Dreamwave Academy - dreamwave
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Dreamwave Academy - dreamwave
Reviewer: tyrhfjd
Story Title - 3/5
It's the title of the school, which is original and catches the eye but maybe something more relatable.
Summary/Description- 5/5
It was like any other, it was unique because it pertains your idea of supernatural beings, but it could've been fluffier as in more imagery to really hook the readers.
Story Layout- 5/5
The poster is very vivd and eye-catching, whoever created them really did an amazing job. Everything was legable, easy to read and very straightforward where you placed everything.
Grammar/Spelling- 15/20
In the description you wrote, "School for the elite," but it should be plural because they're students and there are more than one. "..skater skirt style black skirt.." It's kind of awkward the way you stated it maybe "a style of a black skater skirt." When you stated THAT twice, it should be italicized, that. "In uniform or out of uniform.." It should be something like "In or out of uniform," because there are extra words in that sentence that aren't really needed. Numbers below ten should be spelled out, numbers starting or ending sentences should be spelled out as well. "Ultimately it would be there decision," wrong form: their (possessive). You don't need to ke
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