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I can love you better [sequel to: Can't you see...]
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Hi guys! So I've decided to re-write the first series of this story and it's the beginning where YoonYul actually progress and get over obstacles in their love life. Remember Jessica cheating on Yuri with Tiffany? Yep, that's in part one which is Can't You See. 

I promise the English and grammer will be much better (less disgusting) as compared to how I first wrote it. The storyline will hopefully be expressed clearer and put across to you guys. For all those who have subscribed (yes, all 939 of you), I urge you to look back at the first one and give it another read-through, I just want to know what you think of it and perhaps tell me if I've gone wrong somewhere! 

 

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PapiCabello
#1
Chapter 36: AhquushNia I hope nothing bad happens to any of them!!!
PapiCabello
#2
Chapter 17: Sica and her icy glares that creeps up behind people's backs XD
PapiCabello
#3
Chapter 14: Jessica can never deny Tiffany, let's start with that lol, I hope these two can pull through. I also hope Taeyeon gets it together as well, Sunny needs her happiness!
BlackFeather_2
#4
Chapter 10: Hii! Really well written I have to say. The grammar and language is pretty spot on. But I find how Tiffany is all of a sudden developing feelings for Taeyeon is a bit jarring. There wasn't enough foreshadowing for it I think. In the prequel Tiffany had said that Jessica is the only one for her....and now this...it would have been better if there were few more chapters dedicated to it to make it more believeable.
But hi that's just my opinion! And I have many more chapters to go!
But gotta say, this fanfic is written well. You know your words well :):)
lizbsol
#5
Chapter 46: Take your time, i will atill wait for the third one.
Rizka_nurhaliza #6
Chapter 47: Good story author!
minogue
#7
Chapter 47: Lo ame hasta el ultimo capitulo lo ame
aigoyoona #8
Chapter 47: Waw, nice epilogue authornim. But can you make a bonus chapter with baby yoonyul. Hehehe
Thank you.