[ 1 ] BROKENHEARTED GIRL

Sometimes love just ain't enough...
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   "NOONA!!!!"Seungri shouted as soon as she saw Dara waiting patiently for him while sitting on the available bench in the airport...

 

     Dara stood up with a smile on her face as she watched Seungri walking his way towards her.... "Seungri-ah..." she greeted excitedly...

 

     "Mianhe for waiting Noona...." Seungri said apologetically...

 

     ..."I should be the one to apologize Seungri-ah because I disturb you..."Dara told him... "I didn't call nor inform Bom that I'm coming because I want to surprise Jiyong..." she lied. If Bom knew that she's coming, she's 100% sure that Bom will send her straight to the hospital...

 

     Seungri shook his head... "Ani noona, you just called on the right time..."he grinned excitedly.... "I was just  about to meet the hyungs and the others when you called, so now we can head straight to the meeting place, I'm sure they'll be happy to see you especially Jiyong hyung..."

 

     "Really?"Dara voiced out with excitement... "that's good then, I'm also excited to see them... I missed them..." she said with sadness on her voice...

 

    Seungri then grabbed her luggage from her...  " we also missed you noona..., so let's go?" He asked, flashing her his cute smile....

 

     Dara giggled before nodding at him...

 

     "I'm sure Jiyong hyung will envy me because I'm the one who fetch you..."Seungri spoke out loud as he leads the way to his car...

 

     While Seungri is busy talking nonsense things, Dara is already sweating and feels fainting. She knew her body is still not in a good condition for travel but she really want to see Jiyong before she undergo to the operation. She also decided to tell him the truth... she knew she has a high chance to survive if Jiyong is on her side, waiting for her during her operation... She's starting to feel the pain on her head again and she can feel she's going to faint anytime soon. She tried to massaged her head and nape to ease the pain and it didn't escape from Seungri's eyes to notice....

 

     Seungri turned to face his noona with a crease on his forehead... "Noona, are you okay?" he asked with so much concern...

 

     Dara forced her to smile to hide the pain she's feeling... "I-I'm okay, Seungri-ah..."she lied...

 

     "Are you sure? you look pale Noona..."Seungri looked at her worriedly...

 

     Dara heaved a deep breath before answering... "My head hurts... Must be the jetlag..."she lied again

 

     "Is that so.... then we should go there as fast as we can to meet Jiyong hyung so that you can rest..."Seungri said completely believing her lies...

 

     Dara smiled at him and held his arm firmly... "Seungri-ah...".....

 

     .... "Hmmm?" Seungri face her with a frown on his face

 

     " Thank you..."... Dara softly said...

 

     "For what?" Seungri looked at her, puzzled

 

 

     ..... Dara meet his gaze with a serious expression... "Thank you for being a good maknae to your hyungs and to us...."

 

     " noona..."

 

     .... "You being a playboy and childish makes us happy and brings smile on our faces... and I hope you won't get tired to make us happy...."Dara said, her voice hinting sadness....

 

     "Noona, stop being serious..."Seungri  told her. it's good to hear those things from her but it also makes him confuse as to why she's saying those to him...

 

     But instead of answering, Dara pulled Seungri into a hug...  Seungri cringe at Dara's sudden action...

 

     "N..noona..." Seungri stuttered shyly. He's not used of being hug by Dara because everytime he tries or she tries, Jiyong would always pulls him back or get in between... he should feel the happiness of being hugged by his favorite noona, but the way she hugged him is different... it feels different....

 

     ..."even though your hyungs always bully you, remember that they love you. Bullying you is their way to show their love and care for you...." Dara said, trying to sound lively despite the throbbing pain on her head...... "bullying you makes them happy so you should always make them happy..."

 

     Seungri chuckled... "aigoo, noona, I don't know if I should be happy or sad to what you just said...".....

 

     Dara softly laugh before patting his back softly... "Seungri-ah, If times comes that their days feels gloomy, that their smiles disappeared..." She paused and took a few deep breaths before continuing... "please.... please don't hesitate to bring their smiles back, specially your Jiyong hyung, don't let him live in darkness... huh..." she asked with tears on her eyes....

 

    Seungri frowned in confusion...  "Noona why are you saying this things?... Why are you telling me this? "....

 

     Dara hugged him tightly, trying her best not to cry....... "I just want you to know how important you are to us, you are our vitamin Seungri-ah... so please grant my favor to please always make your hyungs happy especially Jiyong... hmm...?"she desperately asked...

 

     ......"I don't know why you're suddenly telling me this things, but don't worry noona... even if they always bully me, I know they really care for me... and I won't leave them no matter what.  They are my brothers specially Jiyong hyung, I know he really cares for me so don't worry noona I will take good care of him if you're not on his side, I will always make them happy and laugh..."Seungri assured her...

 

    Fresh tears slid down from Dara's eyes and she quickly wipe them away.... She pulled herself away from his embrace with a smile on her face....

 

    Seungri raises an eyebrow when his gaze landed on Dara's face... "Aigoo, did you cry, noona? are you that touched to what I said...."he grinned earning a laugh from Dara

 

     ... "let's go, I'm excited to see them...."

 

 

 

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     "here's your coffee Chae..." Daesung  smiled handing the coffee to CL... "and this is for you hyung..."he said giving the coffee to Taeyang...

 

     "thanks Dae oppa..."CL sweetly smiled at him...

 

     "is Minzy coming?" Daesung asked as he sat across the couple

 

     "Yes..."CL answered... "don't worry she's on her way, I told her it's your treat..."

 

     "Don't worry, they'll come..."Youngbae interjected with a grin on his face... " I'm sure they wouldn't missed this day, since you only treat us once in a blue moon..."...

 

     ....  Daesung looked at him wide eyed... "Yah! I always treat you during my birthdays!!!"

 

     "Oppa, it's your birthdays of course you really should treat us..., you know,  you should always treat us during normal days like this..." CL added

 

     "Why?"Daesung asked..." you have Youngbae hyung to treat you..."

 

     .... CL just shook her head... " what a penny pincher you are, tsk...

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pepden #1
Chapter 47: It's been awhile.. hoping you can update this story..
kwonjude #2
its so beautiful gosh!!!
💛💛💛💛💛😭😭😭
fangirlingislifeu #3
Chapter 47: idk how i managed to read this story until the last updated chapter. the story is really not my cup of tea; however, i found myself kept reading this to know what will happen next and how the story will progress, especially with everything that has happened. revenge is interesting, but in this case, i would love to have a different kind of revenge. if sandy really is the twin, and even if she's really DARA, then i'm fine with her plotting against jiyong and sohee BUT i really hope she'll not fall in love with jiyong, again. or even getting back with him. to be really honest, dara deserves better after all that she'd been through — and the best revenge she could do is to show those who hurt her that she's finally happy more than ever and she has moved on. i would really want her to find her peace and happiness, and build herself which she could be proud of. jiyong and sohee do not deserve a bit of her attention, even if that means playing with them. actually, i do not despise sohee much but jiyong. i truly believe he does not deserve a second chance; he cheated on dara with his confuse s and did nothing about it. he may have blamed himself because of what happened yet i didn't see any remorse from him— he was just eaten by the guilt he felt. i'm not even sure if he reflected on the things he made, instead just appeared miserable. jiyong may have been through a lot as well, but i believed those were the consequences of his actions and decisions as he wavered, hence he must take responsibility of it. i would really go for an ending where dara and jiyong will not end up together, because again, dara deserves love that is not forced nor recycle. now that i think about it, jiyong may be confused with his feelings to sohee when dara left, but what appears to me is that jiyong's feelings for dara is not the same as it used to be, and to some extent, he could have been fallen out of love. he could have done things to reach dara (i.e. that time when he can't contact her) but he just remained frustrated of what was happening— he's tired and he gave up. he's an and a coward, really.



everything i have stated are my opinions and perspective upon reading the story. i apologize if ever i hurt your feelings, authornim. afterall, this is your story and you are the one who gets to decide on how the story will unfold and will end. i also understand how you planned to write the story the way it is similar to how u wrote the characters. no one told me to read this, but i am leaving my comments here to let you know how i felt and what i think reading your story. and, i fully understand that it is a daragon story — jiyong and dara are the main characters and the possibility of them as the endgame is high. nonetheless, i will stick to my stand and shameful and embarrassing as it may sound, but there's a part of me hoping you will decide on a different ending. all the characters here deserve to be genuinely happy regardless of the way you want them to be. this is your story and i am looking forward for the next chapters. and the ending haha.



thank you so much for creating a story, it really stirred me and my emotions. please continue writing in the future, author-nim. God bless you. :)))
pepden #4
Chapter 47: I kept reading this story with the same feelings.. im still hoping someday when you have time you will update this.. this story is so great.. i still prefer dara over sandy..
diagwen27
#5
Chapter 47: I really hate jiyong sohee here to be honest..they dont deserve anything..
Dara23 #6
Re-read it again cause this really hits hard hahaha this story is soo good
janerhea03
#7
Chapter 47: i love reading angst stories but this story is giving me a painful feeling that i curse every chapter of the book . it's like this is the most painful book i have ever read and i like it ! hahahaha the pain that is giving to me hahahaha a masochist it is hahaha more hearbreaking scene pls and a y dara authornim . i hope you'll update soon . thank you for this wonderful story .
Toto_ecko88 #8
Pls update more tnx
hyukniss
#9
Chapter 47: Happy new year and hope you update soon
hyukniss
#10
Chapter 47: Anyway i still hope sandy is the real dara.0