CHAPTER 27: IS HE REALLY OKAY?

Opposites Really Do Attract

-=Onew's Pov=-

So I run home really fast after buying those food. I opened quickly my laptop and log in. Looks like Ji Hyeon is not online. So I texted her. 

 

To: Ji Hyeon  ♥

From: OnewDubu

Hey! I heard from somebody that you slept at school?. Why? and with who?. Hahahahhaha! Sorry for the lame questions. 

 

 

So I texted her. I feel nervous in what she will going to reply. After 5 minutes she didn't reply. Maybe she fell asleep. 

So I plan to make myself busy. I wear my green sweater and grabbed my cellphone then place it on the right side of my pocket.  Then headed outside. I planned to go to the ice cream shop. So I walked alone. My hand is in my pocket. Many thoughts filling my mind. Then I asked for a sign...

 

"If I saw a red Mini cooper. Then the issue is real. I know it is rare to see those kinds of things" I said to myself.  Then I crossed my fingers. After a few seconds. I saw a red mini cooper. Awwww. ////3 Now, I am in the front of the ice cream parlor. I asked again for a sign. 

 

"If someone throws a bottle at me. Then-" 

"Owww! " Someone's throws the bottle at me! and look, its Taemin. Together with Key and Jonghyun.

 

"Hey guys! KEKEKEK" I greeted to them.

"Hey! " In unison they greeted back. "Come on, lets go to my dorm and have some fun." Taemin grabbed my arms and pulled me. 

 


In Taemin's dorm...

"Hey guys! Have you heard the news about Ji Hyeon and Minho sleeping together at school last night?!" Jonghyun exclaimed as he sips in his juice then place a handful of chips into his mouth. 

"Wooooooooh~! Our Minho is growing up. So proud of him." Key put on a fake sob and then laughed. "Yah! Guys. Looks like someone is jealous. " Taemin smirked then looked at Onew. Onew just laughed and drink his water. 

"But seriously Onew, are you jealous?" Key asked with a serious face. Onew just nodded then looked away. "Bwoah?! Sorry Onew." "It's okay." Then the atmosphere became serious. "Hey guys! Want to play?" Taemin broke the silence and looked at his XBOX 360  then looked at the boys. Then Onew, Key and Jonghyun smiled. 

After 2 hours of having fun, Onew received a message from Ji Hyeon. 

 

To: Onew 

From: Ji Hyeon

Hey! Sorry for the late reply. Kekeke. I fell asleep. About that incident, mmm. It's raining hard that time, we can't go home and we have no choice. Why you asked?. 

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To: Ji Hyeon

From: Onew

Nothing. Its just. I'm jealous because...you know. I'm just jealous don't mind me. Kekekeke. ^^" 

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To: Onew

From: Ji Hyeon

Jinjja?! Whyyy?! 

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To: Ji Hyeon

From: Onew

Maybe because.. I love you. :"> Hey can we meet today?. 

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To: Onew

From: Ji Hyeon

Bwoah?! Stopit Onew. Hhaahhaha! Sure. Meet me at the at the ice cream store. I'm already on my way. 

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"Hey guys! I have to go now. I have to meet someone." Onew grabbed her sweater and run outside. "Okay, take care." Key shouted.

 


AN:

 

My chapters are getting shorter and shorter! T.T Hey guys! Suggest some sweet moments. PLEASE! Hahhahahaah! God Bless. Please leave some comments. And Subscriptions are Love. ♥

 

I have a story. I was hanging with my friends earlier. I miss them so much. But I hate the part when they leave me alone even I have headaches. I wish there's someone who will send me home. But my expectations hurt  me. So I went home ALONE. //////3 O well. 

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HTTPSTAY
#1
congratulations !
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#2
congratulations on the random feature!
Iminthezone #3
Congrats
Issdnn
#4
Chapter 49: I've watched Playful Kiss for soooo many times and I think this story is really similar to the drama. However, you add some "additional" chapters and storyline which is not a part of the movie. Overall, it's a cute story!♡ but I have a problem when I read per paragraph. Sometimes I got confused who is saying this and who is saying that. For example...,

The next day, they decided to grab some lunch at a famous restaurant in Hawaii. MinHo wore some white wife beater while Ji Hyeon, she wore a flower-designed dress and a denim shorts. “What do you like to eat?” She asked MinHo. “Hmm, basic morning food I guess. Bacon and eggs?” Ji Hyeon ooh-ed. The waiter walks in, holding a mango juice and serve it Ji Hyeon. (Chapt 48 ph 2)

Rather than that, I prefer...,

The next day, they decided to grab some lunch at a famous restaurant in Hawaii. MinHo wore some white wife beater while Ji Hyeon, she wore a flower-designed dress and a denim shorts.

“What do you like to eat?” She asked MinHo.

“Hmm, basic morning food I guess. Bacon and eggs?”

Ji Hyeon ooh-ed. The waiter walks in, holding a mango juice and serve it Ji Hyeon.

What do you think about it?:)

Andddd I think the plot is wayyyyy tooooo fast:(
I slightly got confused when Kyuhyun (then Baekhyun) suddenly come and leave the story like that lol

But however, I enjoy reading this story! Goodjob!♥
Meronew
#5
Chapter 48: I think you love watching asian dramas cause when i read your first chapter and last chapters i feel like watching hana yori dango (remake korean drama name: boys over flovers) and when she first come to minho's house and get tutor from him are like from a drama called playful kiss :) thats why i like ur story :)
sheerah6jaya
#6
Chapter 49: Aww! I love this story so much! Its so sweet and kinda like a mix of hot and adorable in a good way! =D
Dubulge
#7
Awww, what a nice end to this fanfic! Im so glad I read this
It was incredibly sweet and cute! :DDD

Daebak indeed~
Jimin_Sungjong #8
oh, I can't believe it is over...
DAEBAK
loved this fic, really!