The Price of a Prince
The Casting Director Review Shop (Busy/Closed/Hiatus)The Price of a Prince by suzyelf
Story Title - 3 of 5
Perhaps it's not the most unique title, but it is one of those tasteful titles that tempt potential readers to click onto the link. At first glance, I assume this is a story about a guy who seems to have a glamorous life in the eyes of everybody, but only he knows about the pains and the inconveniences behind such life. However, it's not exactly fitting to the story since even though the girls certainly think of Hyuk as a prince, the guys probably don't...especially knowing that he's Sungjae's target of bullying.
Description/Foreword - 3 of 5
Love the sarcastic summary. The sarcasm is spotted on (not too sarcastic that some readers didn't get it). However, it's misleading in the way that people would have thought that this is a fantasy type of story. Please make it easier for the majority of the population to understand what they will get themselves into. The summary is not exactly a place for "heavy" figuarative devices. Though, I still love the sarcasm. You did not commit any sin with the foreword either.
Story Layout - 5 of 5
Nice, readable fonts. Simple & effective poster that fits the story.
Grammar/Spelling - 20 of 20
To be honest, nothing glaring came to my attention. Just a bit of nitpicking though to make the writing even more perfect:
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