No Ordinary Cat / Head over Paws
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Story Title - 5 of 5
When you requested, you gave me the title "No Ordinary Cat", however, I realized the actual title of the story is "Head over Paws". Therefore, I will evaluate the story title based on "Head over Paws", the title that readers see. This is a unique, eye-catching title that fits nicely with the story. Also, quite short & sweet.
Description/Foreword - 5 of 5
Interesting description that is not misleading at all and doesn't give the entire story away. Good foreword.
Story Layout - 3 of 5
I don't get why you have to use italicized font for this story. At first, I thought I was reading a past event of the story, so I kept anticipating for the present timeline to take over again. Apparently, this story IS in present timeline, just that the words are italicized. Seriously, don't italicized unless if you are describing a past memory of a character. Also, could have used better photos for the poster. I know Eunji is supposed to be this ordinary girl, but seriously, the picture used has made her looked like a middle-age, married woman. I don't think that's the impression you want to create.
Grammar/Spelling - 19 of 20
In general, the grammar/spelling is almost a non-issue.
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