Chapter 14- Is it a deal?

Rescue Me

 

 
It was still a magnificent encounter. She met such a beautiful woman. No, it's not that she's going all crazy for Victoria. It was just that she the latter made an impact on her. Her presence, her beauty and her aura were all admirable for Amber.
 
"Hello? Earth to Amber? Hello?"
 
"Ahh yes oppa? What is it?"
 
"I was asking how was your client talk yesterday? Were you able to make a deal?"
 
"Ahh. Sadly no, but I have this feeling she will call anytime soon."
 
"I see. Well, how did it go? What happened?"
 
"Well she checked out my store. She said she really liked the way it was laid out. The presentation,segregation of items and others. To be honest I was really starstruck with her. She was incredibly beautiful."
 
"But you are beautiful too Amber."
 
"Thanks oppa. But seriously, she is like the epitomy of beauty. You should've seen her. Also, we're both from foreign lands so I can somewhat relate to her."
 
"Really? How were you able to say so?"
 
"Her name. It definitely doesn't sound Korean. I call her Victoria but apparently her real name is Song Qien."
 
"Song Qien?"
 
"Yeah. It sounds very Chinese to me.."
 
"Song Qien.." Key kept murmuring the name.
 
"Oppa, why? What's wrong?"
 
"Nothing, it's just her name sounds so familiar.. It's like I've heard it before."
 
"Maybe you saw it in an ad or something? Forget about it."
 
"Yeah.. I guess so."
 
Amber and Key definitely had their pep talk with each other that day. But it was cut short since Amber received a phone call. It was from Victoria.
 
"Woah. Oppa, I've got to go. Victoria texted me and asked if we could meet. She said bring paperwork.."
 
"Really? Well go. I wouldn't want to ruin your chance of closing in on a deal. Good luck."
 
"Thanks oppa. Bye!"
 
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It was Key's day off. He just went straight home since he doesn't really have anything better to do. However, the name of Amber's new client still bothered him.
 
"Halmeoni, I'm home."
 
"Welcome back Kibum. So, how is Amber?"
 
"She's doing great. Halmeoni do you know any Chinese people?"
 
"None really. Why?"
 
"Song Qien, it sounds really familiar. It really seems that I've heard it before."
 
"Maybe it's just your imagination. Forget and stop thinking about it dear.."
 
Key still couldn't take his mind off the name. He mumbled and thought hard. Until his eyes widened. It was as if he was enlightened with something. 
 
"That's it...But why?"
 
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Amber came to meet Victoria as fast as she could.
 
"I'm sorry. I always arrive late for our meetings."
 
"Please don't apologize. It's no big."
 
"I'm really interested in your business Amber."
 
"Thanks. I brought in some papers, I was just wondering what product you would put in our store? I think it would be best for us to be able to talk asap on how we will present the product to our target market."
 
"Product?"
 
"Ahh, yeah?"
 
"Ohh. Sorry, I lost you there. About that.. I want to buy your business."
 
"Products? Well we could.."
 
"No Amber, I want to buy your business. I want to be its new owner. I want the title basically.."
 
"Excuse me?"
 
"You heard me. I want to buy your business."
 
"But Victoria, it's not for sale."
 
"Even though I would offer you 750 million Won for it?"
 
Amber was surprised on how large the sum of money Victoria was willing to offer.
 
"Amber how much did you invest into your business?"
 
"Ahh, well.. Around 5 million won."
 
"If you sell me your business you will definitely gain an incredible profit, am I right?"
 
"Well yeah.."
 
"Think about it. You could start anew with the money I'm offering you.."
 
Amber thought long hard. She had a firm decision and she knew she wouldn't regret it.."
 
"I've put effort, blood, time and love on my business. Seeing it come to life and become successful. To be honest, the money you have offered me. It's blindind and tempting.. But I'm sorry. I can't sell my business. I can't let it go. Please forgive me." Amber bowed.
 
Victoria had this smirk on her face.
 
"That's too bad. If that is case I don't think I can still make a deal with you."
 
"I'm sorry. But thank you.."
 
Victoria then stood up. "I've got the bill. Bye Amber."
 
Amber didn't really reply. She felt kind of shy for refusing Victoria but she wasn't willing to give something up she worked hard for so long. Money can't match the happiness she feels everytime she's at her store and seeing how successful it has become.
 
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"I was kind of expecting it. But still I'm disappointed"
 
"She seems firm. But why did you offer her such a big sum?"
 
"I hoped you wouldn't mind it Sir since it's easy for us to.."
 
"Enough. Argh. You can go. I'll think of something."
 
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"Oppa, can we meet?"
 
Amber texted Key. The lad just had this feeling that something was up. He immediately went to Amber's place to see how the girl was doing.
 
"How was it?"
 
The girl just shook her head.
 
"Im really sorry. Aghh. It's their loss."
 
"Yeah.. I guess you're right."
 
Key hugged Amber trying to comfort her. The girl hugged back but the next statement she uttered surprised Key.
 
"She offered me 750 million won to buy the business."
 
"Mmwo??! Are you serious?"
 
"Do I look like I'm joking?"
 
"No. But that money.. It's insanely large."
.
"I know. Honestly speaking I was really blinded by it but I didn't want to give up my business just because
of money."
 
"How come she offered that much?"
 
"I don't really know. It got me wondering too actually. My business isn't really the biggest in Seoul yet she offered such a large amount.. It boggles me."
 
"Well you should just forget it. I need to go home. Would you be okay?"
 
"yeah. Thanks for coming over urgently."
 
"Bye. I love you Amber."
 
"I love you too Key.."
 
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Key arrived home early. He was still stuck at the thought 750 million won was offered to Amber.. He just stared at the wall figuring out why they'd be investing so much. He only snap out of it when his cellphone ringed.
 
"Yeobosaeyo?"
 
"....."
 
"Hello? Who is this?"
 
"..."
 
Key hung the phone.
 
"Who was that?"
 
He checked the logs but no number displayed. He just brushed it off.
 
"Maybe just a prank call. Aghh. I've got to go to sleep. I still have work tomorrow."
 
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"So it's still the same? I see. Very well. This would be very interesting.."
 
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Hello to all my readers and subscribers!
 
How did you find this chapter? Amber wasn't able to close the deal. But I just had to not let her 
give up her business. It's like giving up someone you still love so much though something much better
is right in front of you. Any thoughts? Thanks for reading and stay tuned.
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Kyoko99
#1
Chapter 45: I have my finals only 15days ahead and here i'm reading keyber stories and wasting my precious study hours ...but the thing is I dont regret it with this piece ...i was reading it silently & it was dabaek :D ^^
taipanda #2
Chapter 44: Lo lei todo xD me gusto... no se si nana existira pero la odio xD keyber y myungber <3
ILoveShineeEffects #3
Chapter 1: The man who broke up with Amber was Henry?
DjTinkDome #4
Chapter 45: Loved this story!!! I had fun reading it. I've also read your other five and they are really good. Keep up the good work.
Emery101
#5
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moyamoyo #6
Chapter 45: Hi me again! Hahaahaa i love all your fics really, this one is as awesome as else. I would like to thanks you to make amazing keyber fics, i have no idea what to say, i'm really grateful hahaha thanks for the awesome fic authornim ♡ ♡ ♡
Winry84 #7
I very love your story, I think it's the best fiction that I read from KeyBer pairing :D Continue like this ! (Sorry for my bad english)
TheonLaertes #8
finish read this story in one day.. really love it~♡
Ilonahaku #9
@retrolovemadness
I was really happy with the epilogue, so I showed my happiness in the comments. ;) Thank you very much for your kind words, I am thankful, too. ♥

There were many sweet moments, therefore I was so ecstatic after reading the epilogue! :D I like cheesiness, but I think it wasn´t too cheesy. ;) It was a happy ending, and happy endings can be very sweet, right? :)

Awww, glad to know that they are married. I would like to know how their wedding turned out, but I am already satisfied with the events which you revealed after they met. :D
Thanks for explaining the meaning behind "yeobo", I know these words just from dramas. :)

Aww, I would like to spend some time in a rest house, too! :D Haha, right, Key is rich, so he can afford something like that. XD

I feel really good, that everyone had a happy ending. ^^
And I am really glad that the you are satisfied with the epilogue, too! :D It is great that it turned out better than you expected. :D

I usually don´t have favourite quotes from fanfics, but the lines, which I highlighted in the previous comment, really grabbed my heart. :D

Haha, no need to bow in gratitude! I am grateful that you spent your time on writing this story. ;) And you are more than welcome! ;)
retrolovemadness #10
@Ilonahaku I'm actually really happy with your comments. You're one of the most enthusiastic readers I've had and I'm really thankful. :)There were a lot of "sweet" moments at the epilogue. Actually, while reading I said to myself, "Isn't it a bit too cheesy?" But yeah. I like it that way.. Yeah! They're already married in case you're wondering.. "Yeobo" is more of a "honey" or "darling" term. They formally address husband and wife as nampyeon and jagiya.. I just found it better to have Key call Amber yeobo.. :)

I guess the scene was like a rest house? They're at a secluded place or something for the family and closest friends to enjoy? Key is rich so he can pretty much rent/buy one. XD Anyways, it's something like that.. Which why Amber was "relaxed".

I wanted to wish everyone a happy ending so I guess it was fitting to give them one.

The epilogue turned out to be better than I expected actually..

Again, thank you. It really means a lot that you like.. And to think you actually had a quote you really liked. If I could only see you in person, I would've bowed in gratitude. Thank you so much! :D