MARTYR...

Sometimes love just ain't enough...
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     Dara felt a little pain in her head making her groan... She scrunched her face slightly and slowly opened her eyes just to see a white ceiling... "where am I?"she whispered...

 

     She lifted her arm and saw an IV tube on it.... "Hospital.....??? why am I here in the hospital...."she asked herself, she then remember that she fainted on the street. Her body starts to tremble upon remembering the reason why she fainted... she shook her head with tears b into her eyes... "No... it's just a dream...." she whispered... "Neh, Dara it's  just a dream... Jiyong will never hurt you..." she continued before removing the IV on her arm

 

     "I.... I n-need to see him...".........

 

 

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     ................ Jiyong happily keyed the code and entered his house, he needs to put all the groceries that they bought to the kitchen then go back to his car where Sohee is waiting for him... he knows he sounds so unfair for being happy with their current situation, but he felt so happy knowing that they don't need to hide anything to the people around them, especially now that Dara knows... All he wish at the moment is that for Dara to find her happiness...

 

     He suddenly heard some noise coming from his kitchen... he frowned as he walks towards his kitchen thinking of what could that noise be,... he suddenly stopped seeing a familiar figure.....

 

     "D-Dara...?"Jiyong looked at her, puzzled...

 

     Dara flinched upon hearing his voice...  she took a deep breath before turning around to face him with a smile on her face... "Baby..."she said before running towards him... "surprised?"...  she asked playfully like nothing happened...

 

     Jiyong looked at her straight in the eyes with so much confusion. He's really not expecting to see her after what happened between them, and seeing her in front of him really surprised him... "Dara what are you doing here?"...

 

     "Aigoo..."Dara pouted as she tried to sound lively.... "of course I'm cooking breakfast for you- Oh wait you already bought some groceries?..."she paused looking at the bags he's holding, then grabbed them to put on the nearest counter...

 

    Jiyong sighed as he watched Dara doing the things she's not supposed to do...  "Dara..."

 

     Dara's breathing was caught up in , trying to hold back her tears... "it's just a dream Dara...."she thought, believing what she wanted to believe....... "You must be angry at me right now, aren't you?" she continued... "Mian-he, I actually arrived the other day and I want to surprise you, but maybe I'm really tired that I fell asleep and just woke up earlier..."

 

     Jiyong looked at her disbelievingly... "Dara, listen to m-"

 

     "you know I have these weird dreams..."Dara immediately cut him off, not wanting to hear what he's about to say..... "It's a nightmare actually... good thing it's just a nightmare-"

 

     "DARA STOP!!!" Jiyong shouted that made Dara flinched at his sudden outburst... "Just please stop...." his voice is almost begging... he can't watch Dara like this in front of him... "what have I done...?".......

 

     "Ji, what to---" Sohee froze on her spot seeing the girl whom she caused another pain...... she looked at her guiltily.... "U...nnie..."

 

     Tears started to form on Dara's eyes as soon as she saw Sohee... "So it's true... it's not a nightmare after all... it's a nightmare of my reality...." she thought, feeling the stabbing pain again on her heart... Her body starts to tremble as the whole situation started to sink in again.... she clenched her fist... "No... I can't lose like this... I... I can't..."

 

     "Dara...."

 

     With a trembling hand, Dara immediately wipes the tears on her eyes and bravely smiled at them... "o-oh.... you h-have a v...visitor....."she said with a shaky voice before turning around to pretend looking at the groceries he bought...  "Mian-he I... didn't k..know you have v-visitor... today.... I think the f-food is not enough for us...."

 

     Jiyong move closer to Dara... "D-dara...." he called out worriedly...

 

     Dara bit her lips and tried to even out her breathing to stop herself from crying.... "uhm, I... I w-will just cook another f-food for your v-visitor-", she said, her voice cracking as she continued

 

     "DARA STOP!..."Jiyong shouted in frustration.... "Just please stop..."

 

     ........ "So it's not a dream... you really cheated on me..." Dara said, a steady stream of tears falling from her eyes....

 

      Jiyong held both of her arms... "Dara I'm sorry...." he apologized again... "please don't do this to yourself..."

 

     Dara fell silent as she stared at his pleading eyes...

 

     Just then, Bom's angry voice was heard.... "DARA!!!" she shouted as she desperately look for her, and her eyes widen in anger upon seeing her holding by Jiyong helplessly... she clenched her fist angrily as she stride her way towards them...... "let her go, you ing bastard!"she  immediately removed Jiyong's hands away from Dara before slapping him in the face... "Don't you dare lay your dirty hand on her again..." she muttered through gritted teeth before facing Dara... "Dara are you okay?" she asked with so much concern while holding her protectively...

 

     But instead of answering, Dara removed Bom's hands from her and wiped her tears. She heaved a deep breath before facing Jiyong again... "Ji...." she called out as she bridged the distance between them...... "baby...." she looked at him pleadingly while reaching for his cheeks but Jiyong caught her hands...

 

     "Dara... please, don't do this..." Jiyong said, his voice is almost begging. he can't bear to see the Dara in front of him breaking down... every tears that falls from her eyes makes him feel more guiltier... Dara doesn't deserve the kind of pain that he gave her, and he hates himself for that...

 

     Dara shook her head desperately ... "No...."she answered... "I-I will forget everything..

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pepden #1
Chapter 47: It's been awhile.. hoping you can update this story..
kwonjude #2
its so beautiful gosh!!!
💛💛💛💛💛😭😭😭
fangirlingislifeu #3
Chapter 47: idk how i managed to read this story until the last updated chapter. the story is really not my cup of tea; however, i found myself kept reading this to know what will happen next and how the story will progress, especially with everything that has happened. revenge is interesting, but in this case, i would love to have a different kind of revenge. if sandy really is the twin, and even if she's really DARA, then i'm fine with her plotting against jiyong and sohee BUT i really hope she'll not fall in love with jiyong, again. or even getting back with him. to be really honest, dara deserves better after all that she'd been through — and the best revenge she could do is to show those who hurt her that she's finally happy more than ever and she has moved on. i would really want her to find her peace and happiness, and build herself which she could be proud of. jiyong and sohee do not deserve a bit of her attention, even if that means playing with them. actually, i do not despise sohee much but jiyong. i truly believe he does not deserve a second chance; he cheated on dara with his confuse s and did nothing about it. he may have blamed himself because of what happened yet i didn't see any remorse from him— he was just eaten by the guilt he felt. i'm not even sure if he reflected on the things he made, instead just appeared miserable. jiyong may have been through a lot as well, but i believed those were the consequences of his actions and decisions as he wavered, hence he must take responsibility of it. i would really go for an ending where dara and jiyong will not end up together, because again, dara deserves love that is not forced nor recycle. now that i think about it, jiyong may be confused with his feelings to sohee when dara left, but what appears to me is that jiyong's feelings for dara is not the same as it used to be, and to some extent, he could have been fallen out of love. he could have done things to reach dara (i.e. that time when he can't contact her) but he just remained frustrated of what was happening— he's tired and he gave up. he's an and a coward, really.



everything i have stated are my opinions and perspective upon reading the story. i apologize if ever i hurt your feelings, authornim. afterall, this is your story and you are the one who gets to decide on how the story will unfold and will end. i also understand how you planned to write the story the way it is similar to how u wrote the characters. no one told me to read this, but i am leaving my comments here to let you know how i felt and what i think reading your story. and, i fully understand that it is a daragon story — jiyong and dara are the main characters and the possibility of them as the endgame is high. nonetheless, i will stick to my stand and shameful and embarrassing as it may sound, but there's a part of me hoping you will decide on a different ending. all the characters here deserve to be genuinely happy regardless of the way you want them to be. this is your story and i am looking forward for the next chapters. and the ending haha.



thank you so much for creating a story, it really stirred me and my emotions. please continue writing in the future, author-nim. God bless you. :)))
pepden #4
Chapter 47: I kept reading this story with the same feelings.. im still hoping someday when you have time you will update this.. this story is so great.. i still prefer dara over sandy..
diagwen27
#5
Chapter 47: I really hate jiyong sohee here to be honest..they dont deserve anything..
Dara23 #6
Re-read it again cause this really hits hard hahaha this story is soo good
janerhea03
#7
Chapter 47: i love reading angst stories but this story is giving me a painful feeling that i curse every chapter of the book . it's like this is the most painful book i have ever read and i like it ! hahahaha the pain that is giving to me hahahaha a masochist it is hahaha more hearbreaking scene pls and a y dara authornim . i hope you'll update soon . thank you for this wonderful story .
Toto_ecko88 #8
Pls update more tnx
hyukniss
#9
Chapter 47: Happy new year and hope you update soon
hyukniss
#10
Chapter 47: Anyway i still hope sandy is the real dara.0