Trainees/Applicants

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Trainees/Applicants

Choosen: Your in!

Reviewing: Looking over app still 

Error-Please fix what is instructed 

Accepted: Your app is good and all to go

Rejected: Its a no go. Sorry

Former Members: *Reasons are stated   

*Picture of Face-Claim

Username || Full Name || Stage Name || Age || Face-Claim || First Lover || Persona || Wanted Position

DoubleSHINee comments:

zook26 comments:

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DoubleSHINee || Yang Céline  || Céline|| 11 || Thylane Blondeau || Dongjin|| Musical Angel || Maknae, Dancer, Rapper, and 2nd Lead Vocalist

DoubleSHINee comments: My character:) I am going to edit my character, but I wanted to post it ASAP. Enjoy my little girl

zook26 comments:

zook26 || Ahn Yun || Yu.A || 15 || Hwang Jung Jin || Jeon Won Woo || Persona|| Main Rapper, Dancer, and Moodmaker
*Reason For Leaving: School and couldn't take idol life currently 
Left January 5th, 2014

DoubleSHINee comments: Co-author's character. Which is under contruction 

zook26 comments: 

TsuTsuMio|| Bang Young-Mi || Snake || 16 || Min Hyo Sun || || Blonde Tomboy || Main Dancer and Vocalist

DoubleSHINee comments: *New member

|| Suzuki Miyuki || Miyuki || 17 || Hana || Perky Girl || Vocalist and Rapper

DoubleSHINee comments: *New member

 

Chakayuko || Nae Miok || Miok || 14 || Jang Hae Byeol || Boo Seungkwan || Quirky Cuite || Power Vocalist and 2nd Lead Dancer

DoubleSHINee comments: EDIT- Thank you for fixing your application(: Everything is all good now.

First I want to say thank you for applying and being the first:) Just tiny errors, nothing major of that sort. Even though you have what position you want on the form, can you put it with your blog title. And if posssible to fix your font? I can live with the way it is but I could read it better if it was the same. And since your rival is a OC can you hyperlink a picture to her. But on the good side I love your personality. Its different from others so it might shake drama in the group maybe?? And how her friends now reject her because she got into Pledis. I have ideas forming already. LOL, just little things and we are good.

zook26 comments: Hello Sori, thank you for taking your time and applying. I really like your character's personality and her background. I also like the unique characteristics that you gave your character with her likes and dislikes and trivia; it makes her become even a more unique person. 

 

OliviaChristie-- || Kim YeNa || Yena || 16 || Park Ji Young || Lee Jihoon || Silent Spring || 1st Lead Vocalist and 1st Lead Dancer  Lead Rapper, Vocalist, and Dancer

DoubleSHINee comments: Just follow what zook26 says and you should be okay

zook26 comments: Edit- Thank you for fixing your app. and for answering my questions. You're all good to go now.

Hello Via, thanks for turning in your application. I find your character very pure and quite. Although her past is kind of sad. There's some things I still want to know about your character just to make things clear. How did she feel having her mother push her to audition, and was she okay with her having to fulfill her mother's dream of becoming an idol. Also, I just want to know if singing and dancing for her is a way to release her stress or if she turned to singing and dancing to not feel lonely? If you can give me a reason, please? Oh, and your rival is an OC, right? Can you please include a hyperlink picture for her? I think that's everything for now. Thank you^^

noneofyourdambusines || Roi Denise/ Roi Hei Ryung || Hei Ryung || 13 || Lee Dasom || Lee Seokmin || Dramatic Queen || Lead Rapper, Vocalist, and Dancer

DoubleSHINee comments: EDIT-Thank you for answering my question and adding a link to your rival:)

I just wanted to add that when you put one of the chracteristics of Hyorin as supportive, then why didn't Hyorin support her when she was audtioning for Pledis? Unless Hyorin was just joking around?

zook26 comments: Hello Gorgeous One...haha, I like your nickname :) Anyway, thank you for your application. I also like your character's name, it somehow fits with her. I also like her background, very intersting one. I like that your character is really strong too. I really like your relationship with your second love "friends with benefits" that's really funny. Very interesting way the way she became a trainee. Anyway, the only problem I think is that you need is to hyperlink a picture of your rival, since it's an OC, other than that, your application is good. Thank you ^_^

MudkipisLegit || Joo Hyunjin || Hyunjin || 15 || Jang Hae Byeol || Yao Ming Ming || The 4D Amazon || Power Vocalist and  2nd Lead Dancer

DoubleSHINee comments: I have to agree with zook26 on how your character personality. It matches me to a little. For your face claim, I was wondering if you could use your back up if you get choosen? For some reason I feel like your back up matches more than the one you chose as your first. And like zook26 said to fix your second lover things. 

zook26 comments: Why hello there ^^ So, thank you for taking your time and applying. Wow, your character somehow reminds me of me to some extent, and I like how well you described her and her past, very good. I think I would want to be friends with her, but I'll be too scare to approach her, I'm just really shy when it comes to talking to people in general. Anyway, back to you. The only thing you would need to do is to put your second lover's name where it belongs and his birthdate as well, other than that, everything looks good.  Thank you ^^

kiyohyo || Kim Saralynn || Lynn || 14 || Kim Shin Yeong || Yao Ming Ming || Hyper Dancing Machine || Power Vocalist and 2nd Lead Dancer 

DoubleSHINee comments: Thank you kiyohyo for applying. The things zook26 say are true. It was a little confusing to read and try to understand but just fix those things listed. And can you hyperlink your username? And put hangul by your character name. And lastly can you fix your font. Its a little messy. And just ask questions if needed. 

zook26 comments: Edit- Thank you for fixing your app., your character is much better now :) You still need to hyperlink your username and make sure that all the font is the same, which is Garamond size 16, I think? Then, you'll be all good to go :)

Edit (Nov.2)- Okay, thanks for fixing your app again. Everything's all good to go now :)

Hello ^^ Thank you for your application :) Okay, so your characters is very bubbly, but I think she's too bubbly and a little too hyper. Some of the things you mentioned about her character can make her sound kind of spoiled and annoying and maybe even like a brat. I don't mean to sound mean or anything. You should maybe give her different characteristics so that she can be more likeable and more human-like. So just to get some things clear. She's Vietnamese-Korean, but born in America? Is her mother Vietnamese and her father Korean? So then, she'll be American-Vietnamese-Korean, right? Some of your pictures are a little too big, so if you can please fix that too. So, just try to make your character a little more interesting by adding things to her that others might not have, make her someone more unique, not just someone who is happy all the time who laughs at nothing. Good luck^^ If you have any questions, you can contact me or DoubleSHINee for help. 

Happy_Virus_21 || Jeong Jin Ae || Jin || 18 || Kim Seuk Hye || Choi Seungcheol || The Childish Leader || Leader, Main Dancer, and Rapper(Dance Cheoreographer)
*Reason For Leaving: Parents calling her back to America
Left March 10, 2014

DoubleSHINee comments: Edit-Thank you Thrish for fixing that one detail and for making the app so neat and organized:D 

Finally someone applied for the leader spot:D I thought no one would. Thank you Trish. I like your personality and background; different you know. A few questions though, would you like your character to be a dance choreographer to? To help with making the dance moves? And for your dislikes when you say boring places what places are that? 

zook26 comments: Hello Trish, thank you for your application. First of all, I like that how you mentioned that your character taught herself how to dance and rap, eveen though her family is rich and she could've gotten private lessons. I don't think there's anything you need to fix :)

MingMingMingMinggyu || Lee Mei Ting || Mei || 14 || Ne Rou || Choi Hansoi || Cold Ice Princess || 1st Lead Vocalist and Lead Dancer

DoubleSHINee comments: Edit- Thank you Ming for fixing what I said and for making mistakes myself. To me your app is good but if zook26 says anything just fix it. Thank you~

Hello Ming, very instresting username ;) Adjustments are needed but not to hard. First off could you replace Krystal's pictures with your character's face.  Also you need 5 links for 'Style' not 3, and your 3 for casual is the same as number 2. And your airport and dorm clothes should be different. With the font to; please make it the font I put so it can be more organzied and to be able to read some of it.

zook26 comments: Hello Min! Thank you for your application:) I think a nice touch up for your character would be that when she sings, she shines the most, since she is shy you know, and has trouble prejecting her voice, which leads me to this question: Doeas she not know how to project her voice while singing or only when she talks? That's my only question, everything else looked good :)

eundere || Min Seolhwa || White || 17 || Ann J of C-REAL|| Kwon Soonyoung || The Snowflake || Co-Leader, Main Vocalist, and Dancer  1st Lead Vocalist and 1st Lead Dancer

DoubleSHINee comments: Edit- Thanks for fixing what was needed.

Hey Eun once again x) Errors that can fixed of course. First can you put your position on the title where its supposed to be. In her background can you put that Min  Hyunchang is her father and Seo Yoohwa is her mother. And third can you replace the links 3 and 4 of your 'Formal' wear. That's the errors I found, just a fix up.

zook26 comments: Hello eun! Thank you for applying! Your character's real name is beautiful, I really liked it! I really like how you described your character, I found it kind of interesting. I like her parent's story, I thought that was so cute^^ I think you already fixed everything you needed to. Thank you so much for applying!

moonlightviolet || Cha Mirai || Mirai || 18 || Riho || Choi Seungcheol Yoon Junghan|| Elegant Muse || Leader, Main Dancer, and Rapper Co-Leader, Main Vocalist, and Dancer(Dance Cheoreographer)

DoubleSHINee comments: Hello MG. First off I want to say I love how neat, organized, and detailed your application is. Made my day actually since I was having a bad one. I love her different personality's and how she is like the mom of the group; a very protective umma who cares about her dongsaengs a lot. And with that you made me laugh when she protective over Céline and interferring with Dongjin and Céline's friendship. LOL. And I am guessing her flaw is that she interfers with other people's conversations? Her likes and when I saw dying her hair that gave me ideas, like right away XD. And I am the same for soda, I hate soda; tried the many wonders of it and nope. And for your hobbies, is it okay if your dance cheoreographer to, for the group? Ohh, and what made me smile is your character's inspiration is Kahi. I am getting to like her and I think its a good idea to use her as your mentor. y Dance~~chu chu xD Overall I really LOVE your app :D Like I said it made my day and I did not see any errors in your app. 

zook26 comments: Hello MG! Thanks for applying :) I have to say, I really loved your character's personality and I enjoyed reading it ^_^ Your app was great and I really got a grasp of your character. I don't think I found anything that you needed to fix, it was good.

JooCherry || Jun Eun || Ellie || 17 || Lee Geum Hee || Jang Doyoon || Flaming Angel || Lead Rapper, Vocalist, and Dancer

DoubleSHINee comments: Edit- All my questions got answered. Thank you Jae for fixing it

Hello Jae just a few questions to ask. Was Ellie a loner in Pledis besides Yooyoung, Doyoon, and her twin brother? Did she have friends in Pledis and outside of school? And since I don't know kendo, what is level 3 of kendo? That's it from me but zook26 will review Ellie too and see if you're all cleared and accepted

zook26 commments: Hello Jae, thank you for your application :) Very interesting character, I like that she has a twin brother. I don't think I have any questions.

 

 

             

 
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ren16zaizen
#1
Chapter 82: This group was disbanded? But why?
I know this group has some controversy but after all it's just disbanded?
However, I just want to know something even this group already disbanded.
1. The mysterious video from jyp, it's that jin's voice?
2. White is not Grace's member anymore? But why?
3. Who are the singer for edge and game mv?
I'm just curious ^^
-ixora
#2
Chapter 82: What will happen now to the members? Which of them will be put in the new group and are you going to write about the group or do you plan to end this fic soon? This announcement came so suddenly!
And I was also surprised about Hello Venus - Yooara was my favorite member and I really thought that they would get more popular as six :/
OliviaChristie-- #3
Chapter 80: WOOOOOO ~ the mv's out !!
And happy birthday MIOK!! Woo !
-ixora
#4
Chapter 80: Somehow I think that GP Basic songs really suit the new member Snake.
OliviaChristie-- #5
Chapter 78: Actually GP Basic's songs are pretty good and i don't know why they're not promoted alot by their company . But i think the song suits grace's concept! And i'm really curious of what us wrong with white
LeeYEG
#6
Umm are you still looking for a new member?
TsuTsuMio #7
Chapter 78: These are really awesome songs.
-ixora
#8
Chapter 78: I really like almost all of the songs you chose so far.
And I wonder what is up with White. Did she chose to not take part in the promotions or happened something worse, like getting hospitalized?
OliviaChristie-- #9
Chapter 77: Woohh~ are they going to have a comeback soon? Woah ! I can't wait to see them on stage together though hehe. Btw, i'm getting curious of who the mysterious girl is ,though...
mawilite
#10
Chapter 77: a sudden MV with the halted promotions? that a bit curious *^* i wonder what Pledis entertainment has in mind doing all of this :o
well, it's a nice song though; it's unique c: