PROMISES... TRUST....

Sometimes love just ain't enough...
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    Bom is staring blankly outside of their huge window glass, clutching her phone tightly on her hand...she decided to stay on their house since TOP went to Japan for business trip... As days passed by, fear always consumed her mind knowing that Dara’s life is in danger, and to add to that she has no news about her... she’s really worried to the extent that she wanted to tell her friends the truth... but she promised  to Dara...

 

     She heaved a deep breathe... “Dara... what’s happening to you...”

 

     Just then, her phone started to ring. She looked at the caller and frowned seeing an unkown number...  suddenly, she felt nervous and she doesn’t know why... she pressed  the answer button ... “hello...”

 

     “ah, yeah... hello....” the other line said... “is this Bom-shii?” the man asked

 

     “n-neh, what can I do for you?” Bom asked. She really doesn’t take a call from an unknown number, but she has this feeling that she needs to answer the call...

 

     “oh, Bom... this is Dr. Kim...”

 

     Bom frowned.... of course she knows Dr. Kim... he used to be the Park’s family doctor... but is he calling her all of a sudden ....   “Dr. Kim.... w-what’s the problem?” she asked..., receiving a call  all the way from U.S. from a busy Doctor like him,  she knew it’s something important... “wait.... U.S....” her eyes widen in shock, remembering that Dr. Kim resigned as Park’s family doctor to pursue the carreer that he really wanted to take, and that is to become a brain surgeon...

 

     “It’s about Dara, Bom...”

 

     “OH my God...” Bom gasped out loud... tears b into her eyes... “y-you’re...  Dara’s doctor?” she asked, Finally... the day she’s been waiting...a day where she could hear some news about Dara...

 

     “Bom-“

 

     “Dr. Kim, please tell me where is Dara? Is she okay? Why she isn’t-“

 

     “ Bom, calm down...” Dr. Kim cut her off, knowing that she’s starting to panic....... “listen to me... Bom you need to listen to me, ok?”

 

     Bom heaved a deep breath to calm herself before nodding... “n-neh.... I-I’m listening....”

 

     “I called you because i know you’re worried about Dara and because I have something important to discuss with you...”

 

     Bom bit her lips nervoursly.... “H-how is s-she?”

 

     Bom heard him sighed... “Honestly speaking.... she’s not doing well...”

 

     Bom felt her whole body shaking, afraid of what’s he’s going to say...

 

     “we need to do the operation sooner than expected... her cancer cells are spreading really fast and it’s not really good,...”

 

     “then do the operation... that’s the reason why she left us here right?” Bom blurted out... why is he telling it to her, Dara went to U.S for the operation, but it looks like they haven’t started it yet...

 

     “yeah... but-“

 

     “but?” Bom furrowed her brow’s

 

     “ Dara fainted 2 days after she arrived here...” Dr. Kim informed her..... “ and she didn’t wake up after that.... she was in a coma for almost a month Bom...”

 

     Bom suddenly leaned her body on the glass window for support...“W-what d-did you say? Dara in a c-coma?” she asked, tears falling from her eyes...

 

     “Bom-“

 

     Bom suddenly strided her way towards her room, panicking... “W... Wait Dr. Kim

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pepden #1
Chapter 47: It's been awhile.. hoping you can update this story..
kwonjude #2
its so beautiful gosh!!!
💛💛💛💛💛😭😭😭
fangirlingislifeu #3
Chapter 47: idk how i managed to read this story until the last updated chapter. the story is really not my cup of tea; however, i found myself kept reading this to know what will happen next and how the story will progress, especially with everything that has happened. revenge is interesting, but in this case, i would love to have a different kind of revenge. if sandy really is the twin, and even if she's really DARA, then i'm fine with her plotting against jiyong and sohee BUT i really hope she'll not fall in love with jiyong, again. or even getting back with him. to be really honest, dara deserves better after all that she'd been through — and the best revenge she could do is to show those who hurt her that she's finally happy more than ever and she has moved on. i would really want her to find her peace and happiness, and build herself which she could be proud of. jiyong and sohee do not deserve a bit of her attention, even if that means playing with them. actually, i do not despise sohee much but jiyong. i truly believe he does not deserve a second chance; he cheated on dara with his confuse s and did nothing about it. he may have blamed himself because of what happened yet i didn't see any remorse from him— he was just eaten by the guilt he felt. i'm not even sure if he reflected on the things he made, instead just appeared miserable. jiyong may have been through a lot as well, but i believed those were the consequences of his actions and decisions as he wavered, hence he must take responsibility of it. i would really go for an ending where dara and jiyong will not end up together, because again, dara deserves love that is not forced nor recycle. now that i think about it, jiyong may be confused with his feelings to sohee when dara left, but what appears to me is that jiyong's feelings for dara is not the same as it used to be, and to some extent, he could have been fallen out of love. he could have done things to reach dara (i.e. that time when he can't contact her) but he just remained frustrated of what was happening— he's tired and he gave up. he's an and a coward, really.



everything i have stated are my opinions and perspective upon reading the story. i apologize if ever i hurt your feelings, authornim. afterall, this is your story and you are the one who gets to decide on how the story will unfold and will end. i also understand how you planned to write the story the way it is similar to how u wrote the characters. no one told me to read this, but i am leaving my comments here to let you know how i felt and what i think reading your story. and, i fully understand that it is a daragon story — jiyong and dara are the main characters and the possibility of them as the endgame is high. nonetheless, i will stick to my stand and shameful and embarrassing as it may sound, but there's a part of me hoping you will decide on a different ending. all the characters here deserve to be genuinely happy regardless of the way you want them to be. this is your story and i am looking forward for the next chapters. and the ending haha.



thank you so much for creating a story, it really stirred me and my emotions. please continue writing in the future, author-nim. God bless you. :)))
pepden #4
Chapter 47: I kept reading this story with the same feelings.. im still hoping someday when you have time you will update this.. this story is so great.. i still prefer dara over sandy..
diagwen27
#5
Chapter 47: I really hate jiyong sohee here to be honest..they dont deserve anything..
Dara23 #6
Re-read it again cause this really hits hard hahaha this story is soo good
janerhea03
#7
Chapter 47: i love reading angst stories but this story is giving me a painful feeling that i curse every chapter of the book . it's like this is the most painful book i have ever read and i like it ! hahahaha the pain that is giving to me hahahaha a masochist it is hahaha more hearbreaking scene pls and a y dara authornim . i hope you'll update soon . thank you for this wonderful story .
Toto_ecko88 #8
Pls update more tnx
hyukniss
#9
Chapter 47: Happy new year and hope you update soon
hyukniss
#10
Chapter 47: Anyway i still hope sandy is the real dara.0