A LOVE THAT STARTED WITHOUT LOVE- kangsorafan
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Story Title - 3/5
The title is too long, and it pretty much state the obvious in the story. It might attract readers and draw them into reading it but try to shorten it into a two to three words instead.
Summary/Description - 3/5
It was nice to have the background and personality of the main and minor characters. There are a lot of readres who likes to read about arrangemarriaged so filling that up in the description is a good start to attract readers.
Try not to make any errors outside of the story it's okay if the mistakes is inside the story but make sure to go back and check your sentences. There were a few errors of grammar that needs to be fix. The description/forward/poster is like the book cover where readers judge and check for any interest. If they find any mistakes it's a big no for them.
Story Layout*- 3/5
Though your story is a big exaggerated for readers to be reading so many all caps letters, just make sure not to do it a lot in a chapter.
Make sure to have seperate teh dialogues and the body away from each other. It was confusing when I read it, I have to go back and reread it a few times on some of the chapters.
Grammar/Spelling - 10/20
You need to capitalizes all the names and countries or places you mentioned on the story. Most of the commas were misused and out of p
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