Can you be my friend?

Sometimes love just ain't enough...
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AUTHOR POV

 

 

     “Hyung, do you find our new classmate pretty?” Seungri spoke up, gaining his hyungs attention. They are  currently waiting for Jiyong to arrive before going to their classroom..

 

 

   Youngbae looked up to face their maknae with a frown on his face... “wae? What are you planning?” he asked instead of answering the maknae’s question...

 

 

     “of course our maknae is planning on how to get inside her skirt...” TOP said with a grin on his face

 

 

     “Aishht....” Seungri hissed... “ I’m just asking... am I that ert to you-“

 

 

     “YES!!!” the three answered in unison...

 

 

     “yah!!!...” Seungri almost yelled ...“For your information, I’m not that ert.. well kind of but not totally ert” he reasoned out

 

 

     “Seungri-ah... just accept the fact that you’re the playboy among us...” Daesung told him

 

 

     Seungri  turned his head sharply to face Daesung... “wae? And you’re not?” he asked

 

 

     But instead of answering... Daesung just shrugged with crossed arms and leaned back on her chair while smirking at him

 

 

     “Yah... you’re also like me before you knew Bom noona and Chaerin...” Seungri said while looking at his hyungs...

 

 

     “at least we’re in a serious relationship right now... unlike you two...” Youngbae said while looking at their maknae and Daesung...

 

 

     “yah! I treat girls nicely...”Daesung answered defensively...

 

 

     “tsk...”

 

 

     “oh....” TOP butted in... “looks like the man we’re waiting is not in a good mood...” he said while looking at Jiyong who is walking towards them... the other member followed his  gaze and frowned seeing Jiyong’s serious face...

 

 

     “any problem?” TOP asked even before Jiyong could sit beside Seungri...

 

 

     “Nothing...” Jiyong sharply answered...

 

 

     “It’s still early and you’re already in a bad mood... what is it this time Mr. Grumpy man?” Youngbae  teased, who doesn’t even care if Jiyong will shout at him...  while Daesung and Seungri whose afraid to Jiyong  chose to just zip their mouth...

 

 

     Jiyong breathe deeply... “just woke up in a bad mood...” he answered

 

 

     “why?” Youngbae asked again... he knew there’s something else

 

 

      Jiyong sighed...“i fell asleep while waiting or Dara last night... and when i woke up, i  just saw  a letter on the table saying that she already left ...” he answered irritably...

 

 

     “Bommie did the same thing...”TOP spoke... “But I woke up early so we have a chance to talk... she said they need to be at Chae’s house to continue their thesis...”

 

 

     “they wont be attending their class today, according to Chae...” Youngbae added

 

 

     Seungri frowned... “I thought dara noona will do the rest after she arrived from New York..”  he suddenly asked earning a deathly glare from Jiyong...

 

 

     “Do you want me to kick your and “do the rest” instead...?” Jiyong asked in a threatening tone.

 

 

     Seungri gulped. “H-hyung... I-I’m just asking...”

 

 

     “Jiyong stop being grumpy... she really wanted to finish that thesis so that she could spend more time with you...” TOP explained, defending Dara. Even him felt what Jiyong is feeling but somehow, he understand why the girls are focusing on their thesis...

 

 

     “yeah, the girls are helping each other to finish that ing thesis as soon as possible...” Youngbae added... “ and you know even if Dara told them that she will do the rest, Chae and Bom would still help her...”

 

 

     “oh... Hyung it’s already time for our next class...” Daesung butted in while looking at his watch...

 

 

     Youngbae stretched his arms before standing... “ok then, let’s go now....” he said grabbing his bag on the table... the others followed him quietly except for Seungri who keeps on talking...

 

 

     Whey they entered their classroom, all the girls greeted them with flirtatious smile on their faces... they sat on their chair as they continue to chat while waiting for their teacher... Jiyong  who didn’t bother to join his friends conversation took his phone out and start typing a message for Dara...

 

 

 

     To: Baby Girl

                            I miss you baby... why didn’t you wake me up before you left? Do you want me fetch you later?.....

 

 

 

 

         He then sent the message to dara...  while waiting for her reply, he look outside the window and sighed thinking of Dara. after a minute of waiting... his phone starts to vibrate

 

 

 

 

     To: Baby Boy

                           I miss you too baby boy... Mianhe I don’t want to disturb your sleep.... you don’t have to fetch me... and ill be home early... we’ll have dinner together.... :-)

                           I love you baby boy...... :-)

 

 

 

     Jiyong suddenly smiled... while he’s typing his reply to Dara he felt someone staring at him... knowing who it is, he turn to his side and face the culprit... he frowned seein

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pepden #1
Chapter 47: It's been awhile.. hoping you can update this story..
kwonjude #2
its so beautiful gosh!!!
💛💛💛💛💛😭😭😭
fangirlingislifeu #3
Chapter 47: idk how i managed to read this story until the last updated chapter. the story is really not my cup of tea; however, i found myself kept reading this to know what will happen next and how the story will progress, especially with everything that has happened. revenge is interesting, but in this case, i would love to have a different kind of revenge. if sandy really is the twin, and even if she's really DARA, then i'm fine with her plotting against jiyong and sohee BUT i really hope she'll not fall in love with jiyong, again. or even getting back with him. to be really honest, dara deserves better after all that she'd been through — and the best revenge she could do is to show those who hurt her that she's finally happy more than ever and she has moved on. i would really want her to find her peace and happiness, and build herself which she could be proud of. jiyong and sohee do not deserve a bit of her attention, even if that means playing with them. actually, i do not despise sohee much but jiyong. i truly believe he does not deserve a second chance; he cheated on dara with his confuse s and did nothing about it. he may have blamed himself because of what happened yet i didn't see any remorse from him— he was just eaten by the guilt he felt. i'm not even sure if he reflected on the things he made, instead just appeared miserable. jiyong may have been through a lot as well, but i believed those were the consequences of his actions and decisions as he wavered, hence he must take responsibility of it. i would really go for an ending where dara and jiyong will not end up together, because again, dara deserves love that is not forced nor recycle. now that i think about it, jiyong may be confused with his feelings to sohee when dara left, but what appears to me is that jiyong's feelings for dara is not the same as it used to be, and to some extent, he could have been fallen out of love. he could have done things to reach dara (i.e. that time when he can't contact her) but he just remained frustrated of what was happening— he's tired and he gave up. he's an and a coward, really.



everything i have stated are my opinions and perspective upon reading the story. i apologize if ever i hurt your feelings, authornim. afterall, this is your story and you are the one who gets to decide on how the story will unfold and will end. i also understand how you planned to write the story the way it is similar to how u wrote the characters. no one told me to read this, but i am leaving my comments here to let you know how i felt and what i think reading your story. and, i fully understand that it is a daragon story — jiyong and dara are the main characters and the possibility of them as the endgame is high. nonetheless, i will stick to my stand and shameful and embarrassing as it may sound, but there's a part of me hoping you will decide on a different ending. all the characters here deserve to be genuinely happy regardless of the way you want them to be. this is your story and i am looking forward for the next chapters. and the ending haha.



thank you so much for creating a story, it really stirred me and my emotions. please continue writing in the future, author-nim. God bless you. :)))
pepden #4
Chapter 47: I kept reading this story with the same feelings.. im still hoping someday when you have time you will update this.. this story is so great.. i still prefer dara over sandy..
diagwen27
#5
Chapter 47: I really hate jiyong sohee here to be honest..they dont deserve anything..
Dara23 #6
Re-read it again cause this really hits hard hahaha this story is soo good
janerhea03
#7
Chapter 47: i love reading angst stories but this story is giving me a painful feeling that i curse every chapter of the book . it's like this is the most painful book i have ever read and i like it ! hahahaha the pain that is giving to me hahahaha a masochist it is hahaha more hearbreaking scene pls and a y dara authornim . i hope you'll update soon . thank you for this wonderful story .
Toto_ecko88 #8
Pls update more tnx
hyukniss
#9
Chapter 47: Happy new year and hope you update soon
hyukniss
#10
Chapter 47: Anyway i still hope sandy is the real dara.0