CHAPTER 8: BRAND NEW DAY?

Opposites Really Do Attract

 

*I wish it was all just a dream. When I open my eyes everything will be back on its own places. Living with my brother, not with HIM.*

She opened her eyes. “, its real. Why did God gave me this kind of destiny?. WHY?!”

She stared at the ceiling for 30 minutes, emotionless. Since its Sunday there are no classes. She just wanted to rest.

“Ji Hyeon-ahh! Min Min! Breakfast is ready! ” She rushed out of her room and bumped into someone.

“Oww, sorry.” She saw Minho, half . Her eyes grew big. O.O

“What? First time seeing a hot body?. ” He smirked.

She blushed, “N-N-NO, I-I-I need to go downstairs.”

At the Dining Table

“Ji Hyeon-shi, I have a favor to ask. Would you go to the mall and buy some fresh flower. ” With a smiling face Mrs. Choi place the eggs in our plates.

“And you my Min Min.” Mrs. Choi looked at him. "You go with her, Okay?"

"Okay." Minho nodded while reading his newspaper.

"No, I can go bymyself." Ji Hyeon looked at Mrs. Choi then to Minho.

"Are you sure sweetie?"

"Yes." She smiled.



 

 

On the way to the mall

-=Ji Hyeon's POV=-

", I dob't know where it is." I murmured to my self while looking for which way will I go. 

"Hi y, you lost?" A man in black appeared in front me*OMG, who's this ugly old man?*

"mmm, no." I answered. I saw him staring at me. I tried to walk away. But men! he keeps on blocking me. I can't take him anymore.

" Yah! Will you move?! Like, the way is so big. Why do you keep blocking me?. " He blocked me once again. 

"Yah! I said move." I tried to runaway but he pulled my hair.

"Acting tough eh? Let's see if you can still act. Hahahah! "

I saw that there are 4 men in front of me. They're getting closer.

 

 

 

*! help me Minho.*

 

 

 

 

 

 

"Yah! Don't touch her! "

I'm looking where the voice came from and in the corner of my eye I saw him...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Minho.

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#1
congratulations !
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#2
congratulations on the random feature!
Iminthezone #3
Congrats
Issdnn
#4
Chapter 49: I've watched Playful Kiss for soooo many times and I think this story is really similar to the drama. However, you add some "additional" chapters and storyline which is not a part of the movie. Overall, it's a cute story!♡ but I have a problem when I read per paragraph. Sometimes I got confused who is saying this and who is saying that. For example...,

The next day, they decided to grab some lunch at a famous restaurant in Hawaii. MinHo wore some white wife beater while Ji Hyeon, she wore a flower-designed dress and a denim shorts. “What do you like to eat?” She asked MinHo. “Hmm, basic morning food I guess. Bacon and eggs?” Ji Hyeon ooh-ed. The waiter walks in, holding a mango juice and serve it Ji Hyeon. (Chapt 48 ph 2)

Rather than that, I prefer...,

The next day, they decided to grab some lunch at a famous restaurant in Hawaii. MinHo wore some white wife beater while Ji Hyeon, she wore a flower-designed dress and a denim shorts.

“What do you like to eat?” She asked MinHo.

“Hmm, basic morning food I guess. Bacon and eggs?”

Ji Hyeon ooh-ed. The waiter walks in, holding a mango juice and serve it Ji Hyeon.

What do you think about it?:)

Andddd I think the plot is wayyyyy tooooo fast:(
I slightly got confused when Kyuhyun (then Baekhyun) suddenly come and leave the story like that lol

But however, I enjoy reading this story! Goodjob!♥
Meronew
#5
Chapter 48: I think you love watching asian dramas cause when i read your first chapter and last chapters i feel like watching hana yori dango (remake korean drama name: boys over flovers) and when she first come to minho's house and get tutor from him are like from a drama called playful kiss :) thats why i like ur story :)
sheerah6jaya
#6
Chapter 49: Aww! I love this story so much! Its so sweet and kinda like a mix of hot and adorable in a good way! =D
Dubulge
#7
Awww, what a nice end to this fanfic! Im so glad I read this
It was incredibly sweet and cute! :DDD

Daebak indeed~
Jimin_Sungjong #8
oh, I can't believe it is over...
DAEBAK
loved this fic, really!