Sounding Resonance - Usamaro
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Story Title - 2.5 of 5
I can't say that this is the best title because there is a bit of an awkwardness. Perhaps it's because resonance is usually more of a property of sound...For example, one would hear the phrase "a resonance of sound" a lot. So it's a bit weird when sound is suddenly used as an adjective for the word resonance. Sounding could also mean something roaring (loud), establishing type of noise. So in a way it does makes sense to use Sounding Resonance. In sum, it's a fifty-fifty chance of success with the play on words. Meanwhile, the title gives an impression that this is a slice-of-life story about some nobody suddenly get thrown into the world of music. Slice-of-life, especially one that has to do with music, might be one that could scare people from reading the story because they assume the main female lead is probably a Mary-sue. Now, I know that's not what your story is about, but the title really gives out that impression and ultimately, it could hurt your readership.
Description/Foreword - 5 of 5
Seriously, interesting description. It's very captivating, unlike the story title. No problem with the foreword.
Story Layout - 5 of 5
The poster is relates well to the genres of this story. It's intriguing. Nice, readable fonts.
Grammar/Spelling - 20 of 20
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