An Inheritor's Marriage   Story Title - 4/5   The title is really cliche though I agreed on putting it on as a title because that's basically what you're focusing on the whole time. Inheritor means to received something (yes, I looked it up) and treasured that object. For me, personally I think Jinki and Nayeon both had that heir because of the wealth from both families.   Summary/Description - 5/5   The newspaper or whatever that thing is really brought reader's attention. You kind of briefly stated the main focus of the story in the article which is the marriage itself and that's a really good thing to do. I also like how you have Nayeon and Jinki point of views, it shows the readers what the two main characters thoughts are before reading it. Though, Nayeon's thought of not wanting to get married is really truism since it's  an arranged marriage and a lot of AFF authors put that personality in their characters story too. Though, I must agreed that's basically the only personality you can put on Nayeon's.   Story Layout*- 4/5   It was nice how you italicized and bolded the first letter of each scene, that way readers know that it's a new event or day or the change of character's point of view. Though, I recommend you give more space between the scenes also so it'll be a lot easier for readers.    Your poster was lovely! The color is outstanding and I personally think it really matched the theme and the story of it. The rings is a really big part of the story and it was really thoughtful you have those two marriage ring at the bottom of the poster.    Grammar/Spelling - 18/20   There were only minor grammar and spelling. The misused of commas and overused of periods. There were a lot of periods in one paragraph and I suggest you used conjuctions and/or semi colons.    I noticed some errors on the quotes, just a few not a lot. Though, I think it's alright with the problems with the quotes, as long as it's understandable. I thought I just need to point it out in case some readers don't understand or even spot the mistakes and ruin their flow of the story.    Story Plot/Flow/Description - 27/30   You did a really good job on getting the attention of the readers on the first chapter. The story started right when there was already a conflict from the characters that will lead to the story. It was really great, I tell you! The pace of the story is slow but it's also really smooth. Though, it might not be slow to other readers including me but there were times where I have those questions of "what will happen to the marriage?" or "why is Nayeon so stubborn, can't she just see the sincere Jinki is trying to solve?" Of course, all these questions are like actual readers curious question instead of a reviewer instead but I like how you also made this story worth the pace. Each chapter is worth reading and it makes the readers have the same anguish feelings and imagination along with the conflicts that's happening to the readers and to the character.    But the theme and the storyline is really cliche like all those other arrangemarriaged story. There will alwa