Onew's confession

In love with Miss Imposter

The next day passed in a flash, with Jooyeon lying in bed thinking about Sulli's arrival two days later, and Taemin jumping in enthusiasm as soon as he heard Key say that his fiancee will be the most stunningly beautiful girl in the ball.

Soon, it was Saturday. The Seoul High Ball.

The hall was soon transformed into a ballroom, with balloons and streamers everywhere. Flowers were placed in every possible corner and the place turned into a five star ballroom.

Onew clutched his bouquet of flowers and waited anxiously for Jooyeon to appear.

"Woah look at the kingkas! They are so hot!" a girl squealed as SHINee came into sight.

"Too bad one of them is getting engaged soon." another sighed.

"Who cares! There are still another 4 to look at!" the third scoffed.

SHINee walked in and the crowd automatically parted to let them in.

"Wow the school outdid themselves this year!" Minho exclaimed. "It's great!"

"Lots of pretty ladies today!" Jonghyun said as he whistled to a girl passing by.

"Aww Gawd! These people in Seoul High sure don't have fashion sense!" Key scoffed as he eyed a guy wearing blue polka dot suit. "I'm the best dressed here. I know it."

Taemin and Onew remained silent, scanning the hall for the one girl they were looking for.

"Yah what are you two looking for?" Key asked.

"Ssshhh! Omo! She's here!" Taemin squealed excitedly.

Jooyeon stepped into the ballroom, dressed in the gown Key picked. Everyone gasped, seeing such a great stunning beauty before them.

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Taemin's jaw nearly reached the floor. "She's so beautiful." he breathed.

Jooyeon spotted the guys and smiled, walking towards them. "Hey! Wow all of you look great!" she smiled. She turned and saw Taemin in his suit, looking absolutely manly and handsome. Her heart did a flip and the same weird feeling came surfacing once again.

"You look stunning." Taemin praised. Jooyeon blushed furiously.

Onew bit his lips, if he wanted to take a chance at being with her, this was the time.

"Sulli ah, will you have the first dance with me?" he asked and put out his hand.

Jooyeon smiled and took it. Taemin pouted and stood by the side watching.

Onew and Jooyeon went onto the dance floor and began their first dance. Onew gazed down at her intently, absorbing the beautiful sight in front of him.

"Although Taemin already said it, you really look beautiful tonight." Onew breathed.

Jooyeon smiled. "Thank you. You look great too Onew Oppa!"

"Good enough to capture your heart?" Onew asked and twirled her around.

"Eh?" Jooyeon looked at him confused.

"Sulli ah, actually, from the first time I met you, I've fallen in love with you." Onew confessed. "I really like you a lot even though I know you're Taemin fiancee. Are you willing to break the marriage and be my girl?"

Jooyeon bit her lips and let go of Onew. Both of them stood on the dance floor motionlessly, waiting for her response.

"I'm sorry." Jooyeon breathed.

Onew's heart sank. *I knew it.*

"I don't feel the same way." Jooyeon looked down. "I think you're a great Oppa but.."

"You dont love me." Onew continued.

"Im sorry Onew Oppa." Jooyeon cried. Onew used his thumb to wipe her tears away. "Sshhhh. Don't ruin your makeup. I kind of expected that. Don't worry your Onew Oppa will recover in no time." Onew smiled.

"Lets be great friends from now on okay?" Onew smiled, blinking back his tears.

Jooyeon nodded. "Thank you Oppa. And, I'm sorry."

"Don't be." Onew shook his head. "The next dance is starting soon. Go on, Taemin is waiting."

Jooyeon nodded and went to Taemin, who took her hand, throwing her a smile.

Onew looked away hurt, and went to the cocktail section. *Even though I anticipated the rejection, this hurt even more than I thought. Be happy with Taemin, Sulli ah.*

 

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Iminthezone #1
Chapter 75: Going on a rereading spree~
-2Mirae-
14 streak #2
Chapter 75: I wonder how I read almost all of your stories and skip this one.... welp this story is awesome.... amazing.... 짱이다 (jjang). I love taemin's red hair era!! He looked so cute xD.
song3424
#3
Chapter 75: Awww.. as always, your fic is alwayyyysss jjang!
Especially when both of them missunderstood each other. That was really complicated, but cute in the same times!

I will read another story, pls keep making such a good story^^
Thank you~
raaaaa_ #4
Chapter 75: You are my fave writer seriously. Like your story was so amazing, i read them all and i just couldn't believe it you can make story with long chapter. Usually i get bored bcs the story is long but in this case i want you to make a longer chapter, god ilove ur story so much, you should be a writer, I'll buy all your books authornimmm. FIGHTING~~<3
Issdnn
#5
Chapter 75: I spent the whole night to read this chapter and it's really amazing!!!! But I think the plot after Taemin and Jooyeon met in Korea was rather too fastTT_TT I thought I could see some romance between Taemin and Jooyoen after they found out they were still singles lol
And I was really surprise to know that Onew ends up with Sulli because I think when people ships SHINee x F(X), then it would be between Onew-Victoria or Onew-Luna? But I was really glad that Onew ends up with Sulli because it means Onew isn't a heartbroken anymore and Sulli found a right guy!!
Woah I'm so into the story..
AND I REALLY WANT TO SAY THAT U ARE REALLY AMAZING FOR NOT GETTING CONFUSE BETWEEN SULLI AND JOOYEON'S NAME WHEN U WRITE THE DIALOGUES. because sometimes I seriously didn't realize that I was reading Jooyeon's dialogue because you always manage to write Sulli's name at the right places.
Good job, author-nim!!! Thank you very much for such a beautiful ideas and story from your soul!♡
right_queen #6
Chapter 75: Haha the kids ^^ Jooyeon and Taemin.
marriedtotheminho
#7
Chapter 7: Uh, sorry but Sulli's real name is Jinri, not Jirin
lovingasianfanfic #8
Chapter 75: Oh my gosh! This is so adorable =) love it!
LilT555 #9
Chapter 75: it's soooooo cuuuuteeeee :3 the kids are awesome XD and amber-key couple hahahahah XD now that would be interesting :) XD
tonnettie
#10
Chapter 75: jjang!! the kids are so amusing! such a awesome story!