The Next Husband - AshleyFang
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Story Title - 5/5
The title seems really interesting, there is a high chance that it'll draws attention from the readers. Also, it pretty much have a lot of interests in the title as much as the story.
Summary/Description - 4/5
It's a good summary and have a lot of detail about the novel but it also told everyone what the story is about. I saw your sneak peek in the forward and it was a good idea to have some sneak peek but do remember not to tell the important stuff. Not only that, you also have the chart of who likes who and pretty much everything that sums up the story.
Example" "I have two organs..." or "I love you as a brother, please understand!"
Story Layout*- 5/5
The poster is nice; it matches the theme and the tone you put in the story and it helps readers the brightness or dull feelings to it.
Grammar/Spelling - 14/20
You have some major problem with using the same meaning of words but put it with the wrong sentences.
Example: You know nothing about me.
Correction: You don't know anything about me.
*** This is not part of your story; this is just an example.
You also have some misused of commas and also putting them in the wrong spot. I understand your constant mistakes on this because comma are author's common punctuation issue. Be sure not to use a lot of commas in one sentence or paragraph. It can
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