CHAPTER 20: 2ND NIGHT ♥

Opposites Really Do Attract

-=No one's POV=-

Minho and Ji Hyeon fell asleep. But when it is 12 midnight. Ji Hyeon was awaked by a sound of Minho shivering. 

"Minho, are you okay?" Ji Hyeon touched his face. "Yah Minho, you're so cold.." Ji Hyeon said nervously. She don't know what to do again. She take off her jacket and covered it to Minho.

"Minho-yah! " Minho looked at her feeling so tired and sleepy.

"Make me warm...please..."Minho said weakly. Ji Hyeon let Minho sleep on her lap.

"O-okay." Ji Hyeon rubbed her hands and then placed it on his cheeks. She keeps on doing it until she fell asleep. 

 

 

-= Minho's Pov=- *Again.Kekekeke >:)*

I feel so soft. I woke up and I guess it is 1 am in the morning. I notice that I was sleeping in Ji Hyeons lap and holding her hands. I let go of her hands and lay her beside me. I used again my jacket as our blanket but it was to small*Reasons* that's why I get closer to her then hugged her. I can feel her warmth.

 

 

"mmm... Are you okay? " Ji Hyeon asked me but half asleep.

 

 

 

 

 

"I'm already okay."

 

 

 

 

 

"Oh? That's good." She slowly closed her eyes...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And wrap her arms around me.

 

 

 


During that night the boys (Jonghyun, Onew, Key and Taemin) is stalking at Minho and Ji Hyeon. They knew that the two fell on the cliff. But they have something in their mind that's why they didn't save them. Even though Onew is dying because of Jealousness. 

 

"Omg! They fall! " The boys headed to the cliff and take a peek on what happened.

"They seems fine, Come on ! Let's go." Jonghyun said while pulling Onew.

"Are you okay?! What if Ji Hyeon's hurt?!"Onew exclaimed. *Jelous Onew. :"> *

"Calm down Onew. As long as Minho is there, everything would be fine. " Taemin replied.

"That's right. And the cliff is not that high. I'm sure they will be fine. Let's get back here tomorrow morning. Its getting late." Key  looked at Onew and the smiled. 

 

"Come on. Let's go." The boys headed back to their own cabin.

 


 

-=Onew's POV=-

It was 1 o clock a.m when I sneaked out of our cabin. I guess I can't sleep because of what happened last night. I am afraid that Ji hyeon might get hurt or something. And staying with Minho is really hard for her because he hate him. *Don't worry Ji Hyeon. I'm going to save you.* I  thought to myself. I grabbed my flashflight and jacket. Put on my shoes then headed to the cliff.  

 

 

 

"Ji Hyeon- ah..." No response coming for her. I turn on the flashlight and searched for Ji Hyeon. At the corner I saw 2 person...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

hugging..

 

 

 

 

I din't know what to do. Should I wake them?. Or just ... I don't know. Then I realize that I'm going  back to my cabin then I felt something hot running down to my cheeks... 

 

 

 


AN! I'm sorry for hurting Onew. But I promise! Next time. It will be his Luck! :">

 

 

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#1
congratulations !
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#2
congratulations on the random feature!
Iminthezone #3
Congrats
Issdnn
#4
Chapter 49: I've watched Playful Kiss for soooo many times and I think this story is really similar to the drama. However, you add some "additional" chapters and storyline which is not a part of the movie. Overall, it's a cute story!♡ but I have a problem when I read per paragraph. Sometimes I got confused who is saying this and who is saying that. For example...,

The next day, they decided to grab some lunch at a famous restaurant in Hawaii. MinHo wore some white wife beater while Ji Hyeon, she wore a flower-designed dress and a denim shorts. “What do you like to eat?” She asked MinHo. “Hmm, basic morning food I guess. Bacon and eggs?” Ji Hyeon ooh-ed. The waiter walks in, holding a mango juice and serve it Ji Hyeon. (Chapt 48 ph 2)

Rather than that, I prefer...,

The next day, they decided to grab some lunch at a famous restaurant in Hawaii. MinHo wore some white wife beater while Ji Hyeon, she wore a flower-designed dress and a denim shorts.

“What do you like to eat?” She asked MinHo.

“Hmm, basic morning food I guess. Bacon and eggs?”

Ji Hyeon ooh-ed. The waiter walks in, holding a mango juice and serve it Ji Hyeon.

What do you think about it?:)

Andddd I think the plot is wayyyyy tooooo fast:(
I slightly got confused when Kyuhyun (then Baekhyun) suddenly come and leave the story like that lol

But however, I enjoy reading this story! Goodjob!♥
Meronew
#5
Chapter 48: I think you love watching asian dramas cause when i read your first chapter and last chapters i feel like watching hana yori dango (remake korean drama name: boys over flovers) and when she first come to minho's house and get tutor from him are like from a drama called playful kiss :) thats why i like ur story :)
sheerah6jaya
#6
Chapter 49: Aww! I love this story so much! Its so sweet and kinda like a mix of hot and adorable in a good way! =D
Dubulge
#7
Awww, what a nice end to this fanfic! Im so glad I read this
It was incredibly sweet and cute! :DDD

Daebak indeed~
Jimin_Sungjong #8
oh, I can't believe it is over...
DAEBAK
loved this fic, really!