CHAPTER 4: FRIDAY NIGHT

Opposites Really Do Attract

 

“Umma! Appa! I miss you so much! How are you?. How long will you stay?. ” Ji Hyeon asked her parents. Her parents doesn’t stay at home because of business matters.

“hmm, we’ll leave tomorrow evening and by the way free yourself tomorrow. We will meet someone.”

“What?! But I have a date tomorrow, Umma! ”Ji Hyeon pouted.

“Just cancel it.” Your mom shouted.

“But—” Before she continue her father buts in.

“No buts young miss! ”

“Okay…” With a gloomy face, Ji Hyeon went straight to her room and think.

Ji Hyeon is confused.

“What will I do?! It is my first time to go out with a date with Onew. And I wonder who the hell we will meet tomorrow. Such a pain in the . !”

Ji Hyeon washed herself; wear oversize t-shirt and pink pjs. She go to her bed, lie awake and stare blankly at the ceiling.

“Ugh! Ottoke?! ”She covered her face with a pillow. Over thinking she fell asleep and went to the lalaland.



 

 

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HTTPSTAY
#1
congratulations !
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#2
congratulations on the random feature!
Iminthezone #3
Congrats
Issdnn
#4
Chapter 49: I've watched Playful Kiss for soooo many times and I think this story is really similar to the drama. However, you add some "additional" chapters and storyline which is not a part of the movie. Overall, it's a cute story!♡ but I have a problem when I read per paragraph. Sometimes I got confused who is saying this and who is saying that. For example...,

The next day, they decided to grab some lunch at a famous restaurant in Hawaii. MinHo wore some white wife beater while Ji Hyeon, she wore a flower-designed dress and a denim shorts. “What do you like to eat?” She asked MinHo. “Hmm, basic morning food I guess. Bacon and eggs?” Ji Hyeon ooh-ed. The waiter walks in, holding a mango juice and serve it Ji Hyeon. (Chapt 48 ph 2)

Rather than that, I prefer...,

The next day, they decided to grab some lunch at a famous restaurant in Hawaii. MinHo wore some white wife beater while Ji Hyeon, she wore a flower-designed dress and a denim shorts.

“What do you like to eat?” She asked MinHo.

“Hmm, basic morning food I guess. Bacon and eggs?”

Ji Hyeon ooh-ed. The waiter walks in, holding a mango juice and serve it Ji Hyeon.

What do you think about it?:)

Andddd I think the plot is wayyyyy tooooo fast:(
I slightly got confused when Kyuhyun (then Baekhyun) suddenly come and leave the story like that lol

But however, I enjoy reading this story! Goodjob!♥
Meronew
#5
Chapter 48: I think you love watching asian dramas cause when i read your first chapter and last chapters i feel like watching hana yori dango (remake korean drama name: boys over flovers) and when she first come to minho's house and get tutor from him are like from a drama called playful kiss :) thats why i like ur story :)
sheerah6jaya
#6
Chapter 49: Aww! I love this story so much! Its so sweet and kinda like a mix of hot and adorable in a good way! =D
Dubulge
#7
Awww, what a nice end to this fanfic! Im so glad I read this
It was incredibly sweet and cute! :DDD

Daebak indeed~
Jimin_Sungjong #8
oh, I can't believe it is over...
DAEBAK
loved this fic, really!