Kai's home

S/he's Perfect

"do you want to come over to my house after school?" Kai asked Jimin in the last period

"what for?" she asked 

"you seemed curious on how i live..." he said 

She didnt say anything, afterschool Kai was waiting at the front door and Jimin who normaly would walk home with her two older twin brothers walked out alone. "so?" Kai asked with his hands crossed and slightl leaning on the brick post under the stairs. "my Jun Ho says i can only take one hour and if you dare touch me he's personaly going to kill you" Jimin said with a smile while hopping down the stairs "so where to?" she asked 

Kai was already thinking it twice, he wasnt planing to touch her but he didnt want for her older brothers to misunderstand him. What if she hit her head on the short wall under the stairs? or slipped on the wet tiles in the bathroom... "hurry up i only have an hour.... how far do you live?" she asked and he began to walk. It had been lucky for the first time living so far from school. 

On their way to his house they were talking about music and he kept telling her random sarcastic quotations about her lack of taste in music.  

"thats it" Kai said pointing to a tradicional Korean house. "wow really" she hurried up to the door, he opend and he signaled her to go in first. Jimin was lost at words, he had the most beautiful garden she had ever seen, there was a tree too that had a swinging bench under it, there was rose bushes and other flowers she only knew on pictures. "i see you like" Kai said proudly and she nodded, she he led her into the house she noticed how clean and spotless the house was "do you have maids or something?" Jimin asked looking around the living room "no, why?" Kai asked placing his backpack on the couch "well its too clean..." she said brushing her fingertip on the tv screen "clean" she remarked 

"well i grew up in a milatary camp, you learn to clean, cook" Kai said "do you want to see the rest of the house?" he asked her and she nodded, she followed him to the second floor and saw his room, neatly arranged in a clasical manner. He had pleanty of books and colectable comics on his desk and shelfs.  His fathers room was also very clean, a boring room really... 

"when is your dad coming?" Jimin asked "well he's in China right now and i dont think he'll be coming home soon since he does have alot of duties... actually no one had come home in years untill i came in, some neibors actualy thought i was going to steal" Kai said "took me alot to clean this whole place up" he said shoing Jimin to the half empty room at the end of the Coridor "this was suposed to be my moms study room but she passed away" he said showing Jimin the desk and unpacked boxes "its the only room i cant bring myself to clean" he said closing the door again 

"do you miss her?" Jimin asked "well i never really met her... she dies when i was 3 so i dont even remember her, father doesnt talk about her either" Kai said Jimin was left speach less. 

"i think i should walk you home its almost that hour they let you come" Kai said guiding her back out.Jimins house was actually just 5 or 6 blocks away from Kai's so they got there pretty quick "dont feel to bad about my mom..." Kai said when they got to the corner of her street "im sorry... you noticed" Jimin said sadly "well then get home and ill see you tomorrow" she turned and began to walk but then she turned back to Kai. 

"if it makes you feel any better my mom doesnt even remember me most of the times" she said walkign full speed home. 

'what did i just do?' she thought to her self after closing the door. 

 

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ladykwonxiwu #1
Chapter 7: I think you need a beta writer to check your spelling and some grammatical errors authornim.
ladykwonxiwu #2
Chapter 4: Hi! Can i have the details regarding Sehun's first experience?
kpop_addict4ever
#3
Chapter 54: ㅠㅠ omg it's over :'( I really loved this fan fiction! Good work! Maybe I'll check out some of your other stories! Fighting!! ^^
IRDINAPASTEL
#4
Chapter 54: Oh ma gosh TT_TT
Please, bonus chapter TT_TT
hana55 #5
Chapter 54: I love this ending so much what jimin love is kai...unconditional love always there forever...hope they have cute babies soon
kpop_addict4ever
#6
Chapter 53: Omggg ㅠㅠ Poor Kai
This is cute but I wish it wasn't the end :( I'm going to miss this story...
DecemberRains #7
Chapter 53: I like the story and I hope she and Kai areally fine in the end, but in the beginning it seemed like it was going to be a story like 'Flipped' and she was going to end up with Sehun..... Is there any hope for an alternate ending? #TeamSehun
IRDINAPASTEL
#8
Chapter 53: This time, nice changes :)
Keep doing the great job!
Fighting!
IRDINAPASTEL
#9
Chapter 53: It's okay even though you said it yourself; It was lame.
But I'd like a lot of bonus chapters please :)
hana55 #10
Chapter 53: to be honest this ending is really bad. I thought you can do a better ending than this. you need an epilogue who explain how he proposed her and they got married, how he get her pregnant. you can add a lot of their precious moment in their life. just focus with kai and jimin life. in my country there's a true story who similar with kai and jimin situation. that man is a really handsome military pilot and he have a beautiful fiance. they are a perfect couple that everyone envy but one day something bad happens to the man when he and his friends have problem with their military plane that make a fatal plane accident. his fiance come to the hospital because he can't survive the plane crash accident but his fiance pray she will accept everything his condition is if god give him a chance to live and the man is the only one who survive but he lose his face because his handsome face turn into a monster face because of the burn but the girl still love her unconditionally. I watch this couple in a inspirational talkshow in television. and their amazing couple.