Chapter 49: I've watched Playful Kiss for soooo many times and I think this story is really similar to the drama. However, you add some "additional" chapters and storyline which is not a part of the movie. Overall, it's a cute story!♡ but I have a problem when I read per paragraph. Sometimes I got confused who is saying this and who is saying that. For example...,
The next day, they decided to grab some lunch at a famous restaurant in Hawaii. MinHo wore some white wife beater while Ji Hyeon, she wore a flower-designed dress and a denim shorts. “What do you like to eat?” She asked MinHo. “Hmm, basic morning food I guess. Bacon and eggs?” Ji Hyeon ooh-ed. The waiter walks in, holding a mango juice and serve it Ji Hyeon. (Chapt 48 ph 2)
Rather than that, I prefer...,
The next day, they decided to grab some lunch at a famous restaurant in Hawaii. MinHo wore some white wife beater while Ji Hyeon, she wore a flower-designed dress and a denim shorts.
“What do you like to eat?” She asked MinHo.
“Hmm, basic morning food I guess. Bacon and eggs?”
Ji Hyeon ooh-ed. The waiter walks in, holding a mango juice and serve it Ji Hyeon.
What do you think about it?:)
Andddd I think the plot is wayyyyy tooooo fast:(
I slightly got confused when Kyuhyun (then Baekhyun) suddenly come and leave the story like that lol
But however, I enjoy reading this story! Goodjob!♥
Chapter 48: I think you love watching asian dramas cause when i read your first chapter and last chapters i feel like watching hana yori dango (remake korean drama name: boys over flovers) and when she first come to minho's house and get tutor from him are like from a drama called playful kiss :) thats why i like ur story :)
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