My Girlfriend the Cheater - snowflake16
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My Girlfriend the Cheater: snowflake16
Reviewer: tyrhfjd
Story Title- 2/5: The title was average, it's exactly what the story revolves around; Chanyeol's girlfriend cheating on him. It isn't something eye-catching but it holds the truth. Summary/Description- 5/5: It gave an overview, not giving too much away but it gives just enough to draw the reader in to wanting to discover more about the character's actions and their final decisions. I really enjoyed the prologue, how it was written. Story Layout- 3/5: The chapter layout (b/c I was reading it off mobile) was awkward. Usually author's put their image in the little designated box that reads chapter image so it will load there, but it wasn't too bad (just the scrolling was awkward). I still could read the text in comfort, and the description/forward was fine reading through. Grammar/ Spelling- 20/20: There was nothing grammatically incorrect and everything was spelt correctly. Most of what I had written for this section actually goes with the next bullet so nothing left here haha.. Story Plot/ Flow/ Description- 30/30: Your writing style mezmorized me. I really enjoyed it, the words/vocabulary you used, the way you used imagery and figurative language. I'm really impressed. Plus the way you described Chanyeol in the ra
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