[ 1 ] A SISTER'S LOVE

Sometimes love just ain't enough...
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     Bom was staring worriedly  at the sleeping face of her beloved cousin... "Dara..." she softly whispered  before letting out a heart wrenching sob...... fear gripped into her body when she remember the time Dara fainted in front of her... she suddenly realize that she's not yet ready to lose her...

 

 

     After Dara fainted, she got help from a stranger and brought Dara to the hospital. Dr. Kim who just arrived that time quickly assessed and treat Dara.

 

 

     "Bommie..."TOP called out with so much concern on his voice. Bom have been silently crying all night and it made him worry for her health... "... go home and have some rest..."...

 

 

     Bom shook her head... "No,  I want to stay here..." she said between her sobs...

 

 

    TOP let out a sigh... "Bommie, look at yourself... you don't want Dara to see you like that... you'll just make her worried when she wakes up..."

 

 

     But instead of answering,  Bom slowly reached  Dara's hand and squeezed it... "Look at her sleeping face Tabi... " she said, her voice cracking as she continued.. "she's sleeping peacefully, there's no evident of any pain and hurt on her face..."

 

 

     "Bom...." TOP softly squeezed her shoulder...

 

 

    .... "But I don't want her to sleep for a long time...."Bom tried to stifle her tears before lifting her gaze and met his eyes ... "she needs to wake up Tabi... she needs to wake up..."...

 

 

    TOP stared into her warm, pleading eyes...  "she will..."he told her... "she will wake up, we just need to wait..."....

 

 

    ....  "I'm scared Tabi... I'm scared... what if... what if-"

 

 

     "she won't die Bom..."TOP clenched his jaw hearing Bom's broken voice, he don't want to lie but  he wanted to lessen all the burden and worries that she have...... "no matter how hurt she is right now, she's strong enough to give up her life just like that... she's not stupid Bom..."

 

 

     Bom anxiously turned her gaze back to Dara... "If only Jiyong didn't cheat on Dara.... maybe... maybe---"....

 

 

     .... "blaming him won't help the situation right now..." TOP cut her off while looking at Dara... "no matter how much we blame him, no matter how much you despise him, it won't save Dara's life..."

 

 

     Bom shook her head in defeat... "I don't know what to do anymore..." she said, wiping the tears on her face...

 

 

     TOP lowered his gaze face Bom... "You already did everything for her... " he said... "all you need to do is to trust her to win her battle... be strong and brave for her..."

 

 

     Bom fell silent while staring at Dara... she wanted to be strong for her, but fears and worries are stopping her from being brave and strong for her cousin... "what should I do Dara? what should I do?"....

 

 

     Just then, the door open widely revealing Dr. Kim who's been constantly checking up on Dara from time to time......

 

 

     TOP bowed his head to greet him while Bom stood up from her seat and immediately wipe the remaining tears on her face... "Dr. K-Kim..." she called out with a shaky voice...

 

 

     Dr. Kim gave them a small nod before walking towards Dara... he stood beside her bed and starts checking her vitals sign...  

 

 

    Bom quietly watched Dr. Kim while he carefully checks everything on Dara... Seeing her hands shaking, TOP immediately held her hand and squeezed it tightly... "Don't worry..." he whispered with a smile...

 

 

     After Dr. Kim finished checking on Dara, he turned to face Bom with a serious expression... "Last night, you're not in a good condition so I can't talk to you regarding Dara's condition, but now I think you're okay..." he said...

 

 

     "Dr. Kim-"

 

 

     "I need to tell you something important Bom..."...

 

 

     The moment Bom met Dr. Kim's eyes, she knew a bad news is coming from him...  her body starts to tremble because of fear... But she knew she have to bravely face everything about Dara's condition... "a-about what?" she asked... "is this about Dara? h-how is she?"

 

 

     Dr. Kim heaved a deep sigh...... "honestly speaking, she's in a bad situation..."he admitted.. " her stubbornness led her to the dangerous situation that we're trying to avoid..." ...

 

 

     "D-Dr. Kim..."

 

 

     Dr. Kim gave TOP a quick glance before shifting his gaze back to Bom... "I already told this to her and I think I should tell you this...  for you to prepare yourself..."

 

 

     Bom bit her lip nervously... "w-what are you saying?"....

 

 

     Though it's hard for Dr. Kim to see the fear and pain on Bom's eyes, he still bravely met her eyes... even though it hurts, as a Doctor it's his job to tell the family's relatives the truth about his patient's condition...  "Dara's chance to live is decreased to 90/10 %..."

 

 

    Bom took a stepped back while disbelievingly looking at Dr. Kim... she then shook her head... "No..."her voice came in as firm but a little shaken ... "you said you could save her... "

 

 

     "Bom..." TOP looked at her worriedly...

 

 

    ... "I told you I will try my best to save her, I never give an assurance that she will survive..." Dr. Kim explained...

 

 

    Bom swallowed hard...  "a-are you giving up on her..."

 

 

     Dr. Kim shook her head... "when it comes to your family, giving up is not in my dictionary...but..." he looked at her with pure sadness on his eyes...

 

 

     "Dr. Kim..." Bom's voice is almost pleading....

 

 

     "Like I said, I will try my best, even she doesn't want to survive..." Dr. Kim told her firmly.... "I know the reason why she's stress these past few days, she told me everything... and I can feel that she's giving up which I'm afraid of, but I won't give up on her..."

 

 

     "Dr. Kim, please save her..." TOP spoke up...

 

 

     Dr. Kim nods... "That's why I need to talk to you, Bom. I need your help..."he said... "I ran a few laboratory tests and all were pretty bad..."

 

 

     "W-What do you mean?" Bom asked worriedly...

 

 

     "Dara is in a dangerous situation right now... "Dr. Kim told them, his voice hinting sadness... "she should be conscious right now, but as you can see, she still hasn't woken up......"

 

 

     ... "Dr. Kim... tell me straight...."

 

 

    Dr. Kim stared at her for a while with so much concern before answering... "like what I told you, she's in a dangerous situation, and I suggest we do the operation sooner..."

 

 

     Bom and TOP looked at each other with confusion before turning their gaze back to Dr. Kim... "Sooner?" TOP questioned...

 

 

     Dr. Kim nodded... "I will prepare everything so that we could do the operation tomorrow or maybe the next day...."he continued

 

 

    "t-that soon?"Bom's voice started to crack as her eyes started to moist again...... "But she hasn't even woken up, i-is it safe for her to undergo to s-surgery?"

 

 

     ..., Dr. Kim felt his

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pepden #1
Chapter 47: It's been awhile.. hoping you can update this story..
kwonjude #2
its so beautiful gosh!!!
💛💛💛💛💛😭😭😭
fangirlingislifeu #3
Chapter 47: idk how i managed to read this story until the last updated chapter. the story is really not my cup of tea; however, i found myself kept reading this to know what will happen next and how the story will progress, especially with everything that has happened. revenge is interesting, but in this case, i would love to have a different kind of revenge. if sandy really is the twin, and even if she's really DARA, then i'm fine with her plotting against jiyong and sohee BUT i really hope she'll not fall in love with jiyong, again. or even getting back with him. to be really honest, dara deserves better after all that she'd been through — and the best revenge she could do is to show those who hurt her that she's finally happy more than ever and she has moved on. i would really want her to find her peace and happiness, and build herself which she could be proud of. jiyong and sohee do not deserve a bit of her attention, even if that means playing with them. actually, i do not despise sohee much but jiyong. i truly believe he does not deserve a second chance; he cheated on dara with his confuse s and did nothing about it. he may have blamed himself because of what happened yet i didn't see any remorse from him— he was just eaten by the guilt he felt. i'm not even sure if he reflected on the things he made, instead just appeared miserable. jiyong may have been through a lot as well, but i believed those were the consequences of his actions and decisions as he wavered, hence he must take responsibility of it. i would really go for an ending where dara and jiyong will not end up together, because again, dara deserves love that is not forced nor recycle. now that i think about it, jiyong may be confused with his feelings to sohee when dara left, but what appears to me is that jiyong's feelings for dara is not the same as it used to be, and to some extent, he could have been fallen out of love. he could have done things to reach dara (i.e. that time when he can't contact her) but he just remained frustrated of what was happening— he's tired and he gave up. he's an and a coward, really.



everything i have stated are my opinions and perspective upon reading the story. i apologize if ever i hurt your feelings, authornim. afterall, this is your story and you are the one who gets to decide on how the story will unfold and will end. i also understand how you planned to write the story the way it is similar to how u wrote the characters. no one told me to read this, but i am leaving my comments here to let you know how i felt and what i think reading your story. and, i fully understand that it is a daragon story — jiyong and dara are the main characters and the possibility of them as the endgame is high. nonetheless, i will stick to my stand and shameful and embarrassing as it may sound, but there's a part of me hoping you will decide on a different ending. all the characters here deserve to be genuinely happy regardless of the way you want them to be. this is your story and i am looking forward for the next chapters. and the ending haha.



thank you so much for creating a story, it really stirred me and my emotions. please continue writing in the future, author-nim. God bless you. :)))
pepden #4
Chapter 47: I kept reading this story with the same feelings.. im still hoping someday when you have time you will update this.. this story is so great.. i still prefer dara over sandy..
diagwen27
#5
Chapter 47: I really hate jiyong sohee here to be honest..they dont deserve anything..
Dara23 #6
Re-read it again cause this really hits hard hahaha this story is soo good
janerhea03
#7
Chapter 47: i love reading angst stories but this story is giving me a painful feeling that i curse every chapter of the book . it's like this is the most painful book i have ever read and i like it ! hahahaha the pain that is giving to me hahahaha a masochist it is hahaha more hearbreaking scene pls and a y dara authornim . i hope you'll update soon . thank you for this wonderful story .
Toto_ecko88 #8
Pls update more tnx
hyukniss
#9
Chapter 47: Happy new year and hope you update soon
hyukniss
#10
Chapter 47: Anyway i still hope sandy is the real dara.0