writing Style:[-/10]
Flow:[-/5]
Enjoyment:[-/10]
Bonus:[-/5]
Total:[-/100]
********************************* jokerkkhe22
Birthday: November 1
Requests can be taken by week: 1-3
Review: Rated and Non Rated Fanfics
Any type of fanfics you prefer? I'm not choosy
Personal Message: I am kinda harsh in reviews, but I promise those are honest words.Please don't bash me ^^ teehee
Rubric:
Title 5
Poster, graphics, etc 5
Description and foreword 10
The English 35
Plot 20
Arrangement 30
Originality 10
Viewer's comments 5
Overall : 120
********************************* awesomeGEE
[Hiatus]
Nickname: Gee
Birthday: January 21
Requests can be taken by week: 1-3
Review: Rated and Non Rated Fanfics
Any type of fanfics you prefer? No preferences >.< I like any genres :)
Personal Message: Hi there ^^ *bows a gazillion times* I'm here because I want to help you develop your writing skills :) Hope you don't get offended by any of my reviews... I might be harsh at times, but that's cos I care <3 I'll try my best to give you my honest opinions :D Thanksies~
Rubric: Title [ _ /5] Can the title grab someone's attention? Titles should be simple yet meaningful. Description/Foreword [ _ /10] Can your description spur someone to read on? It should not be like a summary of your story. And it should not be too vague either. Creativity/Originality [ _ /10] Is your story a cliché one? Or does it have a special “edge” that separates itself from other stories? Flow [ _ /20] The pace of your story shouldn’t be too fast, neither should it be too slow. Characterization [ _ /20] Are your characters introduced at the right pace or do they abruptly join the story? How well does each character match the theme of your story? Writing Style [ _ /20] Grammar: How well are your sentences constructed? I also look out for spelling and punctuation – 10 points Vocabulary: Your choice of words – 10 points Poster and Background [ _ /5] – if applicable How well does your poster fit with the theme of your story? Is it too messy? Does it attract your reader’s attention? Overall Enjoyment [ _ /10] Well, this speaks for itself, doesn’t it? :) Total: _/100
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xXxKakusa-na-BaraxXx
Nickname: Lisa
Birthday: December 14
Requests can be taken by week: 1-3
Review: Rated (no ) and Non Rated Fanfics
Any type of fanfics you prefer? Romance, angst, friendship, hurt/comfort.
Personal Message: Hello, world~ My name is Lisa, and I am a blunt, straightforward kind of person. I will not mince my words, so I apologize in advance if I hurt your feelings. My reviews tend to be long and extremely detailed, and I will do my best to help you. Despite my strict reviewing style, I'm actually quite a nice person outside of reviewing. I love to work with those who devote much to their stories.
Rubric:
Title: [/5]
Graphics: [/10]
(Aesthetics [/5] ; Suitability [5])
Description/Foreword: [/10]
(Interest [/5] ; Suitability [/5])
Plot: [/15]
(Originality [/5] ; Complexity [/5] ; Believability/Canon [/5])
Characters: [/15]
(Originality [/15] ; Complexity [/5] ; Believability/Canon [/5])
Flow: [/10]
(Pace [/5] ; Ease of reading [/5])
Writing: [/25]
(Organization/Writing Style [/5] ; Imagery/Vocabulary Use [/5] ; Grammar/Conventions [/15])
Overall Enjoyment [/10]
Ending: [/5]
Extra/Bonus: [/5]
Total: [/105 + 5]
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buttercupsecret
Nickname: Valen
Birthday: February 14
Requests can be taken by week: 1-3
Review: Rated and Non Rated Fanfics
Any type of fanfics you prefer? Anything but yuri
Personal Message: Alright, i'm new to this world so bare with me guys but i'll try my best *peace*
Rubric:
Title : 5
why people want to read your story
Description & Foreword : 10
why people hit the next button
Plot and flow : 25
Why are people loyal to your story
Characterization : 10
this is important, a character brings the story lives
Entertainment : 10
As a reader I prefer a story which brought enjoyment
Grammar & Spelling 15
Sometimes grammar mistakes make readers don't understand what author wants to say
Ending: 10
Do your story have happy ending, tragic one or you left it hanging?
Poster/background : 10.
Does your poster or background relate to the story?
Bonus: 5.
To get this bonus you gotta impress me first
TOTAL [100]
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Jongsicaminyul5914
Nickname: Prawn
Birthday: February 10
Requests can be taken by week: 7-10
Review: Rated and Non Rated Fanfics
Any type of fanfics you prefer? Fluffy, angst, drama
Personal Message: Hi, I'm Jongsicaminyul5914, but do call me Prawn. If you want a 200% honest review, do request from us. I'm somewhat stric, I guess. My main goal is to let all fic writers out there to regain confidence in their own fanfics~
Rubric:
Title (--/5)
Appearance (--/5)
Description / Foreword (--/15)
Plot / Originality (--/25)
Characters / Storyline (--/10)
Writing (Spelling / Grammar / Punctuation) (--/20)
Flow (--/10)
Overall Enjoyment (--/10)
Comments Total: --/100
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Total Reviewers: 12
On Hiatus: 3
Pick your choice!
Past reviewer/s:
** Nam_MinGi
** lazyen
** MrsKpopForLife
** teuteelicious
**benignreader_
ForeverVIBx
** Keishota
** Mikayla
** FishyHaeLove
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