CHAPTER 7: HIM?!

Opposites Really Do Attract

 

“Good bye Umma! Appa! Oppa! ”Ji Hyeon hugged her family for the last time.

“Oppa! ” Looking at her Jin Young oppa. He messed up Ji Hyeon’s hair and hugged her tightly.

“I’m going to miss you, take care. ”

“Bye sweetheart.” They went inside their car. The engine starts and the car leaves.

"I guess they're gone now. "She murmured to herself.

Ji Hyeon sighed, In front of her was her bag full of clothes, things, and more clothes. She get her bag and*damn its heavy…

“May I help you?”

 

 

 

In the House

“Yah! Min Min go help Ji Hyeon to get her things outside.”

“Wae?! She can do it on her own and I swear she don’t need my help.” Minho is busy playing with his laptop.

“Min Min, don’t make me repeat myself.if you don’t help her, I wont make breakfast starting tomorrow.” Mrs. Choi smirked and raised her eyebrows.

“bwoah?! Breakfast?. NO BREAKFAST? You’re really scary mom. Okay.”  Minho stood up and go downstairs to help Ji Hyeon.

-=MINHO'S POV=-

“May I help you?” I smirked while I offer my hand. *I really love to smirk.*

“No, thanks for the offer. I can do it by my—“She looked at me in shock.*Hahahahah! Whats with the face?! *

“You can do it by yourself? I knew it. Bye.”

-=Ji Hyeon’s POV=-

“No, thanks for the offer. I can do it by my—“*! WHY IS THAT MAN HERE?! DON’T TELL – ! I HATE MYSELF! I WANNA ING DIE RIGHT NOW! *

“You can do it by yourself? I knew it. Bye.” He walked straight back to the door without even looking at me.

“Wait!”I yelled*WHY DID I DO THAT?! *

“Please help me, it is heavy.” I see him smirked and grabbed my bag.

“Yah! Do you live here?” I asked, still confuse.

“Isn’t it obvious? Stupid.”

 

 

 

*He calls me stupid again.*

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#1
congratulations !
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#2
congratulations on the random feature!
Iminthezone #3
Congrats
Issdnn
#4
Chapter 49: I've watched Playful Kiss for soooo many times and I think this story is really similar to the drama. However, you add some "additional" chapters and storyline which is not a part of the movie. Overall, it's a cute story!♡ but I have a problem when I read per paragraph. Sometimes I got confused who is saying this and who is saying that. For example...,

The next day, they decided to grab some lunch at a famous restaurant in Hawaii. MinHo wore some white wife beater while Ji Hyeon, she wore a flower-designed dress and a denim shorts. “What do you like to eat?” She asked MinHo. “Hmm, basic morning food I guess. Bacon and eggs?” Ji Hyeon ooh-ed. The waiter walks in, holding a mango juice and serve it Ji Hyeon. (Chapt 48 ph 2)

Rather than that, I prefer...,

The next day, they decided to grab some lunch at a famous restaurant in Hawaii. MinHo wore some white wife beater while Ji Hyeon, she wore a flower-designed dress and a denim shorts.

“What do you like to eat?” She asked MinHo.

“Hmm, basic morning food I guess. Bacon and eggs?”

Ji Hyeon ooh-ed. The waiter walks in, holding a mango juice and serve it Ji Hyeon.

What do you think about it?:)

Andddd I think the plot is wayyyyy tooooo fast:(
I slightly got confused when Kyuhyun (then Baekhyun) suddenly come and leave the story like that lol

But however, I enjoy reading this story! Goodjob!♥
Meronew
#5
Chapter 48: I think you love watching asian dramas cause when i read your first chapter and last chapters i feel like watching hana yori dango (remake korean drama name: boys over flovers) and when she first come to minho's house and get tutor from him are like from a drama called playful kiss :) thats why i like ur story :)
sheerah6jaya
#6
Chapter 49: Aww! I love this story so much! Its so sweet and kinda like a mix of hot and adorable in a good way! =D
Dubulge
#7
Awww, what a nice end to this fanfic! Im so glad I read this
It was incredibly sweet and cute! :DDD

Daebak indeed~
Jimin_Sungjong #8
oh, I can't believe it is over...
DAEBAK
loved this fic, really!