CHAPTER 3: ONEW

Opposites Really Do Attract

 

She go back to her classroom and sit at the chair located behind onew’s chair, Her boy best friend. Yes, he is one of the hottest and a-must-boyfriend in our school. She love her as a best friend and she thinks that she will not fall for Onew, for some reasons.

 

“Ji Hyeon  are you okay?What happened? Did he do something bad to you?”Onew asked.

 

“I’m okay, don’t worry.” Ji Hyeon put a fake smile.

 

“Are you sure?Do you want me to kill my friend ?”

 

YES! Hahahaha! Why you so worried about me? Do you like me?”Ji Hyeon look him in the eyes, put a O in her face and started to laugh histerically.

 

“I’m just joking. I’m fine. Don’t worry.”

 

 

-=Onew’s POW=-

“Are you sure?Do you want me to kill my friend ?” I asked her.

 

“Hahahaha! Why you so worried about me? Do you like me?”

 

 

"..."

 

 

* Yes, I like you!* I though to myself.

She looked at me straight to the eyes *Okay, I dont know what to reply!* and started to laugh. She is so cute. I wish she knows my feelings and be mine.

 

 

Dismissal Time

 I wan to ask Ji hyeon for a date, just a friendly date. I looked for Ji Hyeon and I spotted her on the locker putting her stuff in it. Here I go.

 

 

“Uhmm, Ji Hyeon”

 

“Yes?” She puts her last book inside the locker and looked at me.

“Would you mind to go with me this Saturday afternoon? I have to buy some new clothes for my mother.”

“Is that a date?” She asked and smiled. Omo!She’s so beautiful! :”>

“I guess?. Will you come with me?”I asked again.

“Yes, it sounds fun.” She answered. My heart is going to explode!

“See you then. Bye.” I left with a smile on my face.

 

 

-= Ann Di’s POV=-

 

 

“I smell something fishy EH.” I murmurred to herself, give those evil smirk and continue to listen to their conversation.

 

 

“See you then.” Onew left with a smile on his face.

“Yah! Onew-ssi! ” I yelled.

“What do you want?” with a lazy look on his face.

“Why you look so cold to me? And look so nice with Ji Hyeon. Do you like her?! Tell me!” I saw him blush. *WTF! He blushed? I’m getting excited for this.

“Hmm, its none of your business. Im going first bye! ”That bastard, just left me like that?.

 

 

 

 

5 minutes later I receive a  text message.

 

 

 

From: Onew(Bastard)                                                     4:00 pm

To: Ann Di

About the question you asked me earlier, I don’t think I like her.

 

 

 

 

 

 

But I love her.

 

PS: Please keep it a secret between us. Thanks!

 

WTF.

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#1
congratulations !
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#2
congratulations on the random feature!
Iminthezone #3
Congrats
Issdnn
#4
Chapter 49: I've watched Playful Kiss for soooo many times and I think this story is really similar to the drama. However, you add some "additional" chapters and storyline which is not a part of the movie. Overall, it's a cute story!♡ but I have a problem when I read per paragraph. Sometimes I got confused who is saying this and who is saying that. For example...,

The next day, they decided to grab some lunch at a famous restaurant in Hawaii. MinHo wore some white wife beater while Ji Hyeon, she wore a flower-designed dress and a denim shorts. “What do you like to eat?” She asked MinHo. “Hmm, basic morning food I guess. Bacon and eggs?” Ji Hyeon ooh-ed. The waiter walks in, holding a mango juice and serve it Ji Hyeon. (Chapt 48 ph 2)

Rather than that, I prefer...,

The next day, they decided to grab some lunch at a famous restaurant in Hawaii. MinHo wore some white wife beater while Ji Hyeon, she wore a flower-designed dress and a denim shorts.

“What do you like to eat?” She asked MinHo.

“Hmm, basic morning food I guess. Bacon and eggs?”

Ji Hyeon ooh-ed. The waiter walks in, holding a mango juice and serve it Ji Hyeon.

What do you think about it?:)

Andddd I think the plot is wayyyyy tooooo fast:(
I slightly got confused when Kyuhyun (then Baekhyun) suddenly come and leave the story like that lol

But however, I enjoy reading this story! Goodjob!♥
Meronew
#5
Chapter 48: I think you love watching asian dramas cause when i read your first chapter and last chapters i feel like watching hana yori dango (remake korean drama name: boys over flovers) and when she first come to minho's house and get tutor from him are like from a drama called playful kiss :) thats why i like ur story :)
sheerah6jaya
#6
Chapter 49: Aww! I love this story so much! Its so sweet and kinda like a mix of hot and adorable in a good way! =D
Dubulge
#7
Awww, what a nice end to this fanfic! Im so glad I read this
It was incredibly sweet and cute! :DDD

Daebak indeed~
Jimin_Sungjong #8
oh, I can't believe it is over...
DAEBAK
loved this fic, really!