Two Drags Kissing
The Casting Director Review Shop (Busy/Closed/Hiatus)Two Drags Kissing by suzyelf
Your title is simple and pretty much sums up the story itself, though I have no idea what 'drags' mean but later on, you define the definition with a dialogue which I thought was pretty welled organized.
Summary/Description - 4/5
It was also welled organized to kind of sums up the whole title and the story. One dialogue and a curious state of what Jaehwan had done to become a 'drag queen.' These statment and quote was like the direct jackpot to me since you want readers to be curious of what you wrote and what you are going to write.
Story Layout*- 4/5
There are so many descriptions between settings and characters that made your writing style a heads up. To me, almost all of paragraph is plotted with conflicts in between the 'drag queen' and the life Jaehwan wanted. You're more of the 'showing instead of telling' style. Readers need imagination to be interests in stories you basically put that in your story.
Grammar/Spelling - 18/20
There only a few minor erros about comams and where to put them. I understand your mistakes since commas are the most known punctuation errors people have. But you don't want readers to stop every second because of the comma. That could ruint the flow and the mood in the story.
Story Plot/Flow/Description - 26/30
I honestly couldn't find the because I pretty much guessed what's going to happen next. Thought, tha
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