[ 2 ] BROKENHEARTED GIRL

Sometimes love just ain't enough...
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     Seungri open the door widely for Dara as they enter the cafe... "I'm sure they'll be surprise to see you noona..." he said with so much excitement on his face...

 

     "Neh... But I'm planning to leave again tomorrow night..." Dara told him with so much sadness on her voice... she wanted to stay longer but she knew she can't...

 

     Seungri then faced her with a crease on his forehead.... "huh? that soon?"...

 

     Dara smiled a little ... "I guess I'll be leaving with Jiyong tomorrow..."....

 

     "How? I thought he didn't know you're here..."Seungri asked in confusion...

 

     "He don't..."Dara answered with a nod... "I'm here to talk to him for some important matter, and I'm pretty sure once I talked to him he'll come with me..."

 

     Seungri looked at her, puzzled... "and what is that important matter?" he asked again, hoping he'll get a clear answer from her...

 

     Dara looked at Seungri's face carefully, like she's memorizing every detail on his face. She likes Seungri very much. For her, his stubbornness makes him adorable... and she knew he likes her too, as his noona... He's one of the person she knows who'll be hurt the most when they finds out about her condition... and she realized, she can't avoid hurting them no matter what she do to protect them...... "You'll know tomorrow..."she simply told him... "I'll tell you guys tomorrow after I talk to Jiyong..." ...

 

     Seungri looked at her questioningly and shrugged... "well, I guess I'll just wait for tomorrow..."he said before turning around to find their friends...

 

     Dara also look for them and a smile plastered on her face as soon as she saw Youngbae standing with someone in front of him... "they're over there..."...

 

     Seungri followed her gaze. He then frowned seeing Youngbae with a seroius face while talking to someone... "Youngbae hyung looks serious...." he mumbled while heading towards them... "I think he's talking to Jiyong Hyung..."

 

     Dara raised a brow... "really... what do you think they're talking about?"...she asked trying to look at the figure in front of Youngbae... another thing that her friends don't know yet is that she's slowly losing her eyes sight... The Doctors told her that it is one of the symptoms/ effect of her brain cancer...

 

     "I don't know..."Seungri answered until he saw a glimpse of someone behind Jiyong... "Is that Sohee?"...he asked out of nowhere...

 

     Dara suddenly stopped on her track as soon as she heard the name...  she looked at the people not far away from them and frowned... "W-what is she doing here?" she whispered... she felt nervous all of a sudden and she's not liking it...

 

     But Seungri became alert as soon as he saw CL stood up from her seat with a serious expression just like Youngbae... "something is wrong..."he whispered seeing Youngbae moved in front CL...

 

     Dara can also see that something bad is happening between her friends... she breathe deeply to calm herself... "Seungri-ah, let's go, I think they're fighting...."she said before grabbing Seungri's arm towards their friends...

 

     Fear gripped her, knowing something bad is bound to happen, and when they're finally near them, her feet automatically halted upon hearing the words she never thought she would hear from Jiyong...

 

     ..."Sohee and I... we're together now...".....

 

     Dara was unable to take another step, standing frozen on her spot... she feels numb that she can't even feel the throbbing pain on her head and body.... "did I hear it right ?..." she thought while looking at the back of the man she loves who's not aware of her presence...

 

          "Mianhe... But I love Sohee..." 

 

     ...There goes his voice again... the excitement and happiness that she felt turned to heart ache... His unexpected confession makes her heart crushed into pieces... a million pieces and it hurts like hell... Dara's eyes is getting blurred because of the tears that's threatening to stroll down in her face any moment ... she wanted to run and leave the place but her body won't cooperate with her... she slowly reached for Seungri's arm for support who is also as shock as her....

 

     ..... "Mianhe... But I love Sohee..."  ....  Jiyong's words keeps on repeating on her head as tears falling freely from her eyes...

 

     Upon feeling a tight gripped on his arm, Seungri  slowly turned to face her noona... his jaw clenched upon seeing the pain on her noona's face... " N-Noo..na..." he whispered worriedly...

 

    Just then, Bom came hoping that Dara haven't found out anything yet but looking at the sight of her cousin says it all.... "...she...knew..." she thought painfully... her lips trembled upon looking at the terrible sight of her cousin......."D..Dara..."  she called out worriedly, grabbing the attention of their friends...

 

     Everyone fell silent upon hearing Dara's name...  they slowly snapped their heads towards Dara's direction with a surprise look on their faces, except Jiyong and Sohee who stood frozen on their spot after hearing her name...

 

     "D-Dara unnie..." CL and Minzy called her name with so much concern on their faces...

 

     Everyone was calling her name worriedly but it seems like she didn't hear anyone... She focused her eyes on the man who's not turning around to face her... her body is starting to tremble, she felt like fainting anytime soon...

 

     Bom covered seeing her cousin in misery again... the sight she never dream to see again...  "D-Dara..yah...." she softly called and was about to go to her but TOP pulled her back...

 

     ..." Let Jiyong talk to her... "TOP told her while looking at Jiyong who's now walking towards Dara...

 

     Jiyong curled his hand into fist seeing the tears on Dara's face.... "Mianhe Dara, I promised you that I will never hurt you... but I did..." he thought .... he stood infront of her with so much pain on his heart... it broke her heart seeing her broken.... "D-Dara...."...

 

     Dara shook her head... "Ji.... y-you're j-just j..joking, r-right? " she asked hoping that she heard it wrong.... "right  b-baby...?"

 

     Jiyong couldn't stand looking at her eyes with so much pain... he hung his head low and wipes the tears that's forming on his eyes...

 

     Sohee keeps on crying as she watched the scene in front of her... as she watched how broken her sister is... as she watched how she ruin her life again... "mianhe unnie... this will be the last time that I will hurt you... mianhe..."she thought 

 

     Jiyong shut his eyes firmly and took a deep breath to have enough courage to face Dara bravely. He wipes the remaining tears on his eyes before lifting his gaze and met Dara's pleading eyes...

 

     "J-Ji..." Dara called in a pleading voice... She's hoping this was all just a nightmare, that somehow she will wake up again with Jiyong cuddling beside her...

 

     "I-I'm s...sorry, Dara..."Jiyong said..

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pepden #1
Chapter 47: It's been awhile.. hoping you can update this story..
kwonjude #2
its so beautiful gosh!!!
💛💛💛💛💛😭😭😭
fangirlingislifeu #3
Chapter 47: idk how i managed to read this story until the last updated chapter. the story is really not my cup of tea; however, i found myself kept reading this to know what will happen next and how the story will progress, especially with everything that has happened. revenge is interesting, but in this case, i would love to have a different kind of revenge. if sandy really is the twin, and even if she's really DARA, then i'm fine with her plotting against jiyong and sohee BUT i really hope she'll not fall in love with jiyong, again. or even getting back with him. to be really honest, dara deserves better after all that she'd been through — and the best revenge she could do is to show those who hurt her that she's finally happy more than ever and she has moved on. i would really want her to find her peace and happiness, and build herself which she could be proud of. jiyong and sohee do not deserve a bit of her attention, even if that means playing with them. actually, i do not despise sohee much but jiyong. i truly believe he does not deserve a second chance; he cheated on dara with his confuse s and did nothing about it. he may have blamed himself because of what happened yet i didn't see any remorse from him— he was just eaten by the guilt he felt. i'm not even sure if he reflected on the things he made, instead just appeared miserable. jiyong may have been through a lot as well, but i believed those were the consequences of his actions and decisions as he wavered, hence he must take responsibility of it. i would really go for an ending where dara and jiyong will not end up together, because again, dara deserves love that is not forced nor recycle. now that i think about it, jiyong may be confused with his feelings to sohee when dara left, but what appears to me is that jiyong's feelings for dara is not the same as it used to be, and to some extent, he could have been fallen out of love. he could have done things to reach dara (i.e. that time when he can't contact her) but he just remained frustrated of what was happening— he's tired and he gave up. he's an and a coward, really.



everything i have stated are my opinions and perspective upon reading the story. i apologize if ever i hurt your feelings, authornim. afterall, this is your story and you are the one who gets to decide on how the story will unfold and will end. i also understand how you planned to write the story the way it is similar to how u wrote the characters. no one told me to read this, but i am leaving my comments here to let you know how i felt and what i think reading your story. and, i fully understand that it is a daragon story — jiyong and dara are the main characters and the possibility of them as the endgame is high. nonetheless, i will stick to my stand and shameful and embarrassing as it may sound, but there's a part of me hoping you will decide on a different ending. all the characters here deserve to be genuinely happy regardless of the way you want them to be. this is your story and i am looking forward for the next chapters. and the ending haha.



thank you so much for creating a story, it really stirred me and my emotions. please continue writing in the future, author-nim. God bless you. :)))
pepden #4
Chapter 47: I kept reading this story with the same feelings.. im still hoping someday when you have time you will update this.. this story is so great.. i still prefer dara over sandy..
diagwen27
#5
Chapter 47: I really hate jiyong sohee here to be honest..they dont deserve anything..
Dara23 #6
Re-read it again cause this really hits hard hahaha this story is soo good
janerhea03
#7
Chapter 47: i love reading angst stories but this story is giving me a painful feeling that i curse every chapter of the book . it's like this is the most painful book i have ever read and i like it ! hahahaha the pain that is giving to me hahahaha a masochist it is hahaha more hearbreaking scene pls and a y dara authornim . i hope you'll update soon . thank you for this wonderful story .
Toto_ecko88 #8
Pls update more tnx
hyukniss
#9
Chapter 47: Happy new year and hope you update soon
hyukniss
#10
Chapter 47: Anyway i still hope sandy is the real dara.0