3rd Night, 3:37 pm

MidNightmare

Just so people can understand, because I don't think I WILL explain in the story. This is all a dream that ------- is having after being knocked out by Yunho. She is having crazy hallucinations because when she was hit by the dart and... the rest would be spoiling the next chapter. And when ------ is back with Jaejoong, time has lapsed six hours, so it's not strange that it is three in the afternoon.

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3:37 pm

You stared at Jaejoong with disbelief. Nothing he was saying made sense. Why had he randomly attacked you? Jaejoong would never do that to you. Because it was a nightmare. Jaejoong grinned evilly at you. The illusionary Jaejoong had something planned to hurt you. Something that would destroy in some way. He was using ed up logic to mess with you. Slowly, you started to believe everything he was saying.

“Every time you kill someone, I have to punish you. Be it by breaking your legs or taking away a loved one, I will hurt you.” You nodded, understanding that you had been doing something wrong. You made a silent vow to stop hurting people randomly and only defend when attacked. Jaejoong’s voice brainwashed you to follow his desires. Violence was wrong. His smile deepened and he ruffled your hair. “Good girl.” He stood up abruptly and let his eyes widen with delight. “They’re here.” You swiveled your head and stared at the rest of the group.

Everyone wore an expression of mourning. Who died? Amara walked up to Jaejoong and hung her head low. “Take me.” Jaejoong nodded with disgusting lust and pulled something out of his bag. You had searched through it before but you hadn’t seen that thing. You trembled as you remembered your bad experience with it. Jaejoong held a handgun up, letting the streetlights shine on it to glimmer. Her held the gun up to Amara’s chest and put his finger on the trigger. She stared at you with remorse. “Why did you have to kill me Unnie?” Then Jaejoong shot her dead center. You stared in horror as the sound ripped through the air. Amara crumpled with blood spilling from her.

Jaejoong held the gun up to show his pleasure. He looked at you with affection, cruel, sadistic affection. “Every hour I will kill another to punish you for your bad deeds. I will kill them with your lust, using the weapon that haunts you the most. This is your punishment.

4:37 pm

Yoochun stepped forward and broke the hour long silence that had filled the air. He stepped on Amara’s dead arm and stood in front of Jaejoong. He bore his eyes at you, drowning you in grief. “------, I had really found you interesting, back when you were sane.” Jaejoong shot him without any hesitation. Yoochun fell onto Amara’s body with a puddle forming under his head. His was lying on his stomach. Jaejoong took a step to him and slammed his foot down. He continuously pounded Yoochun’s back, hoping to break him. His laughter filled the silence that you begged to return.

5:37 pm

“Aha ha ha ha ha ha ha!” Jaejoong had stopped kicking Yoochun, but his laughter still rang in the air. Jaejoong and Yunho stood at the same time. Jaejoong gave another satisfying kick to Yoochun before pulling out the gun again. Yunho let his puppy dog eyes crush you. Did he want you to save him? You had lost the will to move. Jaejoong was right, you needed to be punished. You had been a bad girl.

Yunho’s husky voice made you cringe. “You are so ing mad.” Jaejoong put the gun into his mouth so he couldn’t speak anymore. Yunho closed his eyes and waited for his end to come. Jaejoong started to giggle again and pecked him on the cheek with a gentle mocking kiss before blasting it off. Yunho fell backwards with his jaw completely gone.

6:37 pm

You gazed blankly at the growing pile of bodies. You were almost sure that the punishment was soon to be over. You only had memory of killing two people. Yunho must have been a warning. You didn’t know what Jaejoong was whistling for. He shouldn’t have any need to kill anymore. But his kept whistling, and they kept grimacing. In the back of your mind, you knew they were all going to die. Haruka grudgingly took her place for her execution. Jaejoong sat on a box filled with trash and lazily raised the gun. The art of killing had started to bore him. He wanted it to be interesting again. He locked eyes with Haruka and she squealed before nodding. She opened and started to dance and sing. “I am getting killed because you couldn’t understand the value of human life. You killed a girl, a Russian, and you killed Amara. You like to kill women off like Jack the ripper. What do you have against us --------? I am getting killed because you are HEARTLESS.” Haruka’s voice cracked as she sang the last notes of her rant and stopped dancing.

Jaejoong clapped his hands along with her ‘fun’ dance, but when she stopped singing his anger rose. He pulled out the gun and shot her before she had a chance to regain her composure. She gasped and fell into Yunho’s lap, her eyes watering with tears and blood.

7:37 pm

Jaejoong was determined to pick them off until none were left standing. You had closed your eyes, and with equal determination, bet you wouldn’t open them until the next hour. You didn’t want to see them lying there. Memories of the first nightmare popped up and you saw them dead the first time. When you opened your eyes, you knew that their corpses would be there too. You heard rustling and stupidly opened your eyes. Junsu had sacrificed himself next. He gave you a little shriek in dolphin tongue. “It is dangerous to know you.” Jaejoong pushed Junsu back to give him some space.

Jaejoong swung his arms in a rehearsed manner, like he had spent the last hour practicing. He spun around and faced Junsu and flicked the gun as it let out its deadly bullet. Junsu’s body folded and he was lying motionless next to the growing pile. You blinked away tears before closing your eyes. It was and unwanted sight.

8:37 pm

Dae caressed your face with her hand. Her touch was gentle and loving. Your eyes met and her stare intensified. She clutched your chin and dug her nails into you. “I wanted my death to be romantic.” She spat into your face before rising. Her back was to Jaejoong. He lifted the gun with animosity and greedily let it loose. You flailed as her dead body lumped onto you. She was heavy and you couldn’t move her. You were too weak and could only move one arm.

Jaejoong kicked her off of you and hit you in the process. He had hit your face again. Jaejoong dug through his bag looking for something. He pulled out a six copper bullets and loaded them into the gun. “It has such a low supply.” He clicked the gun closed and spun it around. He was having fun again.

9:37 pm

Even with his rumbling stomach he graciously took his place. As another grumble came he bit into his lip. “I would have been eating right now if it wasn’t for you.” He growled at you as Jaejoong twirled the gun in his hand. He was growing impatient at every passing hour. He wanted to just shoot every single person left standing and go home. He was growing tired. How long had he been awake for? He quickly pulled the trigger, but he let his frustration guide him. He aimed for Changmin’s stomach.

He wasn’t going to die immediately; he was going to suffer, slowly bleeding to death. It would be long excruciating death. You clamped your ears closed, not wanting to hear his groans of pain. He whimpered as time passed on, then he stopped moving. His breath was no longer making you shiver with guilt. You bit your lip and cried. He had died.

10:37 pm

Jaejoong Erika in front of the dead bodies and examined her. He smiled and his lips. He pulled the gun up and shot her. Your eyes widened. Jaejoong had shot Erika in the knee. Erika hobbled to sit on the corpses, gross. She cursed him. “Why do you have to make my death so much worse?” Then she directed her anger at you. “If you had only been a pleasant person!” Jaejoong shot her again, in the shoulder. “Oh !”

“Shut up, did I say you could talk? I really detest you Erika. You always do stupid things and don’t think things through. You are getting your punishment too. Just like Amara was killed first because she didn’t help Junsu, like Changmin’s slow death because he was with ------- before the second nightmare, you will get two extra shots because you killed Changmin and Haruka. I really hate you.” He raised the gun again, aiming for her heart. He took his time, teasing her and letting her soak in the pain. He ended her.

11:37 pm

You had grown to expect it. After his fourth kill, you knew how it was going to end. Jaejoong sat in front of you with the gun in his lap. When the time finally came he pulled the gun up and pointed it at your head. You cringed; he was finally doing it. Jaejoong smiled before turning the gun and placing it on his temple. “I hope you learned your lesson. Your final assignment is to finish yourself off.” You closed your eyes when you heard the bang. You opened them to see the gun still partially in his hand. You didn’t want to look at his head because you knew it would be burned and destroyed. With the tears leaking into your mouth, you put the gun under your chin. With the last bullet, you let everything go.

11:38 pm

“I swear if she screams again I am going to stuff Jaejoong’s tail in !”

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Topu-Da
#1
Its been 5 years and im gonna read it again
Vampirexy192
#2
Chapter 55: Now I can relate on why you hate this story at first. XD To be honest, at first, I literally had no interest in reading this story. Maybe it was the fact that it was confusing with many characters in the story which I got annoyed caused I was confused with the different characters' point of views Haha and have to re-read again in order to understand what this story trying to imply. I almost wanted to give up after reading a few chapters like 5? But then I didn't, instead I continued on reading it. Somehow I was so immersed to it and I read non-stop until the halfway of the story. It was really getting intriguing and riveting my attention. Which is good that you finally grabbed my attention in this story and I love the ending so much. <3 It was such a plot twist! :D Damn I love those twisted story. There were not many cliches in this story which I was very satisfied hahaha. Anyway excellent work in working hard to write this story (^_^)b You did a great job <33
jiyungs_wife
#3
Chapter 55: Omg !! I dont know what to say .. I am really speachless .. I just finished the ff but I am so confused! Is she crazy and made all that up .. or is she right and when you die you forget everything .. I really didnt expect this .. its just so .. so .. like I said I am speachless .. but I can say that I did not read anything like this before .. I really love it .. thank you so much author-nim
linhlady87
#4
Chapter 10: Hi! I'm a new reader. I really like the story so far and I can't help but to mention how it really reminds me of the horror movie SAW. If this story isn't based on or inspired by SAW.. than WOW *DEJA VU*. Reading it is one thing but SEEING IT is really crucial. I remember feeling frustation and anger for the characters in the movie that went through. Being in a *literally* nightmare of horror, knowing the fact that you're being controlled and somebody is playing with you as if you are a muppet is frustating and terrifing. I really felt heartbreaking. SAW is really great by the way. It's not just a horror movie with blood splashing and people screaming (although there is A LOT of that) but the story behind is probably the best ''horror movie'' story so far (that I know of). Anyway good good story!
teresaginny
#5
I am reading this AGAIN!!! well, just so you know... hahaha... i was suddenly think about this story and rushed here to read it... :)
thanks for the great story, and don't ever say you hate this story!!!! >_<
XxBlackBeat #6
Chapter 55: Holy cheese.... this is probably the most interesting fanfic I've EVER READ OH GOD OTL I CANT BELIEVE I READ THIS IN ONE DAY LOL. OKAY OKAY. I LOVE YOU NOW DEVILAUGH SERIOUSLY... ㅠ.ㅠ ♥ Can we get married now? No? Okay... still love the story ↖(^▽^)↗
omgitsan
#7
Chapter 55: wow, this story was a pleasure to read. definitely one of my favorites in a long time. it was sadistic and violent and it felt almost real lol :D congrats on the random feature too!
Janeyxsdg
#8
Congrats on the Random Feature^^
catch_me #9
Congrats! This looks so interesting!
whiteheron
#10
Congrats on being featured~ (LOL if it wasn't an OC character, I might read it >< Sorry xD) But still I bet this is pretty great anyway~