Dark Wings - WordsUntold
The Casting Director Review Shop (Busy/Closed/Hiatus)Dark Wings by WordsUntold
Reviewer: tyrhfjd
Story Title- 3/5
To be honest, the title was eye-catching and seemed mysterious but it wasn't really unique/different. Maybe something that is still relevant to the story but yet is unique to you and this community.
Summary Description- 5/5
The description was short, mysterious, the way I perfer people to write because it's not revealing too much information/spoilers and that retains a feeling of curiousity in the readers.
Grammar/Spelling- 20/20
Everything was great, I was realled immersed into the writing, and your vocabulary was sophisticated and superb. It brought a serious element and really generated that suspense you were going for.
Story Plot/ Flow/ Description- 30/30
I didn't read enough for something big to occur but everything was placed together well (it made sense to add certain details), the emotions and descriptions were explained and described well, very interesting.
Character Development- 30/30
I liked the characters, especially the witty little girl the way you described her, and I don't know why but Mouse was a comedic relief, very cute. Ren and Baekho's dialouge seemed very realistic and comfortable.
Overall Enjoyment- 5/5
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